Ghost Training list

Tier: D
Class: Magician
Type: supplementary
Range: Long
Requirements/Drawbacks: Must ball fist up.
Scaling: double hit.
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 1
Cost: 10
Description:

By gathering the ruhk in his stave. The user will create an orb made of pure light. The orb being ten cm wide and ten cm long. By pressing into this orb. The light will burst out all around him up to five meters. All who is caught up in this light will receive D tier damage.

Tier: D
Class: Magician
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: Must make a prayer stance before using.
Scaling:  D rank Burn effect.
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 1
Cost: 10
Description:

By channeling the ruhk this will allow Ghost to tap into his grace The All Mighty Comos. By using his wand or Staff and praying he taps into the power of the cosmos and light magic to create to a light construct which is 3m tall and performs a karate chop dealing D-tier damage in the form of burns."

Solar Eyes- this way too strong for a D-tier ability, the size is far too long, and complete vision of such complexity wouldn't be possible for a D-tier spell as that would require consistent bending of light since it's not through an additional physical feature. I think you'll have to wait till B or A to get an ability like this.

Solar Sword Ghost: Level 1 The dimensions on this seem rather awkward and like they might be too large for a construct, and as it would be made of pure light it would be doing burning damage. Try to define the shape and sizes and bit more with just cms or meters, you can put the imperial measurements of inches and feet into parenthesis. I like the theme and concept its just hard to visualize at the moment.

Ok i change things around to fit the levels

Solar Eyes- Change it to 10m and make sure to include your wand/staff in the ability. And you can get the same effect by saying something along the line of "The user commands the rukh to amplify the light of anything within 10m of your eyesight by causing light to hit the objects within their line of sight to reflect back stronger making them more visible" As this is about line of sight and isn't about damage those measurements should be acceptable.

Solar Sword Ghost Level1- Dimensions are still a bit odd, by long do you mean tall? as right now it's described like a hot dog with a sword almost. You could say something along the lines of "By using his wand or Staff and praying he taps into the power of the cosmos and light magic to create to a light construct which is 3m tall and performs a karate chop dealing D-tier damage in the form of burns." That would still be the same dimensions you were looking for if my guess was right. Also the ability would only be offensive

Its fixed up

Solar Beam: You have to include use of your staff when casting spells and you changed this to an offensive ability without changing the actual type, there's no such thing as D-tier speeds speed is only for character movement and even then it's mostly fluff. You also do not have an actual third eye to channel rukh you must use your wand or staff.

That move was to much like my old one i changed it up.

Ready for review

Approved for training

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[center][b]Solar Law[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Long
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Must ball fist up.
[b]Scaling:[/b] double hit.
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1
[b]Cost:[/b] 10
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
By gathering the ruhk in his stave. The user will create an orb made of pure light. The orb being ten cm wide and ten cm long. By pressing into this orb. The light will burst out all around him up to five meters. All who is caught up in this light will receive D tier damage.[/list]


[center][b]Solar Sword Ghost Level1[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive/Defensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Must make a prayer stance before using.
[b]Scaling:[/b]  D rank Burn effect.
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1
[b]Cost:[/b] 10
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
By channeling the ruhk this will allow Ghost to tap into his grace The All Mighty Comos. By using his wand or Staff and praying he taps into the power of the cosmos and light magic to create to a light construct which is 3m tall and performs a karate chop dealing D-tier damage in the form of burns."[/list]

New training lost needs the ok

Tier: C-tier
Class: Magician
Type: Supplementary
Range: Long
Requirements/Drawbacks: User must spin their staff in a circle then grab it with both hands as commanding the rukh.
Scaling: Duration- The duration of the effect is increased by 1 post per 10 magoi invested.
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 2 posts
Cost: 20 Magoi | 10 Magoi
Description:

The user twils their staff while commanding the rukh in order to form a Halo behind them which emits a field of light 10m in diameter. Anything caught within the flash of light is blinded for 2 posts.

Tier: C-tier
Class: Magician
Type: Supplementary
Range: Self
Requirements/Drawbacks: User must tap their staff while chanting the name of the spell
Scaling: Buff- The strength of the buff is increased by one tier per 10 magoi invested.
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 2 posts
Cost: 20 Magoi | 10 Magoi
Description: The user taps their staff against the floor or their hand, commanding the rukh to cover that half of the staff tapped with a veil of light. The light lets the magic staff deal C-tier damage in the form of light burns, the buff lasting for 2 posts.



Tier: C-tier
Class: Magician
Type: Offensive
Range: Long
Requirements/Drawbacks: User must twirl their staff, construct is only light and still has the same properties
Scaling: Range- The range the construct can fly is increased by 5m per 10 magoi invested
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 2 posts
Cost: 20 Magoi | 10 Magoi
Description: The user twils their staff while chanting, creating a illusinonary clone of themselves which can fly up to 20m away from them in any direction when casted, the clone does C-tier damage to the first thing it hits.



Tier: C-tier
Class: Magician
Type: Offensive
Range: Long
Requirements/Drawbacks: User must have a clear sight of target while aiming their staff and chanting the spell.
Scaling: Range- the range is increased by 5m per 10 magoi invested
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 2 posts
Cost: 20 Magoi | 10 Magoi
Description: Pointing their staff at an opponent the user commands the light to form the image of a burning blade 36cm long and 9cm wide which flies forward up to 20m towards the target dealing C-tier damage upon hit.



Tier: B-tier
Class: Magician
Type: Offensive
Range: Long
Requirements/Drawbacks: User must hold their staff with both hands while chanting the name of the spell like a prayer.
Scaling:
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 3 posts
Cost: 30 Magoi | 15 Magoi
Description: Holding their staff in a prayer with both hands the user commands to the rukh creating a great warrior of light 5m tall who appears anywhere from up to 10m away, the construct then strikes with both hands burning those hit with B-tier light damage.

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I don't see anything wrong with them. If you decide to use vouchers to train them, just post the link to your purchase in this thread.

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[center][b]Twilight: Flash[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C-tier
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Long
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] User must spin their staff in a circle then grab it with both hands as commanding the rukh.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Duration- The duration of the effect is increased by 1 post per 10 magoi invested.
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 2 posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Magoi | 10 Magoi
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
The user twils their staff while commanding the rukh in order to form a Halo behind them which emits a field of light 10m in diameter. Anything caught within the flash of light is blinded for 2 posts.[/list]

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[center][b]Twilight: Light of Ghost[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C-tier
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Self
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] User must tap their staff while chanting the name of the spell
[b]Scaling:[/b] Buff- The strength of the buff is increased by one tier per 10 magoi invested.
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 2 posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Magoi | 10 Magoi
[b]Description:[/b] The user taps their staff against the floor or their hand, commanding the rukh to cover that half of the staff tapped with a veil of light. The light lets the magic staff deal C-tier damage in the form of light burns, the buff lasting for 2 posts.

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[center][b]Twilight: Double Trouble[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C-tier
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Long
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] User must twirl their staff, construct is only light and still has the same properties
[b]Scaling:[/b] Range- The range the construct can fly is increased by 5m per 10 magoi invested
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 2 posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Magoi | 10 Magoi
[b]Description:[/b] The user twils their staff while chanting, creating a illusinonary clone of themselves which can fly up to 20m away from them in any direction when casted, the clone does C-tier damage to the first thing it hits.

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[center][b]Twilight:Signs of Excalibur[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C-tier
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Long
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] User must have a clear sight of target while aiming their staff and chanting the spell.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Range- the range is increased by 5m per 10 magoi invested
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 2 posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Magoi | 10 Magoi
[b]Description:[/b] Pointing their staff at an opponent the user commands the light to form the image of a burning blade 36cm long and 9cm wide which flies forward up to 20m towards the target dealing C-tier damage upon hit.

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[center][b]Twilight: Signs Of Eden[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] B-tier
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Long
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] User must hold their staff with both hands while chanting the name of the spell like a prayer.
[b]Scaling:[/b]
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 3 posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Magoi | 15 Magoi
[b]Description:[/b] Holding their staff in a prayer with both hands the user commands to the rukh creating a great warrior of light 5m tall who appears anywhere from up to 10m away, the construct then strikes with both hands burning those hit with B-tier light damage.

https://magiworld.forumotion.com/t2277p350-ability-vouchers

My voucher link for all the above

All good to go !