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1Tenma's Starter Ability Empty Tenma's Starter Ability on 19/04/15, 01:24 pm

Mikazuki Tenma

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Name: Iaido
Tier: D-Tier
Cost:10 | 5 sustained
Weapon Type: Katana
Class: Offensive
Range: Close
Cool-Down: 2 posts or Sustain+1
Description:The user will draws katana from its sheath and attacks immediately, this move often surprised the target who not even realized the sword is moving at 10m/s. The user usually targets the neck of their target’s body. This attack will deal D-Tier damage.

Name: Tameshigiri
Tier: D-Tier
Cost:10 | 5 sustained
Weapon Type: Katana
Class: Offensive
Range: Close
Cool-Down: 2 posts or Sustain+1
Description:The user will sends out a quick sharp slash at 10m/s that will deal D-Tier damage.

Name: Cleave
Tier: D-Tier
Cost:10 | 5 sustained
Weapon Type: Katana
Class: Offensive
Range: Close
Cool-Down: 2 posts or Sustain+1
Description: The user will lift his blade and sends out a slash downwards to the target at 10m/s that will deal D-Tier damage.

Name: Simple Cut
Tier: D-Tier
Cost:10 | 5 sustained
Weapon Type: Katana
Class: Offensive
Range: Close
Cool-Down: 2 posts or Sustain+1
Description:The user uses his blade and will send a slash to his target’s abdomen horizontally at 10m/s that will deal D-Tier damage.


Name: Skull Cracker
Tier: C-Tier
Cost: 20 | 10 sustained
Weapon Type: Legs
Class: Offensive
Range: Close
Cool-Down: 3 posts or Sustain+1
Description: The user is able to send 2 kicks to the target by lifting the leg to straight up without bending the knee, once the user foot is above the target, the user will bring it down to strike through with power and continue to land another strike by using the knee of the free leg. The speed of the ability will be 15m/s, it will deal C-Tier damage if all kicks hit otherwise each kick will deal D-Tier damage.




Last edited by Mikazuki Tenma on 19/04/15, 01:55 pm; edited 1 time in total


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2Tenma's Starter Ability Empty Re: Tenma's Starter Ability on 19/04/15, 01:38 pm

Vardreth

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First thing I would like to mention is that starter abilities are 4 D-Tier abilities and 1 C-Tier ability. You have 4 C-Tier abilities and 1 D-Tier ability.

Aside from that, one of the things I want to clear up is your Parry ability. It is a defensive/supplementary ability because it can potentially push an opponent away from you. You use the term 'block' in the text, which suggests that you hold your blade up and allow it to take the brunt of the attack. An actual parry, where you redirect the blow to the side and defend against an attack in that manner, would make more sense for your ability but I don't know which one you want to go with.

Skull Cracker doesn't mention the damage each strike causes.


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3Tenma's Starter Ability Empty Re: Tenma's Starter Ability on 19/04/15, 01:56 pm

Mikazuki Tenma

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BUMP!


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4Tenma's Starter Ability Empty Re: Tenma's Starter Ability on 19/04/15, 02:52 pm

Vardreth

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I made some minor wording changes, but everything here is approved ^_^.


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[b]Name:[/b] Iaido
[b]Tier:[/b] D-Tier
[b]Cost:[/b]10 | 5 sustained
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Katana
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts or Sustain+1
[b]Description:[/b]The user draws their katana from its sheath and attacks immediately, with the sword moving at 10m/s. This attack will deal D-Tier damage.

[b]Name:[/b] Tameshigiri
[b]Tier:[/b] D-Tier
[b]Cost:[/b]10 | 5 sustained
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Katana
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts or Sustain+1
[b]Description:[/b]The user sends out a quick sharp slash at 10m/s that deals D-Tier damage.

[b]Name:[/b] Cleave
[b]Tier:[/b] D-Tier
[b]Cost:[/b]10 | 5 sustained
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Katana
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts or Sustain+1
[b]Description:[/b] The user lifts his blade and sends out a slash downwards to the target at 10m/s that deals D-Tier damage.

[b]Name:[/b] Simple Cut
[b]Tier:[/b] D-Tier
[b]Cost:[/b]10 | 5 sustained
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Katana
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts or Sustain+1
[b]Description:[/b]The user sends a horizontal slash to his target’s abdomen with his blade at 10m/s that deals D-Tier damage.

[b]Name:[/b] Skull Cracker
[b]Tier:[/b] C-Tier
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 | 10 sustained
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Legs
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 posts or Sustain+1
[b]Description:[/b] The user is able to send 2 kicks to the target by lifting the leg to straight up without bending the knee, once the user foot is above the target, the user will bring it down to strike through with power and continue to land another strike by using the knee of the free leg. The speed of the ability will be 15m/s, it will deal C-Tier damage if all kicks hit otherwise each kick will deal D-Tier damage.


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