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11/2 Pointed Prism Abilities Empty 1/2 Pointed Prism Abilities on 18/07/15, 02:30 pm

Zadi

Zadi
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Pointed Prism:
Pointed Prism:

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Name: Pointed Prism
Tier: A
Type: Advance Staff/Wand
Magic Type: Crystal | Heat + Strength
Appearance: A small wand that is only 0.3m long. The handle seems to be made from a dark stone that has been polished and grooved for comfortable gripping. The shaft is an earthy crystal that glows softly when magoi is being channeled through it.
Function:

  • The user can register 2 Crystal-Abilities linked to the staff, A-Tier and below.

  • Can be used by intellect specs to become a medium for their other magics.

  • By paying 40 magoi the wielder can point the staff at a place on the ground within 40m and send their magoi to that location at 25m/s. Upon reaching the target location, the magoi will command the rukh of the earth to superheat and form organized structure. 20 crystal pylons will appear within a 15m radius circle spaced out around the targets. This is a supplementary ability and the pylons do not deal damage as they form. However these crystalline prisms can be used to refract and reflect light spells allowing the caster to attack those inside from all angles by bouncing light spells off of these pylons. Each pylon requires D-tier damage to destroy and lasts for 4 posts and has a cool down of 5 posts.


  • Name: S.S.C.C.R.N. (Some Sort of Creative Crystal-Related Name)
    Tier: A
    Cost: 40 | 20
    Element: Crystal | Heat + Strength
    Class: Offensive
    Range: 40 meters
    Cool-Down: 7 posts
    Description: The caster changes the composition of one of their pre-existing magoi-made crystals within 40 meters of him/herself, causing said crystal to violently explode in a cloud of heat, shards, and sharp dust which altogether deals A-tier damage in the form of cuts, lung damage, and/or burns caused through physical abrasions. The cloud of explosive debris travels out 15-25 meters at 25 m/s. Anything struck by a crystal spell would be immobilized for 1 post. This immobilization would be able to be destroyed with a D-tier ability, freeing the user.



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21/2 Pointed Prism Abilities Empty Re: 1/2 Pointed Prism Abilities on 18/07/15, 05:08 pm

Ariella Negri

Ariella Negri
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The only issue I see with this spell is:

Those hit will have their affected limbs crystallized (frozen) for 1 post.

This would cause the spell to be an offensive/supplementary, as the magic type was not created or registered with any type of passive effect. Either remove the effect or change this to Off/Supp and nerf the damage appropriately.


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31/2 Pointed Prism Abilities Empty Re: 1/2 Pointed Prism Abilities on 18/07/15, 05:56 pm

Zadi

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Why can't a passive effect be created/registered for it? Not like it would actually change the magic in and of itself. In fact, it would only improve on it so it wouldn't besmirch the founder's idea. So is there some other reason that it can't have a passive effect?


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41/2 Pointed Prism Abilities Empty Re: 1/2 Pointed Prism Abilities on 18/07/15, 06:14 pm

Ariella Negri

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This matter will be discussed by staff and we will post with an update on the decision once it is made~


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51/2 Pointed Prism Abilities Empty Re: 1/2 Pointed Prism Abilities on 19/07/15, 07:55 am

Ariella Negri

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At this time, we will be contacting others this passive may affect to gain a consensus on if they agree this is a passive effect they find acceptable. We, as staff, will also be going through the other previous staff-created combination magics and applying passive effects where appropriate.


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61/2 Pointed Prism Abilities Empty Re: 1/2 Pointed Prism Abilities on 23/07/15, 12:03 pm

Ariella Negri

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After contacting the other members that might be affected, the decided upon passive would be as follows:

The passive effect would be to apply a crystallizing supplementary effect, which would immobilize anything struck by a crystal spell for 1 post. This immobilization would be able to be destroyed with a D-tier ability, freeing the user.


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71/2 Pointed Prism Abilities Empty Re: 1/2 Pointed Prism Abilities on 23/07/15, 06:48 pm

Zadi

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Edited~


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81/2 Pointed Prism Abilities Empty Re: 1/2 Pointed Prism Abilities on 23/07/15, 07:11 pm

Ariella Negri

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I just want to clarify, but this spell requires the use of another spell as well, to create the crystal, correct? Or does this spell create a crystal and then explode?


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91/2 Pointed Prism Abilities Empty Re: 1/2 Pointed Prism Abilities on 23/07/15, 07:42 pm

Zadi

Zadi
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spell/ability if that is acceptable


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101/2 Pointed Prism Abilities Empty Re: 1/2 Pointed Prism Abilities on 23/07/15, 07:47 pm

Ariella Negri

Ariella Negri
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so you want THIS spell to create the crystal and then cause a crystal explosion? If so, please word the spell to say the caster CREATES a crystal shard of X dimensions and then explodes it, etc, etc.

If you are intending for it to play off of a prior spell, please indicate this by stating they change the composition of a pre-existing crystal shard.


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111/2 Pointed Prism Abilities Empty Re: 1/2 Pointed Prism Abilities on 23/07/15, 07:59 pm

Zadi

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Woops, guess the first sentence was a tad ambiguous XD

So yeah, added in "pre-existing"~


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121/2 Pointed Prism Abilities Empty Re: 1/2 Pointed Prism Abilities on 23/07/15, 08:02 pm

Ariella Negri

Ariella Negri
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approved for training~

Code:
[b]Name:[/b] S.S.C.C.R.N. ([u]S[/u]ome [u]S[/u]ort of [u]C[/u]reative [u]C[/u]rystal-[u]R[/u]elated [u]N[/u]ame)
[b]Tier:[/b] A
[b]Cost:[/b] 40 | 20
[b]Element:[/b] Crystal | Heat + Strength
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 40 meters
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 7 posts
[b]Description:[/b] The caster changes the composition of one of their pre-existing magoi-made crystals within 40 meters of him/herself, causing said crystal to violently explode in a cloud of heat, shards, and sharp dust which altogether deals A-tier damage in the form of cuts, lung damage, and/or burns caused through physical abrasions. The cloud of explosive debris travels out 15-25 meters at 25 m/s. Anything struck by a crystal spell would be immobilized for 1 post. This immobilization would be able to be destroyed with a D-tier ability, freeing the user.


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131/2 Pointed Prism Abilities Empty Re: 1/2 Pointed Prism Abilities on 26/08/15, 12:54 am

Zadi

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A-Tier


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141/2 Pointed Prism Abilities Empty Re: 1/2 Pointed Prism Abilities on 26/08/15, 01:28 am

Vardreth

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Training approved~


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