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1Fenhei's Starter Abilities Empty Fenhei's Starter Abilities on 09/09/17, 10:19 pm

Fenhei

Fenhei
D-Tier
D-Tier
Begin the Hunt
Tier: D-Tie
Class: Beast Tamer
Type: Defense
Range: Long
Requirements/Drawbacks: Argos must be able to hear her voice.
Scaling:Defense Increase
Sustain: 0
Cool Down:0
Cost: 10 Stamina

    Description: Calls upon the Beast to guard her person as his size makes him an intimidating guard. Willing to block any attack in front of his tamer using his body as a living shield.


 Pounce

Tier: D-Tier
Class: Beast Tamer
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Requirements/Drawbacks: Beast must be in close range to target. As well as able to hear Fenhei's voice.
Scaling: Damage Increase
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: One Turn
Cost: 10 Stamina

    Description: Argos finally has chosen a target and scuttles over into attack range before springing forward with fangs flashing to rend open any unprotected flesh he can reach. Dealing D-Tier Damage.



Dripping Fangs
Tier: D-Tier
Class: Beast Tamer
Type:Supplementary
Range:Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: The venom will be visibly dripping making targets aware of it. The target must have an open wound. Must be able to hear Fenhei's voice.
Scaling: More Status Effects
Sustain: 1 Turn
Cool Down: Two Turns
Cost: 10 Stamina

    Description: The beast injects its venom into the target's open wound. The venom affects the surrounded muscles of the wound as the person looses sensation in the limb. Effects last for a single turn.


 Eye See You

Tier: D-Tier
Class: Beast Tamer
Type: Defensive
Range: Long
Requirements/Drawbacks: Thorax Eye must be undamaged. Attack must come from behind.
Scaling: Higher Defense
Sustain:0
Cool Down: Two Turns.
Cost: 10 Stamina

    Description: The Thorax Eye dilates as it sees an incoming attack taking the brunt of the damage to protect it's remaining body by sacrificing it's eye. The gelatinous orb is much less valuable compared to the muscles of the spider's body.  


Restraint
Tier: D-Tier
Class: Beast Tamer
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Requirements/Drawbacks:Leaves himself open for other targets. Stronger opponents will be able to move him.
Scaling: Status Increase
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: One Turn
Cost: 10 Stamina
Description: Physically launches himself at a target in an attempt to restrain them down through sheer mass alone by dropping his full body on the opponent and using his eight legs to pin down opponent's limbs.



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2Fenhei's Starter Abilities Empty Re: Fenhei's Starter Abilities on 10/09/17, 03:59 pm

Rima Fahim

Rima Fahim
A-Tier
A-Tier
Begin the Hunt - I have no idea what this ability is supposed to do tbh. Is it a sort of guard command? If so, you’re gonna need to be a bit more specific, while also going off some realism. How big is your spider? Is it going to be able to block anything? Or is it too small. Stuff like that.

Pounce - D-Tier abilities will only do D-Tier damage. Unless you scale it with damage, of course. I’d highly suggest scaling this ability with damage, not range. You don’t need range on an ability that is considered melee anyways. If they’re in range to attack icly, you can use the ability. Projectiles on the other hand, they need set ranges.

Dripping Fangs - It’s fine to have this ability reduce someone's “accuracy”, but you need to look at it on a more realistic level, not as an RPG. In what way does this affect their accuracy? Do it make their body shiver? Or maybe it numbs the limb that it’s injected into.

Eye See You - I’m confused, is this an ability that protects your spider’s eye?

Shudder - This whole “crust” thing you’ve had going on for these last two abilities, I think you’d need to register them as a new trait for the beast.


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3Fenhei's Starter Abilities Empty Re: Fenhei's Starter Abilities on 10/09/17, 04:26 pm

Fenhei

Fenhei
D-Tier
D-Tier
Edits Made!

4Fenhei's Starter Abilities Empty Re: Fenhei's Starter Abilities on 10/09/17, 09:58 pm

Merrze

Merrze
A-Tier
A-Tier
Begin the Hunt: It doesn't really explain how he guards you, does he walk in front of you? Or does it use or create something to block it.

Eye see you: So based of the wording, the spider blocks an attack with its Thorax if it comes from the back, is that correct?

Restraint: You forgot a scaling.


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5Fenhei's Starter Abilities Empty Re: Fenhei's Starter Abilities on 10/09/17, 10:01 pm

Fenhei

Fenhei
D-Tier
D-Tier
Edits Made.

As for your second comment, Yes. It uses the Eye to protect itself from behind.

6Fenhei's Starter Abilities Empty Re: Fenhei's Starter Abilities on 10/09/17, 10:09 pm

Merrze

Merrze
A-Tier
A-Tier
Restraint: Is it holding them down by pinning them? Just wanted clarification. Besides that everything looks good. Its generally good for your abilities to be clear so that it doesn't cause arguments.


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7Fenhei's Starter Abilities Empty Re: Fenhei's Starter Abilities on 10/09/17, 10:16 pm

Fenhei

Fenhei
D-Tier
D-Tier
Good point on that. Edited, need to remember to be specific lol

8Fenhei's Starter Abilities Empty Re: Fenhei's Starter Abilities on 10/09/17, 10:33 pm

Merrze

Merrze
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[center][b]Begin the Hunt[/b][/center]
Tier: D-Tie
Class: Beast Tamer
Type: Defense
Range: Long
Requirements/Drawbacks: Argos must be able to hear her voice.
Scaling:Defense Increase
Sustain: 0
Cool Down:0
Cost: 10 Stamina
[list]
Description: Calls upon the Beast to guard her person as his size makes him an intimidating guard. Willing to block any attack in front of his tamer using his body as a living shield.[/list]

[center][b] Pounce [/b][/center]

Tier: D-Tier
Class: Beast Tamer
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Requirements/Drawbacks: Beast must be in close range to target. As well as able to hear Fenhei's voice.
Scaling: Damage Increase
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: One Turn
Cost: 10 Stamina
[list]
Description: Argos finally has chosen a target and scuttles over into attack range before springing forward with fangs flashing to rend open any unprotected flesh he can reach. Dealing D-Tier Damage. [/list]


[center][b]Dripping Fangs [/b] [/center]
Tier: D-Tier
Class: Beast Tamer
Type:Supplementary
Range:Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: The venom will be visibly dripping making targets aware of it. The target must have an open wound. Must be able to hear Fenhei's voice.
Scaling: More Status Effects
Sustain: 1 Turn
Cool Down: Two Turns
Cost: 10 Stamina
[list]
Description: The beast injects its venom into the target's open wound. The venom affects the surrounded muscles of the wound as the person looses sensation in the limb. Effects last for a single turn. [/list]

[center][b] Eye See You [/b][/center]

Tier: D-Tier
Class: Beast Tamer
Type: Defensive
Range: Long
Requirements/Drawbacks: Thorax Eye must be undamaged. Attack must come from behind.
Scaling: Higher Defense
Sustain:0
Cool Down: Two Turns.
Cost: 10 Stamina
[list]
Description: The Thorax Eye dilates as it sees an incoming attack taking the brunt of the damage to protect it's remaining body by sacrificing it's eye. The gelatinous orb is much less valuable compared to the muscles of the spider's body.  [/list]

[center][b]Restraint[/b] [/center]
Tier: D-Tier
Class: Beast Tamer
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Requirements/Drawbacks:Leaves himself open for other targets. Stronger opponents will be able to move him.
Scaling: Status Increase
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: One Turn
Cost: 10 Stamina
Description: Physically launches himself at a target in an attempt to restrain them down through sheer mass alone by dropping his full body on the opponent and using his eight legs to pin down opponent's limbs.


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