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1Starters Empty Starters on 10/03/14, 07:11 am

Victoria

Victoria
D-Tier
D-Tier
Name: Animate
Tier: D
Cost: 10( 5 sustain)
Element: Life
Class: Offensive
Range: 10m
Duration: 3
Cool-Down: 2
Description: Victoria waves her staff and white rukh gathers around. Objects like trees, rocks and plants are brought to life in the form of monsters. They are used like puppets, moving to the orders of Victoria. Rocks turn into rock golems that deal D tier damage while trees start moving with the use of their roots. They have the ability to extend their branches and hit others which can cause D tier damage as well. Plants have a sudden growth, turning carnivorous in nature. They attack using their roots or with their sharp leaves. Their petals come together and forms mouths.   Victoria can control one such monster at current level. These monsters has a height of 5m and and move slow traveling at a speed of 10m/s.    

Name: Venus Fly Trap
Tier: C
Cost: 20 (15 Sustain)
Element: Life
Class: Offensive
Range: 20m
Duration: 3
Cool-Down: 3
Description: Victoria taps the ground twice with her staff. It starts shaking and the ground breaks with a large Venus fly trap plant extending up to 10m arise right under her opponent. If he or she is not agile enough or doesn’t direct any C rank attacks at it, in a second, the Venus fly trap will close its leaves, trapping and injuring her opponent with the spiky hairs inside causing stab wounds. Plus, it’s possible for the trapped person to suffocate from lack of oxygen. They can hold their breath for two posts before passing out.

Name: Aconite
Tier: D
Cost: 10
Element: Life
Class: Offensive
Range: 10
Duration: 2
Cool-Down: 2
Description: Victoria taps the ground twice with her staff. It breaks and large roots, 1m wide and 5m long grows out. These are the roots of plant Aconite. A mere touch of it can cause numbness or paralysis of the limb that came in contact with it. The paralysis affect lasts for 2 posts. The roots are able to grow in any direction or way according to Victoria’s wish. Not only that, it can be grown from anywhere within the range of 10m from where she is standing.

Name: Aroma Therapy
Tier: D
Cost: 10
Element: Life
Class: Supplementary
Range: 10
Duration: 2
Cool-Down: 2
Description: Victoria raises her staff up and soon a soothing and attractive aroma fills the air, covering 10m in distance. This aroma causes has healing properties, healing any number of her allies, within 10m range, of D tier damage or below in 2 posts. This heals status effects as well as poisoning or any sort of damage that is below D tier.

Name: Ōkami no kōgeki
Tier: D
Cost: 10
Element: Life
Class: Offensive
Range: 10
Duration: Instant
Cool-Down: 2
Description: Rukh gathers around the tip of Victoria’s staff and the staff suddenly moves out in the form a large wolf’s upper body made of wood. Rukh surrounds the wolf head hence making it look white and illuminant having a height of 5m. It has claws as two sharp canines as its most noticeable features. It can grow out to 10m from where Victoria is standing and is capable of changing directions according to Victoria’s wish to avoid obstacles. The wolf is capable of causing damage with its claws or canines, scratching or biting. The wolf can also simply slam into a person pushing the enemy back and knocking them off their feet.



Last edited by Victoria on 11/03/14, 01:28 pm; edited 3 times in total


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2Starters Empty Re: Starters on 10/03/14, 11:53 am

Duquin

Duquin
A-Tier
A-Tier
Animate: The maximum scale of a D-tier ability is 5m so please lower the size of your animations accordingly. You could also bump the speed up 10 10m/s if you wanted. Please also specify the damage required to defeat them.

Venus Fly Trap: Your range can be up to 10m, but once again your scale needs to be lowered to 5m. This means the fly trap can be up to 5m in size but appear up to 10m away from you.

Aconite: Make the roots skinnier than 3m, and refit this spell to match the 5m scale limitation on D-tier. Also, how many of them pop up? The max you can have is 5.

Aroma Therapy: Scale and Range need to be fixed here too. The healing spell itself should be 5m in size while it's range(how far you can move it) should be 10m.

Ōkami no kōgeki: Scale/Range issues again. You word this in a way that makes seem like the wolf is made of pure rukh. Please specify this, as I think you meant for the staffs head to turn into the wolf. Also specify damage it can deal/receive before ending.


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Thank you all, for everything.

3Starters Empty Re: Starters on 11/03/14, 06:31 am

Victoria

Victoria
D-Tier
D-Tier
Bumpity Bump :3


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4Starters Empty Re: Starters on 11/03/14, 09:57 am

Duquin

Duquin
A-Tier
A-Tier
Venus Fly Trap: Please add that humans can only hold their breath for two turns before passing out and the type/degree of damage the spike hairs do. Not just the tier worth of damage, but the type. In this case stabbing/puncturing wounds sound most appropriate to me.

Okami no Kogeki: You didn't add the damage information I requested D: It also doesn't look like you made the description of your spell specify whether the wolf was magoi or the wood from your staff growing out.


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Thank you all, for everything.

5Starters Empty Re: Starters on 11/03/14, 01:28 pm

Victoria

Victoria
D-Tier
D-Tier
D: Sorry! I hope they are fine now~


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6Starters Empty Re: Starters on 11/03/14, 01:40 pm

Duquin

Duquin
A-Tier
A-Tier
Approved!
Just post in the mod notifications to get this moved~


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Thank you all, for everything.

7Starters Empty Re: Starters on 11/03/14, 01:43 pm

Victoria

Victoria
D-Tier
D-Tier
Thank you, Yaku!~ <3


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