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1A new hunt (chain) Empty A new hunt (chain) 21/10/23, 02:24 pm

Babi

Babi
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Job Name:new hunting grounds
Job Rank:d
Job Location:helio
Job Reward:50xp 3k huang
Job Prerequisites:n/a
Job Overview: Babi has found a city to call his home. Now he must explore the city as well as his prey before he can start the hunt.

Job Name:stalking
Job Rank:d
Job Location:helio
Job Reward:50xp 3k huang
Job Prerequisites:new hunting grounds
Job Overview: After getting the lay of the land Babi goes out for the hunt. He is looking for an isolated and weak creature to become his prey, one that would surely not be missed. He needs to find a prey and follow it, observing it's patterns and environment to make sure that there was no possible danger for the snake.

Job Name: Pursuit
Job Rank:d
Job Location:helio
Job Reward:50xp 3k huang
Job Prerequisites:stalking
Job Overview:the prey caught wind of babi attempt and is not fleeing. Babi must not let it get away. He must pursue the prey before they have a chance to escape and alert others.

Job Name:Whoops
Job Rank:C
Job Location:Helio
Job Reward:100xp 7k huang
Job Prerequisites:Pursuit
Job Overview: in the process of devouring the prey he is caught. Leave no witnesses. Specifically disposing the guard that has caught him and devouring the body.

Enemy Name: City Guard
Enemy Tier:B
Damage Required to Defeat:B
Description:A skilled heliohaptian guard that is armed with a khopesh, a shield and a spear, all with b tier damage and durability.
Abilities:
  • Rejected: Raises their tower shield deflecting oncoming attacks of B tier or lower with their shield
  • Wandering Sand Style Sandstorm: digging their blade into the sand they spin around, kicking sand in the air all around them to blind their opponents.
  • Wandering Sand Style Scorpions Dance: using the long reach of the spear, they retract the spear all the way back, choking up on it till their hand is under the head before thrusting it out at blinging speeds dealing A tier damage.



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2A new hunt (chain) Empty Re: A new hunt (chain) 24/10/23, 01:52 pm

Klara

Klara
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Hi, so I will be your reviewer. Lets see if we can get this rolling.

Most your missions seem good, though the descriptions are very bare. I won't complain about it (or hold approval back) but I cant promise someone else wont. Your last mission description does not have an objective. I would assume it is the defeat that npc that you created but I need you to actually give the objective. Are you trying to flee? Murder? seduce?

Once this is done you should be good and I can give my 1/2

side note. You did not include a chain reward. I assume you are opting out of the chain bonus?

3A new hunt (chain) Empty Re: A new hunt (chain) 08/11/23, 10:56 pm

Klara

Klara
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1/2

4A new hunt (chain) Empty Re: A new hunt (chain) 22/11/23, 09:59 am

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