Zafar's Starter Abilities

Name: Zafar - Morior
Tier: D - Tier
Cost: 10 Stamina
Beast Type: Brute
Range: Close
Duration: Instantly
Cool-Down: 2 Posts
Description: Zafar's dashes forward at a rate of 10m/s, up to 5m away. Activating the contact poison from his fur, he intentionally bumps into or rubs against anything in his path. The victim of this technique will suffer from stinging pain that flows throughout their body for 2 posts.

Name: Zafar - Aestus
Tier: C - Tier
Cost: 20 Stamina
Beast Type: Brute
Range: Close
Duration: Instantly
Cool-Down: 3 Posts
Description: afar dashes forward at an enemy within 10m of him at a speed of 15m/s and slashes them with his poisonous claw. The attack deals C-Tier damage and the claws cut halfway through the muscle. This attack carries with it poison, which causes the victim to suffer from sore muscles, stinging pains, minor headaches for 3 posts.

Bump ^_^ These are all the Starters I wish to use.

Zafar - Morior: If he is moving, you would need to include how far he is moving. Duration would be 1 post unless it is sustained, in which you would need to add the sustain cost. Cooldowns will always be at least 1 post longer than the duration.

Zafar - Aestus: Same thing with duration, it would be 1 post unless it is sustained, in which case, you need to add the sustain cost and make the cooldown one post longer than the duration.

Made all changes (hopefully correct)

please add in the range field on the first one~

bump xD

His movement should go off of scale, not range, so it would be 5m. Also please put something in the range field. As it is on contact, put "close"

Name: Zafar - Morior
Tier: D - Tier
Cost: 10 Stamina
Beast Type: Brute
Range: Close
Duration: Instant
Cool-Down: 2 Posts
Description: Zafar's fur becomes poisonous. When getting into physical contact with Zafar (through bumping against each other, ect) the victim will suffer from stinging pain that flows throughout the body for 2 posts. He moves at a speed of 10m/s at his victim up to a range of 5m.

^- Edited out some minor spelling issues. Let me help you out with the ability a bit, and if you like it, feel free to let me know and we'll get it approved. P.s. I changed the distance the dash can cover to the appropriate usage.
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Name: Zafar - Morior
Tier: D - Tier
Cost: 10 Stamina
Beast Type: Brute
Range: Close
Duration: Instant
Cool-Down: 2 Posts
Description: Zafar's dashes forward at a rate of 10m/s, up to 5m away. Activating the contact poison from his fur, he intentionally bumps into or rubs against anything in his path. The victim of this technique will suffer from stinging pain that flows throughout their body for 2 posts.

I cleaned the tech up for you a bit. If you like this version better, feel free to use this.



Name: Zafar - Aestus
Tier: C - Tier
Cost: 20 Stamina
Beast Type: Brute
Range: Close
Duration: Instantly
Cool-Down: 3 Posts
Description: Zafar dashes forward at his enemy at a speed of 15m/s (who has to be within a Range of 10m) and slashes them with his poisonous claw. Upon receiving physical C Tier damage just as cuts halfway through the muscle, the victim will suffer from sore muscles, stinging pains, minor headaches for 3 posts.

^- Edited out some minor spelling issues and brought it down to the correct scale. The range is meant more for things like 'I shoot an attack out that leaves me and goes to them about 10m away'. If it's an attack that's made in close quarters, it's considered 'close'. Lets see if we can't improve this a bit further for you, and if you would prefer this version.
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Name: Zafar - Aestus
Tier: C - Tier
Cost: 20 Stamina
Beast Type: Brute
Range: Close
Duration: Instantly
Cool-Down: 3 Posts
Description: Zafar dashes forward at an enemy within 10m of him at a speed of 15m/s and slashes them with his poisonous claw. The attack deals C-Tier damage and the claws cut halfway through the muscle. This attack carries with it poison, which causes the victim to suffer from sore muscles, stinging pains, minor headaches for 3 posts.





Edit: Please be aware that if you choose to have your movement speed on the dash, your attack moves at the speed of a 'normal' attack, and not at the attack speed of the ability. Alternatively, his dash can be at Zafar's base speed with his attack at the ability speed.

bump ._.

Starters Approved~!

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[center][b]STARTERS[/b][/center]

[b]Name:[/b] Zafar - Morior
[b]Tier:[/b] D - Tier
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
[b]Beast Type:[/b] Brute
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Duration:[/b] Instantly
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 Posts
[b]Description:[/b]  Zafar's dashes forward at a rate of 10m/s, up to 5m away. Activating the contact poison from his fur, he intentionally bumps into or rubs against anything in his path. The victim of this technique will suffer from stinging pain that flows throughout their body for 2 posts.

[b]Name:[/b] Zafar - Aestus
[b]Tier:[/b] C - Tier
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Stamina
[b]Beast Type:[/b] Brute
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Duration:[/b] Instantly
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 Posts
[b]Description:[/b] afar dashes forward at an enemy within 10m of him at a speed of 15m/s and slashes them with his poisonous claw. The attack deals C-Tier damage and the claws cut halfway through the muscle. This attack carries with it poison, which causes the victim to suffer from sore muscles, stinging pains, minor headaches for 3 posts.