2 New Abilities

Name: Golden Thread-Spindash
Tier: C-tier
Cost: 20/10
Class: Supplementary/Supplementary
Range: Close
Cool-Down: 3 posts (sustain+1)
Limbs: Head
Description: The user curls into the fetal position while controlling their hair to wrap around them at 15 m/s forming a near perfect sphere 1 meter in diameter.While in this state the user can burrow and roll around omnidirectionally at speeds up to 10 m/s for as long as this ability is sustained.The user can breathe and hair normally while in state, however it is impossible to see out of the inside of the sphere in normal circumstances.


Name: Oversight
Tier: C-tier
Cost: 20/10
Class: Supplementary
Range: 20 meters
Cool-Down: 3 posts (sustain+1)
Limbs: Head
Description: The user manipulates on of their eyes in such away that every region has the visual acuity of a high-powered fovea, eliminating that eye's blindspot and increasing the it's visual score to 20/1 at 15 m/s. In battle the visual clarity is limited to a sphere 10 meters in diameter within 20 meters of the user.



So since spindash has Natalia turn into sonic turn into a ball that is impossible to see through without abilities, would I be immune to being blinded while in it?

Also since Natalia is in a ball most of her abilities and possible basic attacks would not work properly if at all(unless they allowed to work just fine). I am totally fine with this because it's kind hard to preform an intricate technique if your tumbling all over the place.

I was wondering if I could homing attack ram enemies in this form and deal basic attack damage equal to Natalia's passive strength.


Name: Oversight 007
Tier: C-tier
Cost: 20/10
Class: Supplementary
Range: 20 meters
Cool-Down: 3 posts (sustain+1)
Limbs: Head
Description: The user manipulates one of their eyes in such away that it gains a fovea to the left and right of the original at 15 m/s.This allows the user to focus on a area the size of a sphere with a diameter of 10 meter up to 20 meters in that eye field of view.This allows user see a ultra-high resolution image of whatever is happening in that area. If sustained the user can keep focusing on that area or lock on to a new postion within range.


Name: Oversight
Tier: C-tier
Cost: None
Class: Social
Range: The Horizon
Cool-Down: None
Limbs: Head
Description: The user manipulates one of their eyes in such away that every region has the visual acuity of a high-powered fovea, eliminating that eye's blindspot and increasing the it's visual score to 20/1.This give the user the ability to clearly see what is happening in their line of sight with an absolute upper limit of 34 kilometers. The range at regular elevations is 5 kilometers which is the distance to the horizon, the maximum upper can only be reached by looking out from a height of a 100 meters and over.

Seeing would be difficult since you would be rolling at a fast pace but you could use an ability to increase your hearing allowing you to tell where enemies are, also blinding would clash with the ability. Yes, you would be able to use basic attacks since it's a buff that applies to specific form of movement. Any abilities used while doing this though will clash with the buff.

Also can you please clarify how Oversight ability works, we are perfectly fine with you expanding your vision but no more than 180 degrees.

Warning: fairly long partially scientific explanation below, TDRL available at the bottom


Humans actually have a field of vision of around 210 degress(according to my sources anyway). The catch being that only about 60 degrees of that would pass most people standards of regular(sharp) vison. Past that point is the peripheral vison which have decreasing acuity the wider the angle with anything past 120 degrees getting harder to describe with any intricate detail the wider the angle. Degrees 180 to 210 only being to tell you hey something of moderate size flashed or something big and relatively near to you moved in a direction?( fun fact quality of color and vison in general drops the further you get away from the central field of view)

The abilty could also count as expanding visual range but I think it still fit using these degree numbers (assuming my sources are right) along with the explanation of how it works.

Quality Binocular Vision (The Image created with information from both eyes and what most people think of with a humans visual field) is around 120 degrees while full is around 140.

Quality Monocular Vision( Image you would get if you had only one eye opened) is around 60 degress with full being 105.

Total field of view (Binocular + Non overlapping monocular) is 180 to 210 degrees.

Assuming the eyes of Imuchakks, Fanalis, and humans are nearly identical in construction and function, The rentina of the eye where all the rods and cone cells are located has a region called the fovea where visual acuity or sharpness is overall the highest.Due too how the eye is arranged nerve fibers leading to the brain create a "hole" in the retina where no light receptor are that leave a small blind spot in the normal vision that is usually compensate for by your brain so you don't notice it unless you go out of your way.The visual acuity of the eye get lower the larger the distance from the center. This part of the reason why people have to shift their eyes when the read even though the easily see the whole page in their vison, it's so the part their on comes into focus and actually read it instead of just seeing it in their peripheral.


The ability is better described as a vision enhancer than as a vision expander. It work by elimanating blind spot cause by nerves and increasing the visual acuity of all regions of the retina to the level of a very strong fovea in one eye. This basically turns that entire eye's field of view crystal clear with ludicrous visual "resolution"  (in televison quality like 20000k resolution over the whole eye). This would increase the visual score in that eye to 20/1 (seeing at 20 feet what other can see one foot away or seeing at 20 meters away what other people see at 1 meter away).

Everyone can see lightyears away by looking up at the night sky,this ability however increases the clarity so much that Natalia could what happening in detail in an area 5 kilometers away.I combined this with a social ability so she can only see that far away clearly in non combat situations. In combat the effect would basically be  REALLY detailed vision in a 10 meter sphere up to twenty meters in the field of view of Natalia's affected eye.

Technically by turning all of and eye's FOV to useful,super-clear vison (so around 105 degrees)  with the functional vison that overlap from the other eye her functional field of view is increase is increased to around 165 degrees but mechanically it the same amount she had before.


TDRL: Oversight increases the quality of eyesight to a very high, level allowing the user to clearly what's happening up to 5 kilometers away in the affected eye's field of view if they are not in battle. In battle it gives that level of clarity to a 10 meter sphere within 20 meters of that eye field of view.

Example: if Natalia is fighting a mage who make a 40 meter wall of smoke within 20 meters of the eye with this abilty active, that eye can focus to see a detailed image of 10 meters of that smoke wall while not actually seeing through it.

I like the explanation.

I did a bit of research on the subject myself, since you mentioned it in your ability here. Was the reason you chose 5 km because after that point the normal planet Earth drops off over the horizon?

Anyways, you should split that to a combat ability and a social ability separately. Actual abilities that cost magoi/stamina have to follow the guidelines. Social abilities can go beyond the guidelines with approval. I'm okay-ish with the ability, though I don't know if it is exactly the level that Body Manipulation is capable of achieving. We'll have to see what the rest of staff say lol.



An aside, not really meant for the current discussion but related to it nonetheless; isn't it that our eyes seeing the stars in the night sky isn't because our eyes are so strong that they can see that far but because the light being sent from those stars is just that bright?

Bump for seperation to social and normal ability.

Yes, reason I chose 5 kilometers is that it is around distance to the horizon at normal elevation. Any further and the curvature of the earth makes it near impossible to see things of similar elevation.

The most concise explanation I have for seeing light years away is that everything we see either emitted or reflected emitted light that enter our eye hitting our retina. The amount of an objects reflected light that hit the retina decreases as distances increases therefore the detail we see in an object decreases with distance. "Stronger" eyes (Telescopes, eyes of predators) take in more light either by being bigger(The hubble telescope) or having more specialized rentinas. Since they take in more light without being overwhelmed they see more "image" and therefore can see with detail for longer distances.


I posted the social ability so the staff could see if it needs, to be toned down, is fine as , or disallowed completely.


The reason the range is horizon is because the distance to the horizon increases with elevation (Ex:normal visual range vs I can see my house from here height). The maximum upper limit is there since the eye can only be logically manipulated to be so strong and even a limitless visual field won't create detail that can't be processed (EX: Can't see space aliens doing laundry from earth with the eye ,even if they were the most well and only illuminated thing in the universe since the distance is to great.


P.S is spindash good to go or should I edit that as well?

abilities approved for training, social may be added to vault now~

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[b]Name:[/b] Golden Thread-Spindash
[b]Tier:[/b] C-tier
[b]Cost:[/b] 20/10
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary/Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 posts (sustain+1)
[b]Limbs:[/b] Head
[b]Description:[/b] The user curls into the fetal position while controlling their hair to wrap around them at 15 m/s forming a near perfect sphere 1 meter in diameter.While in this state the user can burrow and roll around omnidirectionally at speeds up to 10 m/s for as long as this ability is sustained.The user can breathe and hair normally while in state, however it is impossible to see out of the inside of the sphere in normal circumstances.


[strike][b]Name:[/b] Oversight
[b]Tier:[/b] C-tier
[b]Cost:[/b] 20/10
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] 20 meters
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 posts (sustain+1)
[b]Limbs:[/b] Head
[b]Description:[/b] The user manipulates on of their eyes in such away that every region has the visual acuity of a high-powered fovea, eliminating that eye's blindspot and increasing the it's visual score to 20/1 at 15 m/s. In battle the visual clarity is limited to a sphere 10 meters in diameter within 20 meters of the user.

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So since spindash has Natalia [strike]turn into sonic[/strike] turn into a ball that is impossible to see through without abilities, would I be immune to being blinded while in it?

Also since Natalia is in a ball most of her abilities and possible basic attacks would not work properly if at all(unless they allowed to work just fine). I am totally fine with this because it's kind hard to preform an intricate technique if your tumbling all over the place.

I was wondering if I could [strike]homing attack[/strike] ram enemies in this form and deal basic attack damage equal to Natalia's passive strength.


[b]Name:[/b] Oversight 007
[b]Tier:[/b] C-tier
[b]Cost:[/b] 20/10
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] 20 meters
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 posts (sustain+1)
[b]Limbs:[/b] Head
[b]Description:[/b] The user manipulates one of their eyes in such away that it gains a fovea to the left and right of the original at 15 m/s.This allows the user to focus on a area the size of a sphere with a diameter of 10 meter up to 20 meters in that eye field of view.This allows user see a ultra-high resolution image of whatever is happening in that area. If sustained the user can keep focusing on that area or lock on to a new postion within range.


[b]Name:[/b] Oversight
[b]Tier:[/b] C-tier
[b]Cost:[/b] None
[b]Class:[/b] Social
[b]Range:[/b] The Horizon
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] None
[b]Limbs:[/b] Head
[b]Description:[/b] The user manipulates one of their eyes in such away that every region has the visual acuity of a high-powered fovea, eliminating that eye's blindspot and increasing the it's visual score to 20/1.This give the user the ability to clearly see what is happening in their line of sight with an absolute upper limit of 34 kilometers. The range at regular elevations is 5 kilometers which is the distance to the horizon, the maximum upper can only be reached by looking out from a height of a 100 meters and over.

Training for Oversight 007

https://magiworld.forumotion.com/t6051-pardon-me-job-solo#32523

If you want to train an ability in a job post, please separate the job post requirement and the training WC by using

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code ^^

I did seperate them using the code. The training for the ability is within the lines created by it. I edited the word count position to show were the training is concluded.

Okies, that's what I need. Also, please bold the usage of the trained ability inside the training word count first ^^

Bump for checking.

Training approved, add to vault~

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[b]Name:[/b] Oversight 007
[b]Tier:[/b] C-tier
[b]Cost:[/b] 20/10
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] 20 meters
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 posts (sustain+1)
[b]Limbs:[/b] Head
[b]Description:[/b] The user manipulates one of their eyes in such away that it gains a fovea to the left and right of the original at 15 m/s.This allows the user to focus on a area the size of a sphere with a diameter of 10 meter up to 20 meters in that eye field of view.This allows user see a ultra-high resolution image of whatever is happening in that area. If sustained the user can keep focusing on that area or lock on to a new postion within range.