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Imuchakk Outcast Martial Arts, First Revision

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Kotanan

Kotanan
D-Tier
D-Tier

Skyrise
Tier: D
Class: Warrior
Type: Defensive
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: Character must be using a polearm or long, staff-like weapon.
Scaling: Defense
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 1
Cost: 10
Description:

    The user takes a bracing stance with the weapon pointed downwards and then swings it upwards at an oncoming physically based attack or object capable of D-tier Damage. Any physical object or attack caught by this technique is knocked upwards into the air away from the user.


Aureal Fang
Tier: C
Class: Warrior
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Requirements/Drawbacks: Character must be using a bladed or edged weapon.
Scaling: Damage
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 2
Cost: 20
Description:

    The user makes a spiraling stab into the opponent's body and upon withdrawing the weapon from the opponent they further twist the blade as they break away, tearing open a bleeding wound that inflicts D-tier Damage to the victim once per post for two posts.


Skyshock
Tier: C
Class: Warrior
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Requirements/Drawbacks: Character must be using a polearm or other long, staff-like weapon
Scaling: Duration
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 2
Cost: 20
Description:

    The user lashes out with their weapon before smashing the top of it into the shoulder of an opponent, then quickly swings the weapon's bottom half upwards to catch the opponent's hip in one fluid motion. This causes intense shock to both areas for 1 post, rendering one arm and one leg paralyzed until the effect wears off.


Skyfall
Tier: C
Class: Warrior
Type: Offensive
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Character must be using a polearm or other long, staff-like weapon
Scaling: Damage
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 2
Cost: 20
Description:

    The user makes a running leap at an opponent that carries them up to 10m across an area with their weapon aimed to slam into their target. Deals C-tier damage upon landing and allows the user to clear vertical height of 5m during the leap.


Aureal Mist
Tier: C
Class: Warrior
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Requirements/Drawbacks: Character must be using a polearm or other long, staff-like weapon
Scaling: Hits
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 2
Cost: 20
Description:

    The user incorporates a sliding, twisting motion into a single strike that allows the weapon's own natural motion to recoil it after each strike, allowing the user to make two parallel D-tier Damage hits on a single target.



Last edited by Kotanan on 21/02/21, 04:56 am; edited 2 times in total

Diana Corvus

Diana Corvus
A-Tier
A-Tier

Aureal Fang

The D Tier bleed should be reduced to one post.

Since if you have a damage effect prior, causing two more instances of D Tier damage after that causes you to go over the tier allowance for this ability.

If you want to keep it at two posts, you'd have to get rid of the D Tier stab damage. Alternatively, change it to one post and instead of damage scaling, you could use duration scaling.

Other than that, these all seem good!


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Kotanan

Kotanan
D-Tier
D-Tier

Fixed it all up, I decided to stick with Damage scaling and remove the initial stab!


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Julius Plageuis

Julius Plageuis
A-Tier
A-Tier

Aureal Fang: Either make it C tier for one post or D tier for 2.


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Julius Plageuis

Julius Plageuis
A-Tier
A-Tier

1/2


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Diana Corvus

Diana Corvus
A-Tier
A-Tier

2/2


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