[Jahangir] The Sword of Damokles

Name:Sword of Damokles. The Damokles Blade
Tier: B
Type: Sword
Magic Type: Light
Appearance: The Damokles Blade is a long and slender sword, the sword measures at 110 cm or 43 in, in lenght. The sword is a vagrant beautiful shade of gold. The hilt of the sword is rather ornate in design and boasts a detailed realistic crown of flowers along its hilt, which is 8in(20 cm) long. The blade of the sword is 2.5 inches in width.  The base of the sword sports a cross like design. The gemstone for the blade is set in the middle of the sword. The weapon has the habit of shining a golden hue, as it always does when its master concentrates for an attack. 
Ability 

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[b]Name:[/b] Oberon:Commandment of the fairy King
[b]Tier:[/b]B
[b]Cost:[/b]30/15 sustain
[b]Element:[/b] Light
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b]30 meter
[b]Duration:[/b]Sustain
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 posts +1 sustain
[b]Description:[/b]Jahan Grips Damokles firmly, the sword shines a golden hue and casts a spell commanding the rukh to emit a cylindrical blast of light that travels at 20 m/s in a cone shape up to 30 meters away, the maximum width of the cone reaching 15 meters.

Just a couple of things:

I don't feel comfortable with the gemstone being 'smelted' into the sword. Either change that part, or request Ari to make a judgement on it (I'll support her decision).

The second thing is the ability; the ability should be going through the normal ability approval process. I understand you were trying to save us a step, but this would have actually required us to create a new topic in the ability section for you so that you could post there when your ability had been trained XD.


A minor thing with the description; how wide is the blade? How long is the handle/hilt?

XD ari checked it yesterday and already rewrote the ability. What you see there is, the version done with her edit. However I did forget the widget of the blade.

On the other part I actually thought the sultry had to be made when I bought the sword XD.

add in the length of the hilt please ^_^

Once you use this, all we'll need is the width of the sword ^_^. You've got the hilt length, and the sword length, and I removed the ability from it.

Almost there~

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Edited

Approved (I made the final edits to your size for the sword). Priced at 80,000 Huang

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[b]Name:[/b]Sword of Damokles. The Damokles Blade
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Type:[/b] Sword
[b]Magic Type:[/b] Light
[b]Appearance:[/b]
The Damokles Blade is a long and slender sword, the sword measures at 110 cm (43 in.) in length, with the blade of the sword being 6.3 cm (2.5 in) in width. The sword is a vagrant beautiful shade of gold. The hilt of the sword, which is 20 cm (8 in.) in length, is rather ornate in design and boasts a detailed realistic crown of flowers along its hilt. The base of the sword sports a cross like design. The gemstone for the blade is set in the middle of the sword. The weapon has the habit of shining a golden hue, as it always does when its master concentrates for an attack.

I'd like to purchase now ^_^

Purchase approved~