Altair Loros Spell Caesin

Altair Loros · 1 Altair Loros Spell Caesin 20/10/14, 08:46 pm

Altair Loros

A-Tier

Character Sheet
Magoi:

(300/300)
Stamina:

(100/100)

Name: Caesin
Tier: B
Cost: 30 Magoi
Element: Life
Class: Offensive
Range: 30 Meters
Duration: 4 Posts
Cool-Down: 5 posts
Description: This spell summons up the will of the dragons in a plant-like form. The dragon created is called Caesin. Caesin is 15 meters long and about a meter thick. He has the face of a dragon and the body of a serpent. Caesin is made up of vines, bark, wood, and other fresh plant matter. Once the spell is completed, the dragon is able to fly within a range of 30ft. around the caster and is no longer tied to the ground. Caesin can move at a speed of 20 m/s. Caesin has two attacks. The first is a Bite which deals B tier damage. The second is a breath of wooden shrapnel that deals B tier damage in a 10 meter cone. The breath weapon can only be used once per casting. Caesin is given 1 command upon casting. This can be as Vague or specific as the caster deems necessary. Caesin will follow this command to the best of its ability until the duration expires, at which time it decomposes. If Caesin completes its command before its duration expires, it decomposes prematurely. Caesin is tough. It takes A tier damage to destroy it, or B tier Fire damage.

Vardreth · 2 Re: Altair Loros Spell Caesin 20/10/14, 10:03 pm

Vardreth

Ω-Tier

Character Sheet
Magoi:

(390/390)
Stamina:

(440/440)

*Rolls up sleeves* Prepare yourself, sir. She's not going to look the same once I'm done with her.

Caesin:

Original--v

Name: Caesin
Tier: B
Cost: 30 Magoi
Element: Life
Class: Offensive
Range: 30 Meters
Duration: 4 Posts
Cool-Down: 5 posts
Description: This spell summons up the will of the dragons in a plant-like form. The dragon created is called Caesin. Caesin is 15 meters long and about a meter thick. He has the face of a dragon and the body of a serpent. Caesin is made up of vines, bark, wood, and other fresh plant matter. Once the spell is completed, the dragon is able to fly within a range of 30ft. around the caster and is no longer tied to the ground. Caesin can move at a speed of 20 m/s. Caesin has two attacks. The first is a Bite which deals B tier damage. The second is a breath of wooden shrapnel that deals B tier damage in a 10 meter cone. The breath weapon can only be used once per casting. Caesin is given 1 command upon casting. This can be as Vague or specific as the caster deems necessary. Caesin will follow this command to the best of its ability until the duration expires, at which time it decomposes. If Caesin completes its command before its duration expires, it decomposes prematurely. Caesin is tough. It takes A tier damage to destroy it, or B tier Fire damage.

Bite--v

Code:: [b]Name:[/b] Caesin [b]Tier:[/b] B [b]Cost:[/b] 30|15 [b]Element:[/b] Life [b]Class:[/b] Offensive [b]Range:[/b] 30 Meters [b]Duration:[/b] Sustain [b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 posts [b]Description:[/b] This spell summons up the will of the dragons in a plant-like form, creating the beast from the ground in the form of vines, bark, wood and other plant matter. It forms at 20m/s, detaching from the ground once its formation is complete. Caesin is the dragon's name, and it is 15 meters long and 1 meter thick. He has the face of a dragon and the body of a serpent. Caesin flies at 20 m/s within 30 meters of the caster. Caesin attacks with a Bite at 20m/s which deals B-Tier damage. Caesin is given verbal commands. Caesin will follow this command to the best of its ability until the duration expires, at which time it decomposes.

Breath attack--v

Code:: [b]Name:[/b] Caesin [b]Tier:[/b] B [b]Cost:[/b] 30|15 [b]Element:[/b] Life [b]Class:[/b] Offensive [b]Range:[/b] 30 Meters [b]Duration:[/b] Sustain [b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 posts [b]Description:[/b] This spell summons up the will of the dragons in a plant-like form, creating the beast from the ground in the form of vines, bark, wood and other plant matter. It forms at 20m/s, detaching from the ground once its formation is complete. Caesin is the dragon's name, and it is 15 meters long and 1 meter thick. He has the face of a dragon and the body of a serpent. Caesin flies at 20 m/s within 30 meters of the caster. Caesin fires out a breath of 23m³ wooden shrapnel, fed from its interior body and exiting from its mouth. The cone is 10 meters in length and 6 meters in width and deals B-Tier damage to everything it hits. This cone does not allow the spell to travel further than the effective range of the ability (30 meters from the caster). This leaves Caesin a hollow creature, with a .3m thick shell. Caesin is given verbal commands. Caesin will follow this command to the best of its ability until the duration expires, at which time it decomposes. Sustaining Caesin in a following post allows its body to regrow, and it may fire its breath attack once again.

Even though you're making a brand new creature, the spell itself still follows all ability rules. While Strength abilities can switch up how attacks are delivered (A combo of 2 sword slashes, 1 horizontal and 1 vertical) a spell cannot. My edits are below:

-Added Sustain cost
-Fixed the duration. Please see duration rules here.
-Only 1 type of attack per spell.
-How much damage an ability can take is based on clashing rules.
-I buffed your spell with the 'command' lines. Part of the thing that you had before wasn't necessary.
-Just as an fyi, you can't fly on it unless it is Offensive/Supplementary.
-If you do choose the bite, it can only do that attack once per post.

If you choose the breath attack one, it will need approval from Ari or Yaku as well. I remade it to what I think might be acceptable, but I don't really have much to base it off of.

*Edit: I spoke with Ari, and she didn't have any issues with the breath attack.

Altair Loros · 3 Re: Altair Loros Spell Caesin 21/10/14, 12:06 am

Altair Loros

A-Tier

Character Sheet
Magoi:

(300/300)
Stamina:

(100/100)

ah, ok. So it must always follow spell rules even though it's a new creature. ok, i'm fine with that. As for what to choose, i think i'll go with the bite. the creature i'm basing it on only had that to begin with anyway. But i do have a question. could i add a regenerative effect so that if he is partially destroyed and i sustain the spell, he regenerates?

Vardreth · 4 Re: Altair Loros Spell Caesin 21/10/14, 12:20 am

Vardreth

Ω-Tier

Character Sheet
Magoi:

(390/390)
Stamina:

(440/440)

Yes, of course. I'll add that in there, and if you like it that should be cool. I sure was wondering why you said you were worried when you saw Rithux, since a B-Tier attack can kill it. He sure is intimidating, but it's almost comical on how easy it is to kill him lol.

Code:: [b]Name:[/b] Caesin [b]Tier:[/b] B [b]Cost:[/b] 30|15 [b]Element:[/b] Life [b]Class:[/b] Offensive [b]Range:[/b] 30 Meters [b]Duration:[/b] Sustain [b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 posts [b]Description:[/b] This spell summons up the will of the dragons in a plant-like form, creating the beast from the ground in the form of vines, bark, wood and other plant matter. It forms at 20m/s, detaching from the ground once its formation is complete. Caesin is the dragon's name, and it is 15 meters long and 1 meter thick. He has the face of a dragon and the body of a serpent. Caesin flies at 20 m/s within 30 meters of the caster. Caesin attacks with a Bite at 20m/s which deals B-Tier damage. Caesin is given verbal commands. Caesin will follow this command to the best of its ability until the duration expires, at which time it decomposes. This spell may be sustained to give Caesin the ability to bite again while also regenerating/regrowing any structural damage.