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1Bakari's Starters Empty Bakari's Starters 17/08/20, 04:06 am

Bakari Al-Amin

Bakari Al-Amin
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D-Tier

Rada' tarabi
Tier: D
Class: Magician
Type:Defensive
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks:Must know strength magic. Must be able to speak. Must have a staff. Must have dirt, sand, or small stones in close proximity.
Scaling: Defense
Sustain: -
Cool Down: 1 post
Cost: 10 magoi|5 to Sustain
Description:

    The magician says the incantation "Rada' tarabi!"and pounds the butt of his staff into the ground commanding the rukh to convert magoi into a force that will gather dirt, sand, and small stones within the area (1 meter radius around and below the caster) and compress the gathered material against the Magician's body. This creates a barrier that will absorb D-tier damage before being destroyed. Once cast this spell lasts 1 post unless sustained.


Alsaahir alyad
Tier: D
Class: Magician
Type: Supplementary
Range: Long
Requirements/Drawbacks: Must know strength magic. Must be able to speak. Must have a staff.
Scaling: Range
Sustain: -
Cool Down: 1
Cost: 10 Magoi| 5 to Sustain
Description:

    The Magician points his staff at an object, and speaks the incantation "Alsaahir alyad!" commanding the Rukh to convert magoi into pure force and take hold of the target. The Magician may then move the object through the air by directing it with movements his staff. The object must be within 10m (scaled up to +5m for each 10 Magoi spent.) to be effected, and may never go outside of that distance or the spell ends. An object being moved in this way can vary in speed but at the fastest is slightly faster than a man running. This spell does not cause damage, however thrown or falling objects may deal damage of their own. This spell lasts for 1 post unless sustained  


Muhnat albina
Tier: D
Specialization: Magician
Type: Supplementary
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: Must know strength magic. Must have a staff. Must be able to speak.
Scaling: AoE
Sustain: -
Cool Down: -
Cost: 10|5
Description:

    The Magician taps a large stone or area (no bigger than 5 meters in any dimension +5m per 10 magoi spent scaling) of stone with their staff and speaks the incantation "Muhnat albina!" commanding the Rukh to direct magoi into the microscopic cracks and defects in the stone according to the Magician's will and convert it to expanding kinetic force. When converted into kinetic force the rock shatters leaving behind cleanly carved stone of the desired shape. This spell was never intended to create works of art, and by itself can create nothing requiring great artistic skill without the caster having a profession that imparts that skill. It can however create crude but identifiable forms, and useful objects like stone tool parts or bricks. Cannot cause damage damage to creatures, but will deal D-Tier ability damage to structures/objects made of stone.


Risasat harakia
Tier: D
Class: Magician
Type: offensive
Range: Long
Requirements/Drawbacks: Must be a Magician. Must know strength magic. Must have a staff. Must be able to speak.
Scaling: Hits (+1 projectile per 10 Magoi spent)
Sustain: -
Cool Down: 1 post
Cost: 10 Magoi|5 to Sustain
Description:

    The magician aims their staff at a target, and speaks the incantation "Risasat harakia!" commanding the Rukh to convert magoi into a black sphere (1cm in diameter) of pure force at the tip of the staff, and launch it forward at a speed of sling stone being hurled. This orb deals D-tier damage upon impact. If the sphere travels more than 10m without striking a target the spell ends.


Alnabd alharakiu
Tier: C
Class: Magician
Type: Offensive
Range: Medium (5m)
Requirements/Drawbacks: Must be a Magician. Must know strength magic. Must have a staff. Must be able to speak.
Scaling: AoE
Sustain: -
Cool Down: 2 posts
Cost: 20 Magoi|10 to sustain
Description:

    The magician grasps the staff with both hands and pulls it in tight against their chest while speaking the incantation "Alnabd alharakiu!" commanding the Rukh to form a black ring of force around the Magician's midsection. This ring rapidly expands at the speed of an arrow out to 5m with the Magician in the center. The ring deals c-tier damage on contact, and pushes the target back to it's outer edge.

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Last edited by Bakari Al-Amin on 17/08/20, 04:03 pm; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : Corrections, and swaping flight for Muhnat albina)

2Bakari's Starters Empty Re: Bakari's Starters 17/08/20, 12:15 pm

Merrze

Merrze
Ω-Tier
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Overall: I see some of your abilities have speeds, speeds aren't apart of the system any more and the only speeds we use are movement or comparison. So it's good to compare it to speed of animal or something else depending on the spell.

Rada' tarabi D-tier abilities can have a duration of one post, the duration possible increases by on each tier. As you can tell as well once the armor is destroyed the duration ends, otherwise besides that one thing this ability is great.

Alsaahir alyad 1 post as well, this is fine just keep in mind you can only move objects not people

Flight This doesn't count as one of your starters so feel free to make an ability in its place, you get access to this for being a magician.

Risasat harakia Remove the speed or compare it to something otherwise this is fine ^-^


Alnabd alharakiu
Pushing players is generally a supplementary effect requiring its only ability but yours could be jumped over or pushed against at the risk of damage. So that part will be fine just keep in mind since that's not the focus or a primary effect of the ability any player could push past with a little force. You could split it between the two effects and just lower the strength but I think just keeping the damage and the risk is better for you.

3Bakari's Starters Empty Re: Bakari's Starters 17/08/20, 04:06 pm

Bakari Al-Amin

Bakari Al-Amin
D-Tier
D-Tier

Changes made, and I am okay with there being a high chance of dodging Alnabd alharakiu. It is mainly intended to drive back/away close up enemies, and punish them for trying to "geek the mage" so if they dodge logically it is still doing part of it's job :).

4Bakari's Starters Empty Re: Bakari's Starters 17/08/20, 04:41 pm

Merrze

Merrze
Ω-Tier
Ω-Tier

Honestly I can't wait to see your later ideas as well, starters approved!

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[center][b]Rada' tarabi[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b]Defensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b]Must know strength magic. Must be able to speak. Must have a staff. Must have dirt, sand, or small stones in close proximity.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Defense
[b]Sustain:[/b] -
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 magoi|5 to Sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
The magician says the incantation "Rada' tarabi!"and pounds the butt of his staff into the ground commanding the rukh to convert magoi into a force that will gather dirt, sand, and small stones within the area (1 meter radius around and below the caster) and compress the gathered material against the Magician's body. This creates a barrier that will absorb D-tier damage before being destroyed. Once cast this spell lasts 1 post unless sustained.[/list]

[center][b]Alsaahir alyad[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Long
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Must know strength magic. Must be able to speak. Must have a staff.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Range
[b]Sustain:[/b] -
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi| 5 to Sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
The Magician points his staff at an object, and speaks the incantation "Alsaahir alyad!" commanding the Rukh to convert magoi into pure force and take hold of the target. The Magician may then move the object through the air by directing it with movements his staff. The object must be within 10m (scaled up to +5m for each 10 Magoi spent.) to be effected, and may never go outside of that distance or the spell ends. An object being moved in this way can vary in speed but at the fastest is slightly faster than a man running. This spell does not cause damage, however thrown or falling objects may deal damage of their own. This spell lasts for 1 post unless sustained  [/list]

[center][b]Muhnat albina[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Specialization:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Must know strength magic. Must have a staff. Must be able to speak.
[b]Scaling:[/b] AoE
[b]Sustain:[/b] -
[b]Cool Down:[/b] -
[b]Cost:[/b] 10|5
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
The Magician taps a large stone or area (no bigger than 5 meters in any dimension +5m per 10 magoi spent scaling) of stone with their staff and speaks the incantation "Muhnat albina!" commanding the Rukh to direct magoi into the microscopic cracks and defects in the stone according to the Magician's will and convert it to expanding kinetic force. When converted into kinetic force the rock shatters leaving behind cleanly carved stone of the desired shape. This spell was never intended to create works of art, and by itself can create nothing requiring great artistic skill without the caster having a profession that imparts that skill. It can however create crude but identifiable forms, and useful objects like stone tool parts or bricks. Cannot cause damage damage to creatures, but will deal D-Tier ability damage to structures/objects made of stone.[/list]

[center][b]Risasat harakia[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Long
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Must be a Magician. Must know strength magic. Must have a staff. Must be able to speak.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Hits (+1 projectile per 10 Magoi spent)
[b]Sustain:[/b] -
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi|5 to Sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
The magician aims their staff at a target, and speaks the incantation "Risasat harakia!" commanding the Rukh to convert magoi into a black sphere (1cm in diameter) of pure force at the tip of the staff, and launch it forward at a speed of sling stone being hurled. This orb deals D-tier damage upon impact. If the sphere travels more than 10m without striking a target the spell ends.[/list]

[center][b]Alnabd alharakiu[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Medium (5m)
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Must be a Magician. Must know strength magic. Must have a staff. Must be able to speak.
[b]Scaling:[/b] AoE
[b]Sustain:[/b] -
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 2 posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Magoi|10 to sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
The magician grasps the staff with both hands and pulls it in tight against their chest while speaking the incantation "Alnabd alharakiu!" commanding the Rukh to form a black ring of force around the Magician's midsection. This ring rapidly expands at the speed of an arrow out to 5m with the Magician in the center. The ring deals c-tier damage on contact, and pushes the target back to it's outer edge.[/list]
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