Set's Starter Abilities

Tier: C
Class: Magician
Type: Offensive / Supplementary
Range: Medium ( 10m )
Requirements/Drawbacks: The user must chant the name of the spell and point their staff at the target.
Scaling: Damage
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 1
Cost: 20 magoi | 10 magoi
Description: The caster sends out a giant shard of ice that is 1.5m long and .5m thick from the tip of their staff. On impact with a target whether it be terrain or a person it will explode on impact in a 5m radius dealing D Tier damage and covering the areas afflicted in a thick ice, slowing them for two posts or until broken with D Tier damage.

Tier: D
Class: Magician
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short ( 3m )
Requirements/Drawbacks: The user must chant the name of the spell and tap their staff onto the ground.
Scaling: AoE ( +5m )
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 1
Cost: 10 magoi | 5 magoi
Description: The caster sends out a line of ice that can travel up to 3m out from the bottom of their staff that explodes into a large circle of ice shaped like a snow flake with a radius of 5m in the desired location. The ice will cause anything it touches to stick to it and freeze. It takes roughly half a second for it to reach the target and create the circle. Anything standing in the circle has their feet frosted over and can not move for one post or until broken with D Tier strength. If supplied with enough magoi it will become 5m larger in size.  The circle will melt after one post.

Tier: D
Class: Magician
Type: Defensive
Range: Close ( 1m )
Requirements/Drawbacks: The user must chant the name of the spell and tap their staff onto the ground.
Scaling: AoE ( +5m )
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 1
Cost: 10 magoi | 5 magoi
Description: The caster raises a large, .5m thick, 2.2m tall ice wall in front of them to defend against incoming attacks. The max range it can be raised is 1m away from the caster. After it is hit it will break and shatter. The shatter effect deals no damage. The wall will shatter after one post or if hit by an attack or ability. It raises almost instantly and if provided with enough magoi it will grow 5m wider in size.

Tier: D
Class: Magician
Type: Offensive
Range: Medium ( 10m )
Requirements/Drawbacks: The user must chant the name of the spell and tap their staff onto the ground. It takes roughly half a second to raise from the ground.
Scaling: Damage
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 1
Cost: 10 magoi | 5 magoi
Description: The caster raises a 1.5m tall ice spike from a targeted location 10m from the user dealing D Tier damage.

Tier: D
Class: Magician
Type: Offensive
Range: Medium ( 10m )
Requirements/Drawbacks: The user must chant the name of the spell and point their staff at the target.
Scaling: Hits
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 1
Cost: 10 magoi | 5 magoi
Description: The caster shoots a small .2m ice shard out of the tip of their staff that travels a max distance of 10m and deals D Tier damage. If provided with additional magoi it will increase the amount of shards shot by one.

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Bumping this up since it's no longer a work in progress.

Looks good to me. I approve ^^.

• Bufula:
  

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  [center][b][u]Ice Magic[/u]: Bufula[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive / Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Medium ( 10m )
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] The user must chant the name of the spell and point their staff at the target. The spike travels at C Tier speed.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 magoi | 10 magoi
[b]Description:[/b] The caster sends out a giant shard of ice from the tip of their staff. On impact with a target whether it be terrain or a person it will explode on impact dealing C Tier damage and applies a D Tier slow for two posts.

  
  

• Masukunda:
  

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  [center][b][u]Ice Magic[/u]: Masukunda[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Short ( 3m )
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] The user must chant the name of the spell and tap their staff onto the ground. It takes roughly half a second for it to reach the target and create the circle. Anything standing in the circle has a D Tier slow applied to them. If supplied with enough magoi it will become larger in size.
[b]Scaling:[/b] AoE ( +5m )
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 magoi | 5 magoi
[b]Description:[/b] The caster sends out a line of ice out from the bottom of their staff that explodes into a large circle of ice shaped like a snow flake in the desired location. The ice will cause anything it touches to stick to it and freeze. The circle will melt after one post.

  
  

• Tetrakarn:
  

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  [center][b][u]Ice Magic[/u]: Tetrakarn[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Defensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close ( 1m )
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] The user must chant the name of the spell and tap their staff onto the ground. This spell has limited range will shatter after two seconds or if hit by an attack or ability. It raises almost instantly and if provided with enough magoi it will grow wider in size around it's limited casting radius.
[b]Scaling:[/b] AoE ( +5m )
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 magoi | 5 magoi
[b]Description:[/b] The caster raises a large, .5m thick, 2.2m tall ice wall in front of them to defend against incoming attacks. After it is hit it will break and shatter. The shatter effect deals no damage.

  
  

• Bufu:
  

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  [center][b][u]Ice Magic[/u]: Bufu[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Medium ( 10m )
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] The user must chant the name of the spell and tap their staff onto the ground. It takes roughly half a second to raise from the ground.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 magoi | 5 magoi
[b]Description:[/b] The caster raises a 1.5m tall ice spike from a targeted location dealing D Tier damage.

  
  

• Mabufu:
  

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  [center][b][u]Ice Magic[/u]: Mabufu[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Short ( 3m )
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] The user must chant the name of the spell and point their staff at the target. The spike travels at D Tier speed. If provided with additional magoi it will increase the amount of shards shot by one.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Hits
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 magoi | 5 magoi
[b]Description:[/b] The caster shoots a small ice shard out of the tip of their staff that travels a max distance of 3m and deals D Tier damage.

  
  

Sorry to rain on the parade but Ariel missed some stuff.

Bufula:

There is no such thing as C-tier speed, but even if there was, that information doesn't belong int the requirements/drawbacks section.

You say a "giant" shard, but don't give the dimensions. What is the actual size?

How big is the AoE of the explosion?

Why is it able to deal C-tier damage and apply an effect when its only a C-tier ability? The damage should only be D-tier if the potency is split between an offensive and supplementary effect.

There is no standard "D-tier slow" effect. So just give a text description of what's causing a slowing. For example, a thin layer of ice covering the struck area that requires D-tier strength to break.


Masukunda:

Same as above with there not being a standardized D-tier slow effect. That and the info about it being able to grow larger also doesn't belong in the requirements/drawback section but rather in the description section.

How far can the line travel? How big is the initial circle before scaling?

Use text description to explain the effect of a layer of ice forming on the target's feet that requires D-tier strength to break free.


Tetrakarn:

You've got info in the requirements/drawback section that belongs in the description instead again.

How wide is the wall? How far away from you can it form?


Bufu:

What is the range of how far away the ice spike can be formed?


Mabufu:

Same issues as above with there not being a D-tier speed and info that should be in the description being in the requirements for some reason.

How small is the shard?

Since it's a smaller shard, you can get away with a farther range than 3m. Smaller projectiles generally have longer ranges.

Fixed!

Bufula:
Approved with edits. Added the range of the shard and nerfed the explosion AoE

Code:

[center][b][u]Ice Magic[/u]: Bufula[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive / Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Medium ( 10m )
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] The user must chant the name of the spell and point their staff at the target.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 magoi | 10 magoi
[b]Description:[/b] The caster sends out a giant shard of ice that is 1.5m long and .5m thick from the tip of their staff up to 10m away. On impact with a target whether it be terrain or a person it will explode on impact in a 1m radius dealing D Tier damage and covering the areas afflicted in a thick ice, slowing them for two posts or until broken with D Tier damage.

Masukunda:
Approved but switched the range/size values. The stuff you head would mean you get caught in your own spell every time.

Code:

[center][b][u]Ice Magic[/u]: Masukunda[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Short ( 3m )
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] The user must chant the name of the spell and tap their staff onto the ground.
[b]Scaling:[/b] AoE ( +5m )
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 magoi | 5 magoi
[b]Description:[/b] The caster sends out a line of ice that can travel up to 5m out from the bottom of their staff that explodes into a large circle of ice shaped like a snow flake with a radius of 3m in the desired location. The ice will cause anything it touches to stick to it and freeze. It takes roughly half a second for it to reach the target and create the circle. Anything standing in the circle has their feet frosted over and can not move for one post or until broken with D Tier strength. If supplied with enough magoi it will become 5m larger in size.  The circle will melt after one post.


Tetrakarn:
Approved, but added an original unscaled version of the ice wall width.

Code:

[center][b][u]Ice Magic[/u]: Tetrakarn[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Defensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close ( 1m )
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] The user must chant the name of the spell and tap their staff onto the ground.
[b]Scaling:[/b] AoE ( +5m )
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 magoi | 5 magoi
[b]Description:[/b] The caster raises a large, .5m thick, 2.2m tall, 2m wide ice wall in front of them to defend against incoming attacks. The max range it can be raised is 1m away from the caster. After it is hit it will break and shatter. The shatter effect deals no damage. The wall will shatter after one post or if hit by an attack or ability. It raises almost instantly and if provided with enough magoi it will grow 5m wider in size.

Bufu:
Approved

Code:

[center][b][u]Ice Magic[/u]: Bufu[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Medium ( 10m )
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] The user must chant the name of the spell and tap their staff onto the ground. It takes roughly half a second to raise from the ground.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 magoi | 5 magoi
[b]Description:[/b] The caster raises a 1.5m tall ice spike from a targeted location 10m from the user dealing D Tier damage.

Mabufu:
Approved

Code:

[center][b][u]Ice Magic[/u]: Mabufu[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Medium ( 10m )
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] The user must chant the name of the spell and point their staff at the target.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Hits
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 magoi | 5 magoi
[b]Description:[/b] The caster shoots a small .2m ice shard out of the tip of their staff that travels a max distance of 10m and deals D Tier damage. If provided with additional magoi it will increase the amount of shards shot by one.