Amaya's Beginner Abilities

Pushed to other account · 1 Amaya's Beginner Abilities 17/02/17, 04:04 pm

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D-Tier

Character Sheet
Magoi:

(90/90)
Stamina:

(110/110)

Swallowtail Dance:

Volley:

A Touch Too Much:

Mantis Dance:

The Bigger They Are...:

Last edited by Amaya on 17/02/17, 05:25 pm; edited 4 times in total

Rima Fahim · 2 Re: Amaya's Beginner Abilities 17/02/17, 04:47 pm

Rima Fahim

A-Tier

Character Sheet
Magoi:

(480/480)
Stamina:

(200/200)

General
Any poisons/debuffs you have, make sure to state that it lasts for 1 post. ^^
Swallowtail Dance
I just want to make sure you know that this parry will only work on one ability/attack unless sustained. Also, I know you already knew this but state somewhere the fact the ability won't work on intangible attacks, just so people know.
Mantis Dance
Eh, it might just be me nitpicking, but you don't have to add the last line to the ability. "Amaya also takes this opportunity to move behind her foe, if possible." as you could just do that in-character already. However, if it's there for flavor text, feel free to keep it. :P
The Bigger They Are
Really cool concept, but it would be better as a C-Tier ability. A D-Tier ability is most likely going to only have one effect, but this has two (Damage and Knock Down)

Rima Fahim · 3 Re: Amaya's Beginner Abilities 17/02/17, 04:53 pm

Rima Fahim

A-Tier

Character Sheet
Magoi:

(480/480)
Stamina:

(200/200)

My bad, forgot an ability.

Three's a Crowd
This ability is pretty much useless, so you can scrap this one and make something different. You can already do this as a basic action pretty much. ^^

Pushed to other account · 4 Re: Amaya's Beginner Abilities 17/02/17, 05:06 pm

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D-Tier

Character Sheet
Magoi:

(90/90)
Stamina:

(110/110)

Fixed most of the stuff.

Took Swallowtail down to D tier so I could make Bigger a C-tier ability

Rima Fahim · 5 Re: Amaya's Beginner Abilities 17/02/17, 05:23 pm

Rima Fahim

A-Tier

Character Sheet
Magoi:

(480/480)
Stamina:

(200/200)

Swallowtail Dance
Oop, you forgot to change the cooldown to 1.
Volley
The ability is actually in the same position as the previous one the way it's set up, as a D-tier Assassin you're allowed to bring 5 ammunition to each thread. So, you could just chuck throwing knives as a basic attack pretty much, requiring no stamina to do. "Outside of actual abilities which cost Magoi or Stamina, Rangers and Assassins have the ability to fire off ranged attacks without paying a cost." However, you can still make an ability like that if you want, but you would have to lower the base amount of throwing knifes to just one. The only perk would be it wouldn't consume any of your ammo, but it would cost stamina. Just wanted to let you know~.

Pushed to other account · 6 Re: Amaya's Beginner Abilities 17/02/17, 05:25 pm

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D-Tier

Character Sheet
Magoi:

(90/90)
Stamina:

(110/110)

Made the changes, and yes, I wanted the stamina cost so I could effectively avoid burning ammo or in case I simply run out.

Rima Fahim · 7 Re: Amaya's Beginner Abilities 17/02/17, 05:30 pm

Rima Fahim

A-Tier

Character Sheet
Magoi:

(480/480)
Stamina:

(200/200)

Alrighty then, also one last question. With the requirements/drawbacks on Volley, are the daggers going to be concealed in the scarf, or did you just forget to change that part?

Pushed to other account · 8 Re: Amaya's Beginner Abilities 17/02/17, 05:33 pm

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D-Tier

Character Sheet
Magoi:

(90/90)
Stamina:

(110/110)

Neither. That's simply specified as a position so the scarf doesn't interfere with the movement of her throwing the daggers.

Were the scarf in front of her it could hit a dagger and knock it off it's path, or at least that was my logic.

Rima Fahim · 9 Re: Amaya's Beginner Abilities 17/02/17, 05:35 pm

Rima Fahim

A-Tier

Character Sheet
Magoi:

(480/480)
Stamina:

(200/200)

Alrighty then, everything looks good! Sorry, for the changes/questions :P

Code:: [spoiler=Swallowtail Dance] [b]Tier:[/b] D-Tier [b]Class:[/b] Assassin [b]Type:[/b] Defensive [b]Range:[/b] Close Range (0-1m) [b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] The opponent must make an attack with physical weapon from close-medium range. This ability will not parry intangible attacks. [b]Scaling:[/b] Investiture of more stamina can allow this technique to block an attack of a higher damage tier. [b]Sustain:[/b] This ability can be sustained to block an attack on subsequent turns [b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 [b]Cost:[/b] 10 + 10(x), where X accounts for number of times scaled. [b]Description:[/b] Amaya spans her scarf across her shoulders or back, rolling her body as needed to push the attacks from her person as best as possible. Amaya uses the fluid movements to slip behind her opponent if they are at short range or nearer.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Volley] [b]Tier:[/b] D-Tier [b]Class:[/b] Assassin [b]Type:[/b] Offensive [b]Range:[/b] Medium [b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Scarf must be either wrapped around her neck, or in a defensive position (stretched in behind her shoulders) before initiating this skill. [b]Scaling:[/b] Amount [b]Sustain:[/b] This ability is not sustained. [b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 [b]Cost:[/b] 10 [b]Description:[/b] Amaya hurls a hidden daggers at her opponent. These daggers increase in number as she scales.[/spoiler] [spoiler=A Touch Too Much] [b]Tier:[/b] D-Tier [b]Class:[/b] Assassin [b]Type:[/b] Supplementary / Offensive [b]Range:[/b] Short. [b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Amaya must swing the scarf into an offensive position (stretched in front of her chest) before initiating this skill. [b]Scaling:[/b]Damage dealt. [b]Sustain:[/b] This ability is not sustained. [b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 [b]Cost:[/b] 10 + 10(x) where X is the scaling for damage. [b]Description:[/b] [list] [*]This ability deals no damage unless scaled. [*]The poison lasts for one round [/list] Amaya braces her scarf in an aggressive stance, spiraling the bladed weapon into her opponent and applying a neurotoxic poison that briefly slows their speed, making it more difficult to both hit, and dodge.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Mantis Dance] [b]Tier:[/b] D-Tier [b]Class:[/b] Assassin [b]Type:[/b] Supplementary / Offensive [b]Range:[/b] Close [b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Amaya must swing the scarf into a defensive position (stretched in behind her shoulders) before initiating this skill. [b]Scaling:[/b]Duration of effect. [b]Sustain:[/b] This ability is not sustained. [b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 [b]Cost:[/b] 10 + 10(x) where X is the scaling for damage. [b]Description:[/b] [list] [*]This ability deals no damage [*]The paralysis effect impairs movement. [*]Paralysis lasts for one post [/list] Amaya targets her opponent's pressure points in their legs with the rings at the end of her scarf, causing her opponent suffer slight paralysis in their legs. Amaya also takes this opportunity to move behind her foe, if possible. [/spoiler] [spoiler=The Bigger They Are...] [b]Tier:[/b] C-Tier [b]Class:[/b] Assassin [b]Type:[/b] Supplementary / Offensive [b]Range:[/b] Short. [b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Amaya must be either hidden from her opponent, or behind them to execute this move. [b]Scaling:[/b] Damage dealt. [b]Sustain:[/b] This ability is not sustained. [b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 [b]Cost:[/b] 10 + 10(x) where X is the scaling for damage. [b]Description:[/b]Amaya spirals her scarf around her opponent's neck or torso, slicing into them and yanking them off balance. The resulting move grounds her opponent, forcing them to either fight prone or waste time getting up. Amaya also releases her scarf after her opponent begins falling, pulling it into either an offensive or defensive stance.[/spoiler]