Altair Loros Abilities (reapproval)

Name: Wasp's Dance
Tier: D
Cost: 10 Stamina
Weapon Type: Sword
Class: Defensive
Range: Melee
Duration: 1 Post
Cool-Down: 2 Posts
Description: The user rapidly deflects incoming attacks with the Sword.  The technique Speed is 10 m/s.  it can deflect 2 D, or 1 C rank attack.

Name: Wasp's Dance II
Tier: C
Cost: 20 Stamina
Weapon Type: Sword
Class: Defensive
Range: Melee
Duration: 1 Post
Cool-Down: 3 Posts
Description: The user rapidly deflects incoming attacks with the Sword.  The technique Speed is 15 m/s.  it can deflect 4 D, 2 C, or 1 B rank attack.

Name: Sukaiappa (Sky Uppercut)
Tier: D
Cost: 10 Stamina
Weapon Type: Sword
Class: Offensive
Range: Melee
Duration: Instantaneous
Cool-Down: 2 posts
Description: A rising strike to an opponent.  causes serious bruising, and may even break weaker bones.  Speed of the strike is 10 m/s and deals tier D damage.

Name: Yadzutsu (Quiver)
Tier: D
Cost: 10 Stamina
Weapon Type: None
Class: Supplementary
Range: Self
Duration: Instantaneous
Cool-Down: 2 Posts
Description: A five meter dash done at 10 m/s.

Name: Okami o Korosu (Slay the Wolf)
Tier: D
Cost: 10 Stamina
Weapon Type: Sword
Class: Offensive
Range: Melee
Duration: 1 post
Cool-Down: 2 posts
Description: The user waits for the opponent to open themselves up with an attack, and then strikes them hard in the stomach with the hilt of the sword.  This can deal minor organ damage in addition to bruising.  Attack's speed is 10 m/s, and deals Rank D damage.

Name: Kuma o Korosu (Slay the Bear)
Tier: C
Cost: 20 Stamina
Weapon Type: Sword
Class: Offensive
Range: Melee
Duration: Instantaneous
Cool-Down: 3 posts
Description: The user lands a devastating blow to the base of the skull.  this can cause broken bones, severe bleeding, and has a possibility of knocking out an opponent.  Movement is 15 m/s and deals rank C damage.

Name: Jakkaru o korosu (Slay the Jackals)
Tier: B
Cost: 30 Stamina
Weapon Type: Sword
Class: Offensive
Range: Melee
Duration: 1 post
Cool-Down: 5 posts
Description: A wicked series of four attacks that targets the joints and can crush bones, cause internal bleeding, slice open muscle, and is great for dealing with crowds.  Each attack deals D-Tier damage. If 2 hit the same target, it deals C-Tier damage, and if 4 hit the same target it deals B-Tier damage. The speed of these attacks is 20m/s.

Name: Four-fold Sigil of Healing
Tier: C
Cost: 20 Magoi
Element: Life
Class: Supportive
Range: 20 meters
Duration: 1 Post
Cool-Down: 3 Posts
Description: A complex sigil of purple light moves from the caster towards the wounded area at 15 m/s, shining on the wounded area, healing 1 C tier or lower wound over the course of two posts.

Name: Crown of Locusts
Tier: C
Cost: 20 Magoi, 10 Magoi
Element: Life
Class: Supplementary
Range: 20 meters.
Duration: Sustained
Cool-Down: 3 posts or sustain+1
Description: By increasing the size of bacteria in the air, this spell creates locust sized insects that fly around, bite, and obscure the vision and hearing of those in it's area of effect.  The insects cause painful bites to those in the area, but the bites are not powerful enough to cause actual damage.  People within the radius become blinded and deafened.  The caster can control the movement of the swarm. The Swarm moves at 15 m/s.

Name: Bliss
Tier: D
Cost: 10 Magoi, 5 Magoi
Element: Life
Class: Supportive
Range: Personal
Duration: Sustained 3 Posts
Cool-Down: 3 or Sustain +1
Description: By targeting the pain receptors in the body, the caster can nullify the pain response.  This allows them to keep fighting at full capacity even when heavily injured.

Sukaiappa can remove the 'offguard opponent', because I would hate for somebody to say 'Hey, you can only use a movement like that if I'm off guard, and I'm not.'

Yadzutsu will have to be changed slightly. As mentioned to Kneph, the ability here is actually technically a Magoi Manipulation since it 'buffs' your speed. If you make it a dash instead, that would be fine. I mention to Kneph that if he wants to also use the reasoning that with the dash he has enough momentum to continue moving at a running speed as per his race guidelines, that's perfectly fine. This is actually a buff on your ability, as you will be able to dash at 10m/s, higher than your speed, and then you could continue moving as either running or sprinting from having the momentum necessary for it already. Make it a dash by adding in a scale of 5m or less for how far your dash/jump move takes you.


Okami o Korosu: Remove the sentence that says 'this does not stop the opponent's attack'. We will use normal clashing rules to determine that. You can also choose to remove the 'Waits for the opponent to be open for an attack'. That kind of stuff can be RPed. This way, you can still use the attack to clash with another person's attack, if you would like to.


Kuma o Korosu: In regards to increasing both your movement speed while also being able to use an attack at the tier's speed; that would require Magoi Manipulation. Since this is both a supplementary, and an offensive, you would need to assign the speed to one of them and bring the amount of damage down on how much your blow does to D-Tier. I would instead suggest having it be an attack you do at the opponent's skull, and perhaps have another ability that gets you behind the opponent unless you're okay with the damage being at D-Tier. The rules for splitting class of abilities can be found Here under 'Ability Classes'.

Jakkaru o korosu:

This needs to be changed slightly. It would have to separate the attacks into 4 different attacks, each of which would deal D-Tier damage but add up to B-Tier if they land on the same opponent, or C-Tier if 2 land on the same opponent.

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[b]Name:[/b] Jakkaru o korosu (Slay the Jackals)
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Sword
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Melee
[b]Duration:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 posts
[b]Description:[/b] A wicked series of four attacks that targets the joints and can crush bones, cause internal bleeding, slice open muscle, and is great for dealing with crowds.  Each attack deals D-Tier damage. If 2 hit the same target, it deals C-Tier damage, and if 4 hit the same target it deals B-Tier damage. The speed of these attacks is 20m/s.

It is at this point that I want to say something, Altair. This is the only chance you have to change your secondary to something else. There is no known way to get your secondary changed after this that we have planned at this time. If you accept this risk, please continue with the ability approval process for INT.



You might want to change the range of the following spell to its full potential. You're kind of nerfing yourself pretty hard. Your call, though, man.

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[b]Name:[/b] Four-fold Sigil of Healing
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Magoi
[b]Element:[/b] Life
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] 2 meters
[b]Duration:[/b] 1 Post
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 Posts
[b]Description:[/b] A complex sigil of purple light moves from the caster towards the wounded area at 15 m/s, shining on the wounded area, healing 1 C tier or lower wound over the course of two posts.

Crown of Locusts isn't dealing damage, so I'm changing it to Supplementary. If you want it to deal C-Tier damage to anything within the thing, you could remove the status effects and add the damage in there instead. Changing the sustain to reflect the appropriate rules for sustain in the new Durations rules.

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[b]Name:[/b] Crown of Locusts
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Magoi, 10 Magoi
[b]Element:[/b] Life
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] 20 meters.
[b]Duration:[/b] Sustained
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 posts or sustain+1
[b]Description:[/b] By increasing the size of bacteria in the air, this spell creates locust sized insects that fly around, bite, and obscure the vision and hearing of those in it's area of effect.  The insects cause painful bites to those in the area, but the bites are not powerful enough to cause actual damage.  People within the radius become blinded and deafened.  The caster can control the movement of the swarm.

Just minor changes to your last spell.

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[b]Name:[/b] Bliss
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi, 5 Magoi
[b]Element:[/b] Life
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Duration:[/b] Sustained
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts or sustain+1
Description: By targeting the pain receptors in the body, the caster can nullify the pain response.  This allows them to keep fighting at full capacity even when heavily injured.

After thinking a lot, i've decided to keep the INT spec. With the new changes to the specializations, i can do a lot more with it than i once thought. All requested edits have been made, including requested unnerfing.

Sorry for the picky-ness, but much appreciated~

The following are approved~

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[b]Name:[/b] Wasp's Dance
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Sword
[b]Class:[/b] Defensive
[b]Range:[/b] Melee
[b]Duration:[/b] 1 Post
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 Posts
[b]Description:[/b] The user rapidly deflects incoming attacks with the Sword.  The technique Speed is 10 m/s.  it can deflect 2 D, or 1 C rank attack.

[b]Name:[/b] Wasp's Dance II
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Sword
[b]Class:[/b] Defensive
[b]Range:[/b] Melee
[b]Duration:[/b] 1 Post
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 Posts
[b]Description:[/b] The user rapidly deflects incoming attacks with the Sword.  The technique Speed is 15 m/s.  it can deflect 4 D, 2 C, or 1 B rank attack.

[b]Name:[/b] Sukaiappa (Sky Uppercut)
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Sword
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Melee
[b]Duration:[/b] Instantaneous
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts
[b]Description:[/b] A rising strike to an opponent.  causes serious bruising, and may even break weaker bones.  Speed of the strike is 10 m/s and deals tier D damage.

[b]Name:[/b] Yadzutsu (Quiver)
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] None
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Self
[b]Duration:[/b] Instantaneous
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 Posts
[b]Description:[/b] A five meter dash done at 10 m/s.

[b]Name:[/b] Okami o Korosu (Slay the Wolf)
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Sword
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Melee
[b]Duration:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts
[b]Description:[/b] The user waits for the opponent to open themselves up with an attack, and then strikes them hard in the stomach with the hilt of the sword.  This can deal minor organ damage in addition to bruising.  Attack's speed is 10 m/s, and deals Rank D damage.

[b]Name:[/b] Kuma o Korosu (Slay the Bear)
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Sword
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Melee
[b]Duration:[/b] Instantaneous
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 posts
[b]Description:[/b] The user lands a devastating blow to the base of the skull.  this can cause broken bones, severe bleeding, and has a possibility of knocking out an opponent.  Movement is 15 m/s and deals rank C damage.

[b]Name:[/b] Jakkaru o korosu (Slay the Jackals)
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Sword
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Melee
[b]Duration:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 posts
[b]Description:[/b] A wicked series of four attacks that targets the joints and can crush bones, cause internal bleeding, slice open muscle, and is great for dealing with crowds.  Each attack deals D-Tier damage. If 2 hit the same target, it deals C-Tier damage, and if 4 hit the same target it deals B-Tier damage. The speed of these attacks is 20m/s.

[b]Name:[/b] Four-fold Sigil of Healing
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Magoi
[b]Element:[/b] Life
[b]Class:[/b] Supportive
[b]Range:[/b] 20 meters
[b]Duration:[/b] 1 Post
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 Posts
[b]Description:[/b] A complex sigil of purple light moves from the caster towards the wounded area at 15 m/s, shining on the wounded area, healing 1 C tier or lower wound over the course of two posts.

[b]Name:[/b] Crown of Locusts
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Magoi, 10 Magoi
[b]Element:[/b] Life
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] 20 meters.
[b]Duration:[/b] Sustained
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 posts or sustain+1
[b]Description:[/b] By increasing the size of bacteria in the air, this spell creates locust sized insects that fly around, bite, and obscure the vision and hearing of those in it's area of effect.  The insects cause painful bites to those in the area, but the bites are not powerful enough to cause actual damage.  People within the radius become blinded and deafened.  The caster can control the movement of the swarm.  The Swarm moves at 15 m/s.

[b]Name:[/b] Bliss
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi, 5 Magoi
[b]Element:[/b] Life
[b]Class:[/b] Supportive
[b]Range:[/b] Personal
[b]Duration:[/b] Sustained 3 Posts
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 or Sustain +1
[b]Description:[/b] By targeting the pain receptors in the body, the caster can nullify the pain response.  This allows them to keep fighting at full capacity even when heavily injured.