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1Starter Abilities Empty Starter Abilities on 07/01/18, 05:02 am

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Caustic Loogie
Tier: D-tier
Class: Body Manipulator
Type: Offensive
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Tavetti is required to suck the mucous from his nostrils, then hock a loogie with it.
Scaling: Damage
Sustain: 0
Cooldown: 1
Cost: 10 Stamina | 5 Sustain
Description:

    Taavetti upchucks an ball of saliva mix his stomach acids, spitting it forward 5 meters. The saliva upon contact with anything, bursts as if it was a bubble scattering across surfaces delivering D-tier acidic burns.


Bastet Armor
Tier: D-tier
Class: Body Manipulator
Type: Defensive
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Taavetti must bite a hole into his thumb on arms to defend with.
Scaling: Duration  
Sustain: 0
Cooldown: 1
Cost: 10 Stamina | 5 Sustain
Description:

  • Taavettis blows airs into the hole in his thumb, instantly inflating his fat tissues to the surface of his skin on his arms. Making the fat tissue to feel like harden rubber to absorb, and cushion against blunt damage.
  • Having C-tier Item Durability, meaning 1 B-tier ability damage would shatter it, or 2 C-tier ability damage would. If sustained, the inflation last 2 post.


Fleish
Tier: D-tier
Class: Body Manipulator
Type: Supplementary
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Taavetti is required to bite a whole into his tongue. It takes time to build the bomb, but it provides an element of surprises.
Sustain: 0
Cooldown: 1
Cost: 10 Stamina | 5 Sustain
Description:

    Taavetti uses his tongue, and stomach in combined efforts in making a flesh bomb of stomach gases. Building up excess flesh making a ball in his mouth, channeling gases from his stomach through a hole in his tongue. He can store it in his mouth for 2 post. Spitting it 5 meters away from himself, it spreads, and rises in a cone 3 meters wide, and 5 meters long. Causing a nausea effect of gastroenteritis (stomach infection) for 1 Post to anyone caught inside the gases.  


Slippery Slope
Tier: D-tier
Class: Body Manipulator
Type: Supplementary
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Taavetti is required to pump sweat from his from his legs by jogging.
Scaling: Range
Sustain: 0
Cooldown: 1
Cost: 10 Stamina | 5 Sustain
Description:

    Taavetti  produces slimy thick sweat on his feet, and toes. Allowing him to slide across the surfaces for 3 meters in any directions.


Pneumonia
Tier: C-tier
Class: Body Manipulator
Type: Offensive
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Taavetti is required to take a hard snuffle opening pores in his nose. A special clear oil runs out his nose drying, and coats his mucus making them dried, and explosive.
Scaling: Hits
Sustain: 0
Cooldown: 2
Cost: 20 Stamina | 10 Sustain
Description:

    Taavetti digs dried mucus out of his nose and flicks it 5 meters at the opponent. The snot explodes on impact point creating C-tier explosive damage, and blast radius of 3 meters.



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2Starter Abilities Empty Re: Starter Abilities on 07/01/18, 01:01 pm

Amaya

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Caustic Loogie: Your drawback doesn't make sense with your ability. I would suggest "Tavetti must suck the mucous from his nostrils, then hock a loogie with it." Burping has nothing to so with the biological process of hocking a loogie.

There's also no indication of why the spit is acidic. Are you manipulating your salivary glands to produce an acid?

Bastet Armor: This ability can't be medium. Detail how long it takes the bones to form please.

Fleish: You can't move it through your body. It needs to be launched from your mouth. The ball will only last two posts before it disolves in your maw. The cone can be 3m wide by 5m long. You need to detail what the nausea does as an effect.

Slippery Slope: Does not have an acceptable drawback.

Pneumonia: A snuffle won't make your mucous explosive. Your body needs to produce some kind of chemical compound to create that reaction.


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3Starter Abilities Empty Re: Starter Abilities on 07/01/18, 04:21 pm

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Edited.

For Caustic Loogie, It was already said I've gotten the acid properties from my stomach acids.

For Bastet Armor, I don't understand why I need to 'detail how long it takes for them to form'. That seems like flavor text, I could just add during the IC thread.

4Starter Abilities Empty Re: Starter Abilities on 07/01/18, 07:21 pm

Amaya

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I missed that on loogie.

For Bastet Armor, as inconsequential as that seems, it's the difference between me being able to hit you with an A-tier spell, and you being able to move before I do. You can't adjust that timer on the fly, as that's far too strong a fluff to leave out of the ability description.


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5Starter Abilities Empty Re: Starter Abilities on 07/01/18, 08:00 pm

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I essentially changed Bastet Armor with a Fat Tissues Defense.

6Starter Abilities Empty Re: Starter Abilities on 08/01/18, 03:36 pm

Amaya

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S'all gucci b

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[center][b]Caustic Loogie[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D-tier
[b]Class:[/b] Body Manipulator
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Tavetti is required to suck the mucous from his nostrils, then hock a loogie with it.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 1
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina | 5 Sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Taavetti upchucks an ball of saliva mix his stomach acids, spitting it forward 5 meters. The saliva upon contact with anything, bursts as if it was a bubble scattering across surfaces delivering D-tier acidic burns.[/list]

[center][b]Bastet Armor [/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D-tier
[b]Class:[/b] Body Manipulator
[b]Type:[/b] Defensive
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Taavetti must bite a hole into his thumb on arms to defend with.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Duration  
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 1
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina | 5 Sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
[*]Taavettis blows airs into the hole in his thumb, instantly inflating his fat tissues to the surface of his skin on his arms. Making the fat tissue to feel like harden rubber to absorb, and cushion against blunt damage.
[*]Having C-tier Item Durability, meaning 1 B-tier ability damage would shatter it, or 2 C-tier ability damage would. If sustained, the inflation last 2 post.
[/list]

[center][b]Fleish[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D-tier
[b]Class:[/b] Body Manipulator
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Taavetti is required to bite a whole into his tongue. It takes time to build the bomb, but it provides an element of surprises.
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 1
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina | 5 Sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Taavetti uses his tongue, and stomach in combined efforts in making a flesh bomb of stomach gases. Building up excess flesh making a ball in his mouth, channeling gases from his stomach through a hole in his tongue. He can store it in his mouth for 2 post. Spitting it 5 meters away from himself, it spreads, and rises in a cone 3 meters wide, and 5 meters long. Causing a nausea effect of gastroenteritis (stomach infection) for 1 Post to anyone caught inside the gases.   [/list]

[center][b]Slippery Slope[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D-tier
[b]Class:[/b] Body Manipulator
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Taavetti is required to pump sweat from his from his legs by jogging.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Range
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 1
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina | 5 Sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Taavetti  produces slimy thick sweat on his feet, and toes. Allowing him to slide across the surfaces for 3 meters in any directions. [/list]

[center][b]Pneumonia[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C-tier
[b]Class:[/b] Body Manipulator
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Taavetti is required to take a hard snuffle opening pores in his nose. A special clear oil runs out his nose drying, and coats his mucus making them dried, and explosive.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Hits
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 2
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Stamina | 10 Sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Taavetti digs dried mucus out of his nose and flicks it 5 meters at the opponent. The snot explodes on impact point creating C-tier explosive damage, and blast radius of 3 meters. [/list]


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