Lance's retrained starters

Name: Heat Mirage
Tier: D
Cost: 10 magoi/5 sustain
Element: Heat
Class: Supplementary
Range: 10 meters
Duration: Sustained
Cool-Down: 2 posts or sustain+1
Description: The caster creates a 5m x 5m heat wall within ten meters of the caster. Magoi pours from their staff to the wall at 10 m/s. The heat from within the wall creates a mild mirage that obscures vision for the opponent or opponents on the opposite side of the wall.

Name: Control Flames
Tier: D
Cost: 10 Magoi/ 5 Sustain
Element: Heat
Class: Offensive
Range: 10 meters
Duration: Sustained
Cool-Down: 2 posts or sustain+1
Description: Lance creates 1-5 flames of heat, 1 meter large apiece, that form and move at 10m/s that can inflict D-tier damage and inflict first-degree burns.

Name: Fire Ball
Tier: C
Cost: 20 Magoi / 10 Sustain
Element: Heat
Class: Offensive
Range: 20 meters
Duration: Sustained
Cool-Down: 3 posts or sustain+1
Description: The caster creates one fireball up to one meter in diameter that travels at 15 m/s up to 20 meters away from the user capable of inflicting C-tier damage and second degree burns to an opponent.

Name: Sunny Day
Tier: C
Cost: 20 Magoi
Element: Heat
Class: Offensive
Range: 20 meters  
Duration: 1 post
Cool-Down: 2 posts
Description: A sphere, between 5 and 10 meters in diameter, absorbs all heat within it, dealing C-tier damage via dehydration. The sphere is formed and moves at 15 m/s and can be freely moved by the user within 20 meters of himself.

Name: Flame Slice
Tier: C
Cost: 20 Magoi/ 10 Sustained
Element: Heat
Class: Offensive
Range: 20 meters
Duration: Sustained
Cool-Down: 3 posts or sustain+1
Description: By slamming his staff into the ground, Lance creates a crescent of flames 1.5 meters wide and 10 meters long and 1 meter tall that forms at 15 m/s in a direction of his choosing, capable of inflicting C-tier damage and second-degree burns to any opponent it touches.

Heat Mirage: The cost would be 10 magoi/5 sustain. Range would just be 10m. Duration would be "Sustained" and cool-down would be "2 posts or sustain+1"

Control Flames: You may not have a combination Offensive/Supplementary D-tier. It can only be one or the other. Duration would be "Sustained" and cool-down would be "2 posts or sustain+1" Consider rewording the description to the following:

Lance creates 1-5 flames of heat, 1 meter large apiece, that form and move at 10m/s that can inflict D-tier damage and inflict first-degree burns.

Fire Ball: Duration would be "Sustained" and cool-down would be "3 posts or sustain+1" Consider rewording the description to the following:

The caster creates one cireball up to one meter in diameter that travels at 15 m/s up to 20 meters away from the user capable of inflicting C-tier damage and second degree burns to an opponent.

Sunny Day: Duration would be 1 post. In order for this orb to last 2 posts, you must change it to sustain. Consider rewording the description to the following:

A sphere, between 5 and 10 meters in diameter, absorbs all heat within it, dealing C-tier damage via dehydration. The sphere is formed and moves at 15 m/s and can be freely moved by the user within 20 meters of himself.

Flame Slice: Duration would be "Sustained" and cool-down would be "3 posts or sustain+1" Consider rewording the description to the following:

By slamming his staff into the ground, Lance creates a crescent of flames 1.5 meters wide and 10 meters long and 1 meter tall that forms at 15 m/s in a direction of his choosing, capable of inflicting C-tier damage and second-degree burns to any opponent it touches.

Alright did that!

Alrighty~ Looks good to me. Just a couple short mentions: For the D-Tier spells, you will not have to retrain them (you have not yet done your re-vamp since the overhaul on the systems, so these are free) and the C-Tier spell that remained on the same tier does not have to be retrained.


Approved for training:

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[b]Name:[/b] Fire Ball
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Magoi / 10 Sustain
[b]Element:[/b] Heat
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 20 meters
[b]Duration:[/b] Sustained
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 posts or sustain+1
[b]Description:[/b] The caster creates one fireball up to one meter in diameter that travels at 15 m/s up to 20 meters away from the user capable of inflicting C-tier damage and second degree burns to an opponent.

[b]Name:[/b] Sunny Day
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Magoi
[b]Element:[/b] Heat
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 20 meters 
[b]Duration:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts
[b]Description:[/b] A sphere, between 5 and 10 meters in diameter, absorbs all heat within it, dealing C-tier damage via dehydration. The sphere is formed and moves at 15 m/s and can be freely moved by the user within 20 meters of himself.

Revamping/Trained abilities that need to be updated:

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[b]Name:[/b] Heat Mirage
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 magoi/5 sustain
[b]Element:[/b] Heat
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] 10 meters
[b]Duration:[/b] Sustained
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts or sustain+1
[b]Description:[/b] The caster creates a 5m x 5m heat wall within ten meters of the caster. Magoi pours from their staff to the wall at 10 m/s. The heat from within the wall creates a mild mirage that obscures vision for the opponent or opponents on the opposite side of the wall.

[b]Name:[/b] Control Flames
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi/ 5 Sustain
[b]Element:[/b] Heat
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 10 meters
[b]Duration:[/b] Sustained
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts or sustain+1
[b]Description:[/b] Lance creates 1-5 flames of heat, 1 meter large apiece, that form and move at 10m/s that can inflict D-tier damage and inflict first-degree burns.

[b]Name:[/b] Flame Slice
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Magoi/ 10 Sustained
[b]Element:[/b] Heat
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 20 meters
[b]Duration:[/b] Sustained
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 posts or sustain+1
[b]Description:[/b] By slamming his staff into the ground, Lance creates a crescent of flames 1.5 meters wide and 10 meters long and 1 meter tall that forms at 15 m/s in a direction of his choosing, capable of inflicting C-tier damage and second-degree burns to any opponent it touches.

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[b]Name:[/b] Sunny Day
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Magoi
[b]Element:[/b] Heat
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 20 meters 
[b]Duration:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts
[b]Description:[/b] A sphere, between 5 and 10 meters in diameter, absorbs all heat within it, dealing C-tier damage via dehydration. The sphere is formed and moves at 15 m/s and can be freely moved by the user within 20 meters of himself.

I would like to use my C-tier holiday voucher to train this

Ability approved and added to vault, coupon deducted~

Code:

[b]Name:[/b] Sunny Day
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Magoi
[b]Element:[/b] Heat
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 20 meters
[b]Duration:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts
[b]Description:[/b] A sphere, between 5 and 10 meters in diameter, absorbs all heat within it, dealing C-tier damage via dehydration. The sphere is formed and moves at 15 m/s and can be freely moved by the user within 20 meters of himself.

Ability approved and added to vault, coupon deducted~

Code:

[b]Name:[/b] Fire Ball
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Magoi / 10 Sustain
[b]Element:[/b] Heat
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 20 meters
[b]Duration:[/b] Sustained
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 posts or sustain+1
[b]Description:[/b] The caster creates one fireball up to one meter in diameter that travels at 15 m/s up to 20 meters away from the user capable of inflicting C-tier damage and second degree burns to an opponent.