Klara's Ability Discover (starter abilities)

Tier: D Tier
Class: Body Manipulator
Type: Supplementary
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Requires the user to point their arm at the target.
Scaling: Range
Sustain: N/A
Cool Down: 1
Cost: 10 Stamina
Description:

The user stretches either of their arms from their location up to 30 meters. Then the user pulls their arm back, dragging anything if they grab something or pulls themselves if what they grab can't be moved.

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Tier: D Tier
Class: Body Manipulator
Type: Supplementary
Range: close
Requirements/Drawbacks: Requires the user to have the severed limb connected to the point of separation.
Scaling: N/A
Sustain: N/A
Cool Down: 1
Cost: 10 Stamina
Description:

The user connects their missing limb to where it was removed and reconnects the limb. This does not heal the user and only returns function of the limb.

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Tier: D Tier
Class: Body Manipulator
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Requirements/Drawbacks: Her flesh with wiggle and twist around the chosen arm for this ability.
Scaling: AoE
Sustain: N/A
Cool Down: 1
Cost: 10 Stamina
Description:

Bone spikes erupt from the user's chosen arm (weaving around the users gear to not damage it) and does D Tier damage to targets up to 10 meters of the limb.

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Tier: D Tier
Class: Body Manipulator
Type: Supplementary
Range: close
Requirements/Drawbacks: The user has to crack one of their knuckles to activate the ability.
Scaling: Duration
Sustain: N/A
Cool Down: 1
Cost: 10 Stamina
Description:

After cracking their knuckles of either of their fist, bone covers the user chosen knuckle and forearm. Physical Damage done from that limb stuns 1 Limb.

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Tier: C Tier
Class: Body Manipulator
Type: Offensive (Sustain)
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: The user has to grow and pull the bone out of her body.
Scaling: Duration
Sustain: N/A
Cool Down: 2
Cost: 20 Stamina
Description:

Bones grow out of the user’s left arm and form a bone scythe. The Scythe is a C Tier weapon. It has C Tier item durability. The blade portion is sharp and can slice and impale. The weapon deals C-Tier Damage. The blade of the scythe is 1 meters with the handle being .5 meters

Relevant Traits:
-You list this a lot but the racial strength and speed you have isn't actually relevant to any of these abilities.
For example:
Stretching the arm wont be any faster than the stretching of any other race. You can use your strength once you grab something, but that isn't relevant to the ability just the context of using traits and abilities together. But clashing wise, the systems any D-tier ability clashing would bat away or beat back your stretched limb regardless of what tier your racial strength is at.

Same goes for the others, regardless of the strength or speed level you've reached racially, the abilities will be equal to any other ability of the same tier as far as clashing goes.

Together Again:
-Body Manipulation can provide methods to mitigate damage, but it can't heal a severed limb. So the best this ability can do is use muscle control to hold the severed limb in place but it'll need a duration as its just a temporary fix. Being able to connect the nerves to use the severed portion once connected is also a bit too complex for a D-tier ability.
-A duration scaling might be fitting for this given the above issue.

Spiked Carapace:
-Requirement should include some action or phenomenon as a prelude to the attack such as moving the arm in a specifically defined way or the flesh wriggling over the area the bones are about to burst from.
-Please state specifically that it deals D-tier damage. Adding on racial strength for damage is something done independent of the base ability and only when not getting clashed by an equal or greater ability.

Ant's Chitin:
-The effect doesn't seem to match what is being done. Growing a bone gauntlet wouldn't cause stuns, it would give you protection. I understand it concept of blunt attacks dealing stun damage in video games like monster hunter, but there would need to be another aspect to this for it to inflict a stun like striking the target on their funny bone or temple which technically doesn't require you to have the bone shell.
-I suggest changing this into a defensive ability that grants item durability bone and then set the scaling to strength instead of duration so its a life saving move in case you find yourself in a dangerous event early on. But you are welcome to restructure it in a different way if that doesn't interest you.

Reaping Mantis
-The number of limbs you can use actually expand with your class tier, not your ability tiers. So you aren't able to make a two limb ability yet.
-The amount of bone generation and manipulation here should really have a trait supporting it. So maybe make a trait to better enable abilities like this.

I removed Together Again and Ant Chitin. As i wish to have some of my abilities approved sooner so i can RP with a friend.

Removed the relative traits as requested

Made a minor change to the Drawback/requirement section of Spider Silk. (Changed it from first person to third person) Didnt alter the actual requirement

Altered Spiked Carapace requirement/drawback as per your suggestion

Added D-tier Damaged to Spike Carapace as requested

I reworked Reaping mantis. It now creates just a scythe. I gave the scythe dimensions and a picture.

bump

Spider Silk and Spiked Carapace are 1/2 approved.

Reaping Mantis still has a chain with is a bit much for this stage of body manipulation in terms of complexity. How about replacing the chain with a tendon whip? Same resulting functionality through a much more simple expression of manipulation? Don't forget to mention the dimensions of the whip too! One last thing, the durability should specify item durability as armor durability has a different value

Zion wrote:Spider Silk and Spiked Carapace are 1/2 approved.

Reaping Mantis still has a chain with is a bit much for this stage of body manipulation in terms of complexity. How about replacing the chain with a tendon whip? Same resulting functionality through a much more simple expression of manipulation? Don't forget to mention the dimensions of the whip too! One last thing, the durability should specify item durability as armor durability has a different value

I am so sorry about that. I was trying to remove the chain with this iteration but missed it. All references to it should be gone now, i also changed to Item Durability as requested

1/2 Approved the following 3 abilities

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[center][b]Spider Silk[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Body Manipulator
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Requires the user to point their arm at the target.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Range
[b]Sustain:[/b] N/A
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]The user stretches either of their arms from their location up to 30 meters. Then the user pulls their arm back, dragging anything if they grab something or pulls themselves if what they grab can't be moved. [/list]

[center][b]Spiked Carapace[/b][/center]
[b]
[b]Tier:[/b] D Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Body Manipulator
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Short
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Her flesh with wiggle and twist around the chosen arm for this ability.
[b]Scaling:[/b] AoE
[b]Sustain:[/b] N/A
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[/b]
[list]Bone spikes erupt from the user's chosen arm (weaving around the users gear to not damage it) and does D Tier damage to targets up to 10 meters of the limb.[/list]

[center][b]Reaping Mantis[/b][/center]
[b]
[b]Tier:[/b] C Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Body Manipulator
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive (Sustain)
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] The user has to grow and pull the bone out of her body.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Duration
[b]Sustain:[/b] N/A
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 2
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
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[list]Bones grow out of the user’s left arm and form a bone scythe. The Scythe is a C Tier weapon. It has C Tier item durability. The blade portion is sharp and can slice and impale. The weapon deals C-Tier Damage. The blade of the scythe is 1 meters with the handle being .5 meters [/list]
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<img src="https://i.servimg.com/u/f42/19/74/97/55/thresh10.png" width="25%" height="25%">[/b]

2/2 the following 3 abilities