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Zion
Noir Ecryola
Kara Satel Bane
Merrze
Sylvia Thanatos
Julius Plageuis
Xion Zou Chi
Nahvi
Adrastos Thanatos
Julius Virgil
Rain
Amatus Laertes
Sesshomaru
Koko
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26Character Update Requests - Page 2 Empty Re: Character Update Requests 23/09/17, 02:33 pm

Diana Corvus

Diana Corvus
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Character Name: Diana Corvus
Changes: I'm changing the following sections and I've made clarifications below as well:

  • Age | Birth Date
  • Face Claim [ x ]
  • Appearance
  • Personality
  • Likes & Dislikes
  • Aspirations
  • History

Changes:

27Character Update Requests - Page 2 Empty Re: Character Update Requests 24/09/17, 01:49 pm

Rima Fahim

Rima Fahim
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Approved! @Diana -- @Koko

28Character Update Requests - Page 2 Empty Re: Character Update Requests 16/10/17, 06:20 pm

Sesshomaru

Sesshomaru
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Character Name: Hector
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29Character Update Requests - Page 2 Empty Re: Character Update Requests 16/10/17, 11:04 pm

Amatus Laertes

Amatus Laertes
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Character Name: Amatus Laertes
Changes:

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Spoiler:

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30Character Update Requests - Page 2 Empty Re: Character Update Requests 21/10/17, 12:54 pm

Diana Corvus

Diana Corvus
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Approved and updated.

31Character Update Requests - Page 2 Empty Re: Character Update Requests 14/11/17, 01:06 am

Sesshomaru

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Character Name: Sesshomaru
Changes:
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Changes:
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32Character Update Requests - Page 2 Empty Re: Character Update Requests 14/11/17, 12:02 pm

Diana Corvus

Diana Corvus
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Approved. You may update your vault. I'll update your character sheet once I get home.

33Character Update Requests - Page 2 Empty Re: Character Update Requests 11/12/17, 01:51 am

Rain

Rain
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Character Name: Rain Eveque
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34Character Update Requests - Page 2 Empty Re: Character Update Requests 19/12/17, 09:44 pm

Julius Virgil

Julius Virgil
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This is all of it.:



Last edited by Julius Virgil on 15/02/18, 03:23 pm; edited 1 time in total

35Character Update Requests - Page 2 Empty Re: Character Update Requests 19/12/17, 10:58 pm

Amaya

Amaya
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Julius Vergil:

Oranges - You mean "a liking for," not "a likeness to"

History - As grisly as getting tortured and recovering from the brink of death can be, there are some pretty glaring issues here.

1. You have zero medical knowledge. You wouldn't have been able to prevent yourself from bleeding out from a severe wound.

2. Your heart was punctured. It would take you roughly 1 minute to die from blood loss, at which point you would be dead. You wouldn't have been able to murder a group of people while unconscious, and then return to life and heal a wound you have no ability to even assess.

You're going to need to re-write this portion of your history so that is in line with what your character understands and can perform.

36Character Update Requests - Page 2 Empty Re: Character Update Requests 23/12/17, 02:00 am

Diana Corvus

Diana Corvus
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Approved, Rain.

37Character Update Requests - Page 2 Empty Re: Character Update Requests 05/01/18, 10:08 pm

Adrastos Thanatos

Adrastos Thanatos
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Character Name: Vavatine
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38Character Update Requests - Page 2 Empty Re: Character Update Requests 05/01/18, 10:27 pm

Ariel

Ariel
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A-a-approved!
Make sure you change your own vault.

39Character Update Requests - Page 2 Empty Re: Character Update Requests 15/02/18, 03:25 pm

Julius Virgil

Julius Virgil
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So this may be a little late, but I did all the necessary changes.

" https://magiworld.forumotion.com/t8570p25-character-update-requests#50099 "

TLDCorrect: No magic mirror gengis, no heart stabby, better use of grammar, easier to stroll through and read, makes more sense.

40Character Update Requests - Page 2 Empty Re: Character Update Requests 15/02/18, 05:01 pm

Ariel

Ariel
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A p p r o v e d ~

41Character Update Requests - Page 2 Empty Re: Character Update Requests 09/04/18, 04:26 am

Nahvi

Nahvi
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Character Name: Nahvi Elumine Delos Corvus
Changes: I'm changing the following

[1] Nahvi's keeping her name however she is going under an alias due to plot reasons and so i'm changing her displayable name to Lunera. However those who know Nahvi can call her by that name.

[2]Her Rukh Alignment was changed to black. The cause for her Descent into Depravity is caused by abandonment, or the feeling of being abandoned.

[3] She has been exiled from the Corvus family by Diana and is currently on the run thanks to the mercy she was shown. So just editing that part into the history.

42Character Update Requests - Page 2 Empty Re: Character Update Requests 09/04/18, 03:36 pm

Ariel

Ariel
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Please use the template with the exact information filled out.

43Character Update Requests - Page 2 Empty Re: Character Update Requests 11/05/18, 02:15 pm

Xion Zou Chi

Xion Zou Chi
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Character Name: Xion Zio Chi
Changes:

  • Appearance
    Age
    Face Claim X

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44Character Update Requests - Page 2 Empty Re: Character Update Requests 12/05/18, 11:12 am

Julius Plageuis

Julius Plageuis
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Edits done

45Character Update Requests - Page 2 Empty Re: Character Update Requests 11/09/18, 03:21 pm

Sylvia Thanatos

Sylvia Thanatos
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Character Name: New Sylvia
Changes: I changed the layout and spelling it's the same character, but I just reworded it, because I did the first one two years ago and just came back today.
Old App First Sylvia

46Character Update Requests - Page 2 Empty Re: Character Update Requests 11/09/18, 08:19 pm

Merrze

Merrze
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Make sure to include your roleplay sample in the edited template and then you're good to add it to your vault.

47Character Update Requests - Page 2 Empty Re: Character Update Requests 11/09/18, 10:00 pm

Sylvia Thanatos

Sylvia Thanatos
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Done, but I wanted this to be my main app?

48Character Update Requests - Page 2 Empty Re: Character Update Requests 23/09/18, 12:02 pm

Kara Satel Bane

Kara Satel Bane
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Character Name: Kara Satel Bane
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49Character Update Requests - Page 2 Empty Re: Character Update Requests 23/09/18, 12:49 pm

Merrze

Merrze
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Approved!

50Character Update Requests - Page 2 Empty Re: Character Update Requests 05/10/18, 07:42 pm

Amatus Laertes

Amatus Laertes
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Character Name: Amatus Laertes
Changes:
image:

race:

Sexuality:

face claim:

Eye & Hair Color:

Appearance:

special features:

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