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iShikei

iShikei
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Name: iShikei

Country Affiliation: Wanderer

Race: Magician

Tier: D

Class: Magician: Wind Magic

Age + Birthdate: Shikei Is 20, He Was Born On 1-3

Gender: Male

Sexuality: Heterosexual, Likes Magicians.

Personality: Brave, Smart,Honest,Nice,Cool, and a bit perverted, when it comes to his house or family he will not hesitate to murder the person who is causing the chaos,He will go into a dungeon without any fear or sweat, He is wise and smart, he knows the right timing when he needs to use a spell, he also knows how to use a lot of spells,he passes many spell test, as he may fail sometimes, he is super smart, he is super honest and whenever he does a mistake he always tells on himself, but his honesty can be bad cause sometimes he tells on his friends, and ends up losing a friend, He is nice, he would risk his life helping another person in need and whenever someone drops something he would always retrieve it for them, He never loses the chance to keep his cool, he likes to hide on eye behind his hair just because it make him look cool and for no other reason, he also like to fly to class to keep his cool, he is a bit of a pervert and likes to sneak in girls bathrooms, even though he is nice his pervertedness would always come first to his mind.

Likes:

         Girls, he loves them in every way not only pervertedness but he loves their personalitys, and he loves the way they smile.

         Staffs, he loves staffs and how their designs are, he loves magic and without a staff magic would be impossible to perform

Dislikes:

         Cooking, he sucks at it, he once bought a cook book he decided to give it a try when he was finished it looked like Poop.

        Kings, he thinks they are filthy rich and get fat on their money, they just rule the people to earn money and buy new jewelry.

Aspirations: He wants to explore the world and look for artifacts, in order to he will set off on a journey finding better magicians to team up with him, he will bring plentiful of food to share, he will look for hidden treasure underwater and above land, he hopes to find a really cool staff, He also wants to destroy kings, cause when he was young he lived in a poor village and the king that ruled there collected harsh taxes, the kings name was Yoshiro Zu he ruled Kou. Shikei also dreams of sword fighting, as he is a magician they use staffs, but he thinks magic isn't the only way to fight, he wants to have a staff that is used for physical damage and ranged.

Phobias: He is afraid of fire, ever since he was a child he would love fire and the tricks his pa would do, till one day a great wildfire rose and destroyed his home and village, and killed his pa, he started being more careful and would only use fire for a fireplace or camping, but one night it went wrong and it burned up his house again and nearly killed his ma, his ma is still alive but with burn marks on her leg which causes her to not walk like a normal being, he has fought against a heat magic user, he fled instantly cause he was afraid of fire.

Face Claim: Kaidou Eiji, he is a character from Pastel Chime 3 Bind Seeker.

Hair Color: Blue

Eye Color: One Eye Blue One Red

Height: 170 cm

Weight: 83 kg

Appearance: Blue hair covering his left eye, smiling most of the time, you can see a staff in his hand, the top part of the staff is a heart for his loving nice, but yet perverted ways. He has hair that is in braids, and he has a blue robe, that is silky and the color of sea (not related to his magic type)
he is seen smiling and has a little cat tail, his wand is black, he is seen with a wizard hat that is black as the night is and has a mysterious cape around him that is also black and has patterns of moons and stars, on the middle of his robe you can see a ruby attached to his robe, on the wand there are little marks, showing how his wand may have been scratched during fights, his hands are covered with black gloves.

Rukh Alignment: White Rukh

Special Feature(s):He Has a cat tail

History: He was born as a baby in a village called Rearem, Rearem was ruled by the Kou Empire, where all the magicians lived with tails, they were poor but had a good shelter but a bad king, one day he found a book in the grass and read it, it filled him with excitement cause the book was about learning magic, but his parents shut him off because they didn't want their son a magician for personal reasons, then they burned the book. One day he tried to escape but ended up being caught by his parents, he gave up trying to escape but he remembered the spells in his head, when the village was set a blaze and his pa died, he had his ma still but she was burned, she needed treatment quick, so he took her to Magnostadt to heal her, luckily the village was close so it took only 2 hours to get there, when they arrived he found a hospital and made sure the magicians took care of her wounds, she was fine but had burnt marks on her leg, while he was there he learned magic he did really well cause he was smart and he was brave, after he learned magic he set of to explore the world and the mysteries, along the way he met some friends, a couple strong Fanalises, and a Imuchakk, the Imuchakk taught him how to use staffs like sword, after his lessons he decided he should explore, The Dark Continent, before exploring the rest of the world, when he reached half way there he met the Imuchakk again and discussed with him, the Imuchakk convinced of him to not go and to stay for his ma and his  friends, he decided to check out the rest of the world and find more friends along the way, and he wants to stop at many girls bathrooms.

Role-Play Sample: Shikei ran as he saw his village burn to ashes "Ma!" he says "Son come here!" she says in return, Shikei notices her wounds, "Ma? Are you okay" he cries "Yes son don't worry" and then she faints Shikei runs around the forest carrying his mom to Magnostadt, along the way he gets bruised "Ow!" he yells as he trips on a branch, "Son, ple----" and then they arrive at Magnostadt all around the place there is a lot of chatter, many people look at Shikei as he runs through the crowd "SHE NEEDS A DOCTOR RIGHT AWAY" yells Shikei, a doctor comes in running taking in his Ma "Will she be alright?" asks Shikei and with that his eyes close.



Last edited by iShikei on 20/02/17, 08:58 pm; edited 3 times in total

Merrze

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Name: Please remove all the unnecessary details, just keep the name.

Class: Wind magic itself is not a class, if you want to use wind magic you would put magician and add wind magic to it.

Age+Birthdate: This is confusing and not straightforward, the first numbers are clearly a date and the parenthesis seems to be an explanation so what is the characters age.

Gender: Please change this to male.

Sexuality: Girls is not a sexuality, please change this to say the appropriate sexuality that you wish yo have for your character.

Dislikes: It is literally impossible for your character to be so bad at cooking that they blow up an entire house without dying along with the fact that appliances weren't that advanced at this time.

Aspirations: There are quite a few issues with this. The first being your character would not know about magi most likely, let alone their ability to raise dungeons as this is incredibly rare knowledge. Also your character cannot make a magi raise a dungeon for them, and attempting to do is extremely idiotic and your character would die or just simply fail as magi are extremely powerful and dungeons are only risen at certain times. And is only done for certain reasons not because someone decided to fight a magi.

Face Claim: It is not the job of staff to pick your face claim for you, please pick one or the other.

Hair Color: Just keep the color, please remove the extra info, also Aladdin does not exist in this world.

Eye Color: Yes you can have both colors, but please remove the additional details.

Appearance: Please remove the reference to all of the other characters, that information is irrelevant and they don't exist in this universe.

Special Features: You can have a cat tail, but please remove all of the irrelevant information like the last bit.

History: As mentioned earlier in your aspirations it very unlikely you know about magi or their involvement about dungeons. So please remove that. Also it's nearly impossible that you met a magician that knows more then Magnostadt. And on the off chance you did they would probably be a high tier staff controlled NPC and you would need special permission to meet them or meet them in a future thread but as this is your history that would mean you still have to remove it either way.

iShikei

iShikei
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Um hello ive updated it? no one was responding and i bumped ya

Merrze

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You said in your aspirations that he lived under the rule of cruel king, which cruel king, what country was Reram under the control of?

iShikei

iShikei
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Bump~~

Merrze

Merrze
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Unfortunately you cant make up a king, we already have predetermined countries and leaders on the site. The closest country to Magno that ever had a cruel leader was Kou, there was also balbadd but that country has been a republic for a decent amount of time.

iShikei

iShikei
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so much bumps lol, i changed the leader to Yoshiro Zu, the one that u guys made up
bump~~

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