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1Fresh Abilities  Empty Fresh Abilities on 21/02/18, 12:05 am

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Gear
Tier: C-tier
Class: Body Manipulator
Type: Supplementary
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks:Taavetti is required to spread his legs, and place his fist on the floor before initationing the technique. It takes it toll on his metabolism, requiring for large portions of food to be ate prior.
Scaling: Damage
Sustain: 0
Cooldown: 2
Cost: 20 Stamina | 10 Sustain
Description:

  • Taavetti uses his legs as pumps to increase his blood flow in all of his body parts. As a side result of the increasing of his blood flow, it looks as if he’s steaming.
  • Thus increasing his natural strength, and speed to D-tier. It lasts 2 post.



Bastet Armor II
Tier: B-tier
Class: Body Manipulator
Type: Defensive
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: He must bite a hole into arms allowing oxygen to expand the limbs.
Scaling: Reinflation: Adding 10 stamina the user can reinflated the deflated limb after it had been broken, or post limit has passed.  
Sustain: 0
Cooldown: 3
Cost: 30 Stamina | 15 Sustain
Description:

  • Taavettis blows airs into the hole in his arm, bringing fat tissues to the surface of his skin on his arms. Allowing the fat tissue to feel like harden rubber to absorb, and cushion the impact thus blocking it.
  • Being fat tissue the ‘wick effect’ applies, in where the fat tissues can be set ablaze. For them to catch ablaze, the user must have a means to ignite his arms letting the seeping flames into his skins.
  • It would take one instance of B-tier damage to break this ability. It lasts 2 post. After reinflation it lasts 2 post again.

    Slippery Elbows
    Tier: C-tier
    Class: Body Manipulator
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Medium
    Requirements/Drawbacks: He must open his sweat glands by rotating his arms clockwise.
    Scaling: Hits
    Sustain: 0
    Cooldown: 2 Post
    Cost: 20 Stamina | 10 Sustain
    Description:

      Manipulating the sweat pouring off his arms. He creates slicers on both his elbows, and throws them 5m off his arm in fluid motion. Each slicer 3m in length, deals D-tier cutting damage.


    End-Game
    Tier: C-Tier
    Class: Body Manipulator
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Close
    Requirements/Drawbacks: He must elongate his hands, before biting down on both thumbs at the same time. Allowing the oxygen around to increase the size of his hands to a miniature boulder( 8 cubic square feet ).  
    Scaling: Damage
    Sustain: 0
    Cooldown: 2 Post
    Cost: 20 Stamina ; 10 Sustain
    Description:

    • Biting into his thumb beforehand, inflating his hands fat tissues. The ‘Wick Effect’ takes place, which burns the gathering tissues at the same time, giving a blazing look to the users arms as they light ablaze along his hands.

    • Using his burning fists. Taavetti can deal C-tier damage. Leaving heat damage from both fist resulting in C-tier damage, if he hits his target. Flames extinguish after 2 post of being active.


    Gears Cloak
    Tier: B-tier
    Class: Body Manipulator
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Close
    Requirements/Drawbacks: Must have inflate a spiraling trail of bump sized fat tissue along his arms, to his back.
    Scaling: Duration
    Sustain: 0
    Cooldown: 3 Posts
    Cost: 30 Stamina ; 15 Sustain
    Description:

    • Being fat tissue the ‘wick effect’ applies, in where the fat tissues can be set ablaze. For them to catch ablaze, the user must have a means to ignite his arms letting the seeping flames into his skins.

    • Internalizing the ‘wick effect’, Taavetti sets himself ablaze in an clock of fire. The flames trailing in a spiral up his arms, along his back. Getting an 3 post resistances to flames. Having his skin combust, and char in the process without damaging his skin as he can alter its appearance. The flames themselves are D-tier, and last 3 post unless extinguished by water, delivers burning effect to anyone who touches him since its fire.


    Sweat-Nami
    Tier: C-Tier
    Class: Body Manipulator
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Medium
    Requirements/Drawbacks: Must open his glands along his arms, and shoulders as well as underneath his armpit.
    Scaling: Damage
    Sustain: 0
    Cooldown: 2 Post
    Cost: 20 Stamina ; 10 Sustain
    Description:

    • Taavetti, manipulating his open glands would release an medium size of sweat. Underneath him would become an puddle, and using said puddle to spin himself. After usage, and impact(if) this leaves anyone, and the user drenched in sweat.

    • Creating an decent height size of 5m sweat-nami with gushing salty, smelly, water from his body. Spreading away from his body 5 meters away with him as the center. Anything around would receive D-tier damage, and a small push back of 2 meters.


    Fleish II
    Tier: C-tier
    Class: Body Manipulator
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Medium
    Requirements/Drawbacks: Must have gear active to allow the increased blood flow. Biting an hole in his tongue, having to build the bomb in his mouth.
    Scaling: Damage
    Sustain: 0
    Cooldown: 2 Post
    Cost: 20 Stamina ; 10 Sustain
    Description:

    • Taavetti uses his tongue, throat, and stomach in combined efforts in making a flesh bomb. Using the rapid succession of blood rushing throughout his body to bottle up on his throat to create an rubbery substance of blood mucus that's flammable/sticky to coat, and fill the inside of the new bomb.

      Being hit or caught in the radius of the bomb. One would be snared/binding (Like trapped in an spider web made of blood), to the impact location of the bomb, or where they were caught in blast radius due to the sticking nature of the blood.

    • He can store it in his mouth for 2 post. Spitting it 5 meters away from himself, it spreads 4 meters, and rises in a cone 3 meters wide, and 5 meters long. Causing an snaring/bind effect to those caught for 2 post, a means of C-tier strength is required to break its hold unless it is scaled to be more productive in holding.




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2Fresh Abilities  Empty Re: Fresh Abilities on 23/02/18, 07:15 pm

Diana Corvus

Diana Corvus
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*cracks knuckles*

Let's get crackin', boy! We will see how far you've come since the last time I've graded you, cricket. However, next time,
please only submit 5 abilities at once. It's hard to grade so many at one time.

Gear

Range: This is Close range, not Medium.

Requirements/Drawbacks: I don't think the consumption of food is required but if you want to keep it you can.

Description: Sustain does not work like that. If you want your ability to last 2 posts, just have it last 2 posts.
The only thing sustain does for you is let you use the ability again in the same or the next post.

Bastet Armor II

Range: This is Close range, not Medium.

Requirements/Drawbacks: Why does "Gear" have to be active to preform this ability? It doesn't make much sense to me given how the 'wick effect' works.

Description: How big do the arms inflate (just give centimeters or meters)? If it's not a drastically huge size, then you don't need to add it.

This isn't an item so it shouldn't have item durability. It would take one instance of B tier damage to break this.

Again, if you want it to last 2 posts, make it last 2 posts.
Sustain doesn't work like that.

Slippery Elbows

Description: How far can these slicers travel?
How big are they? Just give measurements here and you're fine.

End Game

Range: This is Close range, not Medium.

Requirements/Drawbacks: Why does "Gear" have to be active to preform this ability? It doesn't make much sense to me given how the 'wick effect' works. This needs a physical requirement as well.

Description: How big do the arms inflate (just give centimeters or meters)? If it's not a drastically huge size, then you don't need to add it.

Please do not add advanced strength here as it is calculated later on. This can't deal C tier damage AND D tier damage as a C tier ability. Please choose between the heat damage or the physical damage if you aren't going to split it.

In addition to that, I still believe you misunderstand what sustain is. I've stated in another part of my grading that it only allows you to use an ability an additional time.

Gears Cloak

Range: This is Close range, not Medium.

Requirements/Drawbacks: Why does "Gear" have to be active to preform this ability? It doesn't make much sense to me given how the 'wick effect' works. This needs a physical requirement as well.

Description: How big do the arms inflate (just give centimeters or meters)? If it's not a drastically huge size, then you don't need to add it.

You could up the flame damage to B tier unless it is a damage over time to those who touch it.

Sweat Nami

Description: If you want a knock back, you need to reduce the damage to D tier.

There needs to be a defined size for the wave as well.

Fleish II

Requirements/Drawbacks: Why does "Gear" have to be active to preform this ability? It doesn't make much sense to me given how the 'wick effect' works.

Description: Add how long the snare lasts. I recommend 2 posts.


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3Fresh Abilities  Empty Re: Fresh Abilities on 25/02/18, 02:36 pm

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4Fresh Abilities  Empty Re: Fresh Abilities on 28/02/18, 04:18 pm

Diana Corvus

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I believe this all checks out alright! Good job! Approved for training!

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[center][b]Gear[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C-tier
[b]Class:[/b] Body Manipulator
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b]Taavetti is required to spread his legs, and place his fist on the floor before initationing the technique. It takes it toll on his metabolism, requiring for large portions of food to be ate prior.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 2
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Stamina | 10 Sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
[*]Taavetti uses his legs as pumps to increase his blood flow in all of his body parts. As a side result of the increasing of his blood flow, it looks as if he’s steaming.
[*]Thus increasing his natural strength, and speed to D-tier. It lasts 2 post.
[/list]


[center][b]Bastet Armor II[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] B-tier
[b]Class:[/b] Body Manipulator
[b]Type:[/b] Defensive
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] He must bite a hole into arms allowing oxygen to expand the limbs.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Reinflation: Adding 10 stamina the user can reinflated the deflated limb after it had been broken, or post limit has passed.  
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 3
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Stamina | 15 Sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
[*]Taavettis blows airs into the hole in his arm, bringing fat tissues to the surface of his skin on his arms. Allowing the fat tissue to feel like harden rubber to absorb, and cushion the impact thus blocking it.
[*]Being fat tissue the ‘[i]wick effect[/i]’ applies, in where the fat tissues can be set ablaze. For them to catch ablaze, the user must have a means to ignite his arms letting the seeping flames into his skins.
[*]It would take one instance of B-tier damage to break this ability. It lasts 2 post. After reinflation it lasts 2 post again. [/list]

[center][b]Slippery Elbows [/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C-tier
[b]Class:[/b] Body Manipulator
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] He must open his sweat glands by rotating his arms clockwise.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Hits
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 2 Post
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Stamina | 10 Sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Manipulating the sweat pouring off his arms. He creates slicers on both his elbows, and throws them 5m off his arm in fluid motion. Each slicer 3m in length, deals D-tier cutting damage. [/list]

[center][b]End-Game[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Body Manipulator
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] He must elongate his hands, before biting down on both thumbs at the same time. Allowing the oxygen around to increase the size of his hands to a miniature boulder( 8 cubic square feet ).  
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 2 Post
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Stamina ; 10 Sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
[*]Biting into his thumb beforehand, inflating his hands fat tissues. The ‘Wick Effect’ takes place, which burns the gathering tissues at the same time, giving a blazing look to the users arms as they light ablaze along his hands.

[*]Using his burning fists. Taavetti can deal C-tier damage. Leaving heat damage from both fist resulting in C-tier damage, if he hits his target. Flames extinguish after 2 post of being active.
[/list]

[center][b]Gears Cloak[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] B-tier
[b]Class:[/b] Body Manipulator
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Must have inflate a spiraling trail of bump sized fat tissue along his arms, to his back.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Duration
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 3 Posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Stamina ; 15 Sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
[*]Being fat tissue the ‘[i]wick effect[/i]’ applies, in where the fat tissues can be set ablaze. For them to catch ablaze, the user must have a means to ignite his arms letting the seeping flames into his skins.

[*]Internalizing the ‘wick effect’, Taavetti sets himself ablaze in an clock of fire. The flames trailing in a spiral up his arms, along his back. Getting an 3 post resistances to flames. Having his skin combust, and char in the process without damaging his skin as he can alter its appearance. The flames themselves are D-tier, and last 3 post unless extinguished by water, delivers burning effect to anyone who touches him since its fire.
[/list]

[center][b]Sweat-Nami [/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Body Manipulator
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Must open his glands along his arms, and shoulders as well as underneath his armpit.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 2 Post
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Stamina ; 10 Sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
[*]Taavetti, manipulating his open glands would release an medium size of sweat. Underneath him would become an puddle, and using said puddle to spin himself. After usage, and impact(if) this leaves anyone, and the user drenched in sweat.

[*]Creating an decent height size of 5m sweat-nami with gushing salty, smelly, water from his body. Spreading away from his body 5 meters away with him as the center. Anything around would receive D-tier damage, and a small push back of 2 meters.
[/list]

[center][b]Fleish II[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C-tier
[b]Class:[/b] Body Manipulator
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Must have gear active to allow the increased blood flow. Biting an hole in his tongue, having to build the bomb in his mouth.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 2 Post
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Stamina ; 10 Sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
[*]Taavetti uses his tongue, throat, and stomach in combined efforts in making a flesh bomb. Using the rapid succession of blood rushing throughout his body to bottle up on his throat to create an rubbery substance of blood mucus that's flammable/sticky to coat, and fill the inside of the new bomb.

Being hit or caught in the radius of the bomb. One would be snared/binding (Like trapped in an spider web made of blood), to the impact location of the bomb, or where they were caught in blast radius due to the sticking nature of the blood.

[*]He can store it in his mouth for 2 post. Spitting it 5 meters away from himself, it spreads 4 meters, and rises in a cone 3 meters wide, and 5 meters long. Causing an [b]snaring/bind effect[/b] to those caught for 2 post, a means of C-tier strength is required to break its hold unless it is scaled to be more productive in holding.
[/list]


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5Fresh Abilities  Empty Re: Fresh Abilities on 04/03/18, 03:41 pm

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Trained Gear + Slippery Elbows.

6Fresh Abilities  Empty Re: Fresh Abilities on 04/03/18, 04:23 pm

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7Fresh Abilities  Empty Re: Fresh Abilities on 05/03/18, 11:20 pm

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Trained Fleish II

8Fresh Abilities  Empty Re: Fresh Abilities on 18/07/18, 10:45 am

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Fleish II approved :)


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