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Name: Devastation
Tier: C
Cost: 20
Weapon Type: Battle Axe [Zagros]
Class: Offensive
Range: Close
Duration: Instantly
Cool-Down: 3 Posts
Description:
Azuris whirls around, holding Zagros with her right hand
before she reaches out and smashes the axe onto the
ground, shattering the earth and causing it to break. The
earthquake will affect an area within a 10m radius around
herself, causing the target to stumble, fall down and have
their limbs squeezed between the loose boulders. Depending
on how the target is it it can suffer from broken bones,
fleshwounds or even be trapped within the earth.


Name: Crimson Iron Crushing Fang
Tier: C
Cost: 20
Weapon Type: - (Fanalis)
Class: Offensive
Range: Close
Duration: Instantly
Cool-Down: 3 Posts
Description:
Azuris rushes forward with a speed of 15m/s and aims
at her targets stomach. Azuris will use her fist to punch
into the targets stomach, knocking it back for around 10
meters. The damage that is dealt is equal to broken bones.



Last edited by Azuris on 06/04/14, 01:15 pm; edited 2 times in total

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Bump for training. That is 1000 Words correct?

(Also for the second Spell that "kicking legs away" doesnt deal damage just the punch in the stomach does! Just wanted to clarify that :3)

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Crimson Iron Crushing Fang: If you hit the target in the stomach, their ribs should go unharmed. Instead of being super specific, change the wording so that you just aim for the stomach and then state the damage of the blow to be equivalent to bone breaking force.

As for the kick to knock your opponent down, I'd ask you make this a separate supplementary attack. Also consider for a moment how you start this move by running towards someone at 15m/s. That would make it rather hard to stop to plant one of your feet to perform this kick. I can't escape the image in my mind of your performing this only to run into someone comically.


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Okay bump!

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Change the knockback from 15m to 10m(which is the max Scale allowed for C-tier attacks) and I'll approve this :3


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Oops. Bump!

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Approved for training! Bump with a link to your training topic once completed~

P.S. Since this is your first training thread I'll notify you that this is two separate word requirements of 500 each. NOT one combined total of 1000 words. The techs should be trained separately from each other in separate posts. No merging word counts between the two or any of that funky stuff.

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[center][b]Name:[/b] Devastation
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Battle Axe [Zagros]
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Duration:[/b] Instantly
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 Posts
[b]Description:[/b]
Azuris whirls around, holding Zagros with her right hand
 before she reaches out and smashes the axe onto the
ground, shattering the earth and causing it to break. The
earthquake will affect an area within a 10m radius around
herself, causing the target to stumble, fall down and have
their limbs squeezed between the loose boulders. Depending
on how the target is it it can suffer from broken bones,
fleshwounds or even be trapped within the earth.


[b]Name:[/b] Crimson Iron Crushing Fang
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] - (Fanalis)
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Duration:[/b] Instantly
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 Posts
[b]Description:[/b]
Azuris rushes forward with a speed of 15m/s and aims
at her targets stomach. Azuris will use her fist to punch
into the targets stomach, knocking it back for around 10
meters. The damage that is dealt is equal to broken bones.[/center]


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https://magiworld.forumotion.com/t825-training-session-1-trainingsolo#3597

Training completed. This is my first time here so I hope everything is alright. <_<

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Approved & Moved! You may now add these to your vault!


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