Handy Dandy Magic [Abilities]

Tier: D-Tier
Class: Magician
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Requirements/Drawbacks: Requires clicking and tapping the staff on the ground.
Scaling: None
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 1 post
Cost: 10 Magoi ; 5 Sustain
Description:

Using water magic, the user covers himself in a veil of water to close the wounds on the surface to stop bleeding.

Tier: D-Tier
Class: Magician
Type: Defensive
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Requires tapping the bottom on the ground, than positioning the staff horizontal in the air.
Scaling: Range
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 1 post
Cost: 10 Magoi ; 5 Sustain
Description:

Using water magic, the user created two 6 ft high columns of water, each rotating around one another forming a helix to push away opponents about 6 meters from the caster. They travel 4 meters away from the caster.

Tier: D-Tier
Class: Magician
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Requirements/Drawbacks: Requires to speak the name of the spell.
Scaling: AoE
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 1 Post
Cost: 10 Magoi ; 5 Sustain
Description:

Using water magic, the user condenses water vapor in the air to cast a small cloud of drizzle. Getting it about 10 ft into the air, able to form it 5 meters away from the caster. The drizzle last for 2 post and clears away after.

Tier: D-Tier
Class: Magician
Type: Offensive
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Requires the user to tap his staff against the ground.
Scaling: Damage
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 1 Post
Cost: 10 Magoi ; 5 Sustain
Description:

Using water magic, the user generated a column of spinning water . The water spirals around the caster like a whirlpool crashing toward the opponent from 5 meters away to deal D-Tier damage.

Tier: C-Tier
Class: Magician
Type: Supplementary
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks:
Scaling: AoE
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 2 post
Cost: 20 Magoi ; 10 Sustain
Description:

Using water magic, the user condenses the water vapor into a dense gaseous form. To create a mist like veil around himself hiding within it. The mist is the size a small shack, lasting 2 post before disappearing.  

I realize your character has a farm theme and all, but we actually have a rule against giving your abilities ridiculous names.

Remember that unless it's some kind of unique spell the magician created, most spells are words that the rukh told the magician. We don't really enforce that, but it does make the point that your starting spells should be named appropriately. It makes no sense for water magic to be named after farm veggies and animals.

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Cabbage:

Scaling - Since this spell only covers yourself, having the scaling be AoE doesn't make much sense.

Description - Water magic isn't capable of healing. At least not in the traditional sense. You could use water magic as first aid to prevent bleeding out or to seal a wound with ice. You could use water magic to flush your system of poisons. But water magic can't cause your cells to regenerate.


Carrot:

Scaling - Once again, I don't think AoE is appropriate here. Your attack is a projectile fired in "beam" fashion. It's not really an AoE spell.

Description - How big are the columns? How far do they travel? How far can they push something on impact?


Lettuce:

Description - How big is the initial cloud without scaling? How high up in the air does it form? How far away from you can it form?


Piggy:

Description - Making a pig shaped construct is too advanced for D-tier. Please refer to the Ability Systems examples of magician abilities.


Peeling Potatoes:

Description - How big is the initial mist cloud without scaling?

Edited it according to what you said. Changed the names from food names. Reason behind the names were because i was at a creative block when thinking up names lol.

• Vandens Kolonėlė{Water Column}
  
  
  • You need to specify the range. I say range loosely because I have no idea how you're gonna add range because there isn't much detail...

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[center][b]Skraiste Vandeniu{Veil Of Water}[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Short
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Requires clicking and tapping the staff on the ground.
[b]Scaling:[/b] None
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi ; 5 Sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Using water magic, the user covers himself in a veil of water to administrate first aid of D-Tier equality.[/list]

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[center][b]Dviviečiai Ramsčiai{Double Pillars}[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Defensive
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Requires tapping the bottom on the ground, than positioning the staff horizontal in the air.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Range
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi ; 5 Sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Using water magic, the user created two 6 ft high columns of water, each rotating around one another forming a helix to push away opponents about 6 meters from the caster. They travel 4 meters away from the caster. [/list]

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[center][b]Debesis Dulksna{Cloud Drizzle}[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Short
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Requires to speak the name of the spell.
[b]Scaling:[/b] AoE
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 Post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi ; 5 Sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Using water magic, the user condenses water vapor in the air to cast a small cloud of drizzle. Getting it about 10 ft into the air, able to form it 5 meters away from the caster. The drizzle last for 2 post and clears away after. [/list]

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[center][b]Skraiste Mist {Veil Of Mist}[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b]
[b]Scaling:[/b] AoE
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 2 post
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Magoi ; 10 Sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Using water magic, the user condenses the water vapor into a dense gaseous form. To create a mist like veil around himself hiding within it. The mist is the size a small shack, lasting 2 post before disappearing.[/list]

Edited water column

Approved!

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[center][b]Vandens Kolonėlė{Water Column}[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Requires the user to tap his staff against the ground.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 Post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi ; 5 Sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Using water magic, the user generated a column of spinning water . The water spirals around the caster like a whirlpool crashing toward the opponent from 5 meters away to deal D-Tier damage.[/list]

Sorry to unapprove this. Your first aid spell needs to be specific. HOW is the water magic providing first aid? Is it covering a wound to stop bleeding with surface tension? Is it swirling around your body directing lost blood back inside your body? You need to explain HOW it's doing what its doing.

Also, if you use either of the examples above, you don't need to put a tier on how much damage it can treat. Since you aren't actually healing the damage. You could stop an A-tier wound that severed your leg from bleeding with this ability.

Edited

I think this is all Yaku asked. I can't see anything else wrong. I'm good with it. If he pops up with more things... Well, I guess I'll add that to my book of things to look out for while grading XD.

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[center][b]Skraiste Vandeniu{Veil Of Water}[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Short
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Requires clicking and tapping the staff on the ground.
[b]Scaling:[/b] None
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi ; 5 Sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Using water magic, the user covers himself in a veil of water to close the wounds on the surface to stop bleeding. [/list]