Mon-On-Ku's Starter abilities

Myran · 1 Mon-On-Ku's Starter abilities 21/01/15, 03:54 pm

Myran

C-Tier

Character Sheet
Magoi:

(150/150)
Stamina:

(100/100)

Name: Berserkers Fury
Tier: C
Cost: 20 stamina
Weapon Type: Pole-arms
Class:Offensive
Range:Close
Duration: instant
Cool-Down: 3 posts
Description: Mon lashes out with ten (10ms) quick horizontal slashes. (i.e left to right, right to left etc.) If all of these connect it will deal deep cuts (C-Tier Damage) however any less and it will only cause shallow cuts (D-Tier Damage)

Name: Rapid Strike
Tier: D
Cost: 10 stamina
Weapon Type: Pole-arms
Class: Offensive
Range: Close
Duration: instant
Cool-Down: 2 posts
Description: Mon uses three quick thrusts (10ms) at his opponent (dealing D-rank damage).

Name: Rapid Parry
Tier: D
Cost: 10 stamina
Weapon Type: Polearms
Class: defensive
Range: Close
Duration: instant
Cool-Down: 2 posts
Description: Mon rapidly defends up to four attacks at (10ms) adding up to c rank, by bumping the attacks away.

Name: Berserking Swipe
Tier: D
Cost: 10 stamina
Weapon Type: Pole-arm
Class: Offensive
Range: Close
Duration: instant
Cool-Down: 2 posts
Description: Mon lashes out with one large sweeping attack (10ms) left to right slicing any one in the attack range (D-Rank damage to all who are hit).

Name: Berserkers Javelin
Tier: D
Cost: 10 stamina
Weapon Type: spear
Class: Offensive
Range: 5m
Duration:instant
Cool-Down:3
Description:Mon throws his spear 10ms in an attempt to hit fleeing targets for d-rank damage within 5m of him.

Last edited by Myran on 21/01/15, 08:15 pm; edited 3 times in total

Ariella Negri · 2 Re: Mon-On-Ku's Starter abilities 21/01/15, 07:25 pm

Ariella Negri

Ω-Tier

Character Sheet
Magoi:

(600/600)
Stamina:

(100/100)

Range for all melee abilities would just be listed as "close"

Rapid Strike: The description needs to include that it inflicts D-tier damage.

Berserking Swipe: The description needs to include that it inflicts D-tier damage to anyone within the 180 degree attack range. (the 180 degree part does not need to be included in range)

Berserkers Javelin: The description should say he throws his spear at 10 m/s to a target within 5 meters of him to inflict D-tier damage.

Myran · 3 Re: Mon-On-Ku's Starter abilities 21/01/15, 08:04 pm

Myran

C-Tier

Character Sheet
Magoi:

(150/150)
Stamina:

(100/100)

I believe I have fixed the problem.

Ariella Negri · 4 Re: Mon-On-Ku's Starter abilities 21/01/15, 08:06 pm

Ariella Negri

Ω-Tier

Character Sheet
Magoi:

(600/600)
Stamina:

(100/100)

Ariella wrote:Berserkers Javelin: The description should say he throws his spear at 10 m/s to a target within 5 meters of him to inflict D-tier damage.

Myran · 5 Re: Mon-On-Ku's Starter abilities 21/01/15, 08:16 pm

Myran

C-Tier

Character Sheet
Magoi:

(150/150)
Stamina:

(100/100)

Alright I think thats it.

Vardreth · 6 Re: Mon-On-Ku's Starter abilities 21/01/15, 09:34 pm

Vardreth

Ω-Tier

Character Sheet
Magoi:

(390/390)
Stamina:

(440/440)

You had a bit too much reasoning in some of these abilities, which I removed. I have made them closer to the standards of what an ability would/should look like.

If you like them as-is, let me know and they will be approved as shown below:

Code:: [b]Name:[/b] Berserkers Fury [b]Tier:[/b] C [b]Cost:[/b] 20 stamina [b]Weapon Type:[/b] Pole-arms [b]Class:[/b] Offensive [b]Range:[/b] Close [b]Duration:[/b] Instant [b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 posts [b]Description:[/b] Mon lashes out with 10 horizontal slashes at 10 m/s. If 10 connect it will deal C-Tier damage, however any less will cause D-Tier Damage. [b]Name:[/b] Rapid Strike [b]Tier:[/b] D [b]Cost:[/b] 10 stamina [b]Weapon Type:[/b] Pole-arms [b]Class:[/b] Offensive [b]Range:[/b] Close [b]Duration:[/b] Instant [b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts [b]Description:[/b] Mon uses 3 quick thrusts at 10m/s at his opponent, dealing D-Tier damage for a maximum of D-Tier damage. [b]Name:[/b] Rapid Parry [b]Tier:[/b] D [b]Cost:[/b] 10 stamina [b]Weapon Type:[/b] Pole-arms [b]Class:[/b] Defensive [b]Range:[/b] Close [b]Duration:[/b] Instant [b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts [b]Description:[/b] Mon rapidly defends up to 4 attacks at 10m/s that add up to C-Tier damage by bumping the attacks away. [b]Name:[/b] Berserking Swipe [b]Tier:[/b] D [b]Cost:[/b] 10 stamina [b]Weapon Type:[/b] Pole-arm [b]Class:[/b] Offensive [b]Range:[/b] Close [b]Duration:[/b] Instant [b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts [b]Description:[/b] Mon lashes out with one large sweeping attack at 10m/s left to right, slicing anyone in the attack range for D-Tier damage. [b]Name:[/b] Berserkers Javelin [b]Tier:[/b] D [b]Cost:[/b] 10 stamina [b]Weapon Type:[/b] Spear [b]Class:[/b] Offensive [b]Range:[/b] 5m [b]Duration:[/b] Instant [b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 Posts [b]Description:[/b] Mon throws his spear at 10m/s for D-Tier damage, which can travel 5 meters.

Myran · 7 Re: Mon-On-Ku's Starter abilities 21/01/15, 09:51 pm

Myran

C-Tier

Character Sheet
Magoi:

(150/150)
Stamina:

(100/100)

Looks fine to me and its sort of a habit for me when I write.

Vardreth · 8 Re: Mon-On-Ku's Starter abilities 21/01/15, 10:02 pm

Vardreth

Ω-Tier

Character Sheet
Magoi:

(390/390)
Stamina:

(440/440)

XD, that's understandable. I did the same thing a lot when I made my first 15~ish abilities. I still find myself doing it on occasion >.>;;;

Approved~ I'll add these to your vault shortly~