Sung-Sun's Beginner Abilities

Tier: D-Tier
Class: Assassin
Type: Offensive
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Sung-Sun must be able to throw her rope dart accurately.
Scaling: Damage: The tier of damage dealt will increase by one for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested.
Sustain: -
Cool Down: 1 Post
Cost: 10 stamina | 5 stamina
Description:

After getting a strong grip on her rope dart, Sung-Sun will then toss it at a target in a straight line to deal D-Tier damage. The maximum range of this ability is judged by Sung-Sun's current rope dart.

Tier: D-Tier
Class: Assassin
Type: Supplementary
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Sung-Sun must be able to weave her rope dart around the target's feet.
Scaling: Hits: The number of hits or projectiles will double for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested.
Sustain: -
Cool Down: 1 Post
Cost: 10 stamina | 5 stamina
Description:

After getting a strong grip on her rope dart, Sung-Sun will then toss it at the target's feet in attempt to wrap it around their ankles. If successful, Sung-Sun will then yank on her rope dart, causing the target to trip onto the ground. The maximum range of this ability is judged by Sung-Sun's current rope dart.

Tier: D-Tier
Class: Assassin
Type: Supplementary
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Sung-Sun must be able to grab a smoke bomb from her person. Unless able to counter it somehow, Sung-Sun is also affected by the smoke.
Scaling: AoE: The area of effect may increase by 5m for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested.
Sustain: -
Cool Down: 1 Post
Cost: 10 stamina | 5 stamina
Description:

Upon finding herself in a strange position, Sung-Sun is able to reach onto her person in order to grab a smoke bomb in order to relocate. She can then throw it up to 3-meters away, creating a 5-meter cloud of smoke that lasts for 1 post. Once in the smoke, the average person would have their vision impaired due to the thickness of it.

Tier: D-Tier
Class: Assassin
Type: Supplementary
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Sung-Sun must have a sturdy surface she is able to latch her rope dart into or around.
Scaling: Hits: The number of hits or projectiles will double for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested.
Sustain: -
Cool Down: 1 Post
Cost: 10 stamina | 5 stamina
Description:

Upon finding herself in a strange position, Sung-Sun is able to use her rope dart in order to escape. She will then toss it towards a sturdy surface, in order to pierce into it or latch around it. If successful, Sung-Sun is then able to pull herself to the designated location immediately. The maximum range of this ability is judged by Sung-Sun's current rope dart.

Tier: C-Tier
Class: Assassin
Type: Offensive
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: Sung-Sun must be given enough time to properly apply the poison to her weapon.
Scaling: Damage: The tier of damage dealt will increase by one for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested.
Sustain: -
Cool Down: 2 Posts
Cost: 20 stamina | 10 stamina
Description:

After short preparation, Sung-Sun is able to apply this potent poison [Adenium extract] to her weapon. While not being a strong enough dose to be considered lethal, a small scratch containing this poison will cause D-Tier damage [In the form of cardiac/heart] per post for the next 2-posts. This poison will last a total duration of 2-posts upon Sung-Sun's weapon.

Ready to be graded!

- I wish you would provide more detail. I'm vaguely confused about what sort of fashion you would go about tripping someone.

- Please provide more details to your requirements. It contributes very little to your ability. They are too vague.

- Your requirements make it a bit of a difficult ability to use. If it were me, I would take out that last line. You can keep it if you want but...

- Especially considering your current requirements, I would take out the last line of the description.

- Keep in mind this ability only causes nausea over a course of two posts. It won't deal D-Tier damage twice. The wording makes it seem like this ability deals D-Tier damage per post for a span of two posts.

I fixed everything else, I believe. However, I'm having trouble seeing how Disappear's requirement is too vague. o.o If you have any suggestions for me, I'd love to hear them.

Disappear - Make sure you include the smoke lasts for one post.

Poison Supplement: Adenium - This should be offensive.

Fixed ^^

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[center][b]Pinpoint[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Assassin
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Sung-Sun must be able to throw her rope dart accurately.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage: The tier of damage dealt will increase by one for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested.
[b]Sustain:[/b] -
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 Post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 stamina | 5 stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
After getting a strong grip on her rope dart, Sung-Sun will then toss it at a target in a straight line to deal D-Tier damage. The maximum range of this ability is judged by Sung-Sun's current rope dart. [/list]

[center][b]Trip[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Assassin
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Sung-Sun must be able to weave her rope dart around the target's feet.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Hits: The number of hits or projectiles will double for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested.
[b]Sustain:[/b] -
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 Post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 stamina | 5 stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
After getting a strong grip on her rope dart, Sung-Sun will then toss it at the target's feet in attempt to wrap it around their ankles. If successful, Sung-Sun will then yank on her rope dart, causing the target to trip onto the ground. The maximum range of this ability is judged by Sung-Sun's current rope dart.[/list]

[center][b]Disappear[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Assassin
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Sung-Sun must be able to grab a smoke bomb from her person. Unless able to counter it somehow, Sung-Sun is also affected by the smoke.
[b]Scaling:[/b] AoE: The area of effect may increase by 5m for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested.
[b]Sustain:[/b] -
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 Post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 stamina | 5 stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Upon finding herself in a strange position, Sung-Sun is able to reach onto her person in order to grab a smoke bomb in order to relocate. She can then throw it up to 3-meters away, creating a 5-meter cloud of smoke that lasts for 1 post. Once in the smoke, the average person would have their vision impaired due to the thickness of it.[/list]

[center][b]Get-Away[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Assassin
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Sung-Sun must have a sturdy surface she is able to latch her rope dart into or around.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Hits: The number of hits or projectiles will double for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested.
[b]Sustain:[/b] -
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 Post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 stamina | 5 stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Upon finding herself in a strange position, Sung-Sun is able to use her rope dart in order to escape. She will then toss it towards a sturdy surface, in order to pierce into it or latch around it. If successful, Sung-Sun is then able to pull herself to the designated location immediately. The maximum range of this ability is judged by Sung-Sun's current rope dart.[/list]

[center][b]Poison Supplement: Adenium[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Assassin
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Sung-Sun must be given enough time to properly apply the poison to her weapon.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage: The tier of damage dealt will increase by one for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested.
[b]Sustain:[/b] -
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 2 Posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 stamina | 10 stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
After short preparation, Sung-Sun is able to apply this potent poison [Adenium extract] to her weapon. While not being a strong enough dose to be considered lethal, a small scratch containing this poison will cause D-Tier damage [In the form of cardiac/heart] per post for the next 2-posts. This poison will last a total duration of 2-posts upon Sung-Sun's weapon.[/list]