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1Zadi's Specialization Training Empty Zadi's Specialization Training 08/03/14, 07:16 pm

Zadi

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Admin

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I approve of that approval.

Zadi

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Secondary Specialization training - Dominance
https://magiworld.forumotion.com/t512-1st-company-opentraining#2092

Duquin

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Approved

Zadi

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Noah

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approve

Zadi

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Umm, could somebody change the letter? I got that approval, but no change to the letter...




Other than the above ^

D~C-Tier Dominance Spec. Training
https://magiworld.forumotion.com/t599-syma-s-molting-the-third-dungeon-trainingclosed#2382

Sara

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Approved.

9Zadi's Specialization Training Empty Zadi's Specilization Training 18/11/14, 02:44 am

Zadi

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Don't know what happened to my old topic, so I'll just make another one.

Changed my secondary spec from Dominance to Strength; https://magiworld.forumotion.com/t2773-zadi-s-actual-secondary-spec-training#13384 (D-tier Strength Spec now)

Ariella Negri

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Over 500 words of this is you haggling with a vendor about purchasing a sword and shield. Your specialization training is supposed to be focused strictly on your training. You did not mention learning about the different types of swords or how you determined a light sword would be best for you, or how you trained your body to become stronger, aside from a small paragraph about playing with dummies. The beginning and ending are acceptable for reasons you would look to changing your specialization, but you need to show more of you actually training to gain a stronger body.

Zadi

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Edit bump~

Is that better or did the act of adding come explanation in the middle and towards the end not do enough for the training to be approved? It probably doesn't equate to 500+ words, but it might be close~

Vardreth

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Looks good to me, Zadi~ I'm approving the training.

Zadi

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Vardreth

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Approved~ I'm used to seeing people write their 'he continued to do this for some time' at the end of their posts, so I almost forgot you had already covered that at the beginning of your post lol.

Zadi

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Int B-tier to A-tier...hopefully. There always seems to be something wrong ~.~
https://magiworld.forumotion.com/t4474-zadi-s-rebith-training-job-solo#23037

Merrze

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It was an interesting read, I enjoyed the crab a lot(He's now my 5th favorite comedian)  and the detail was great but there were two things wrong with it. One is that it was only around 1700 words and that it didn't span over a couple of days, the meditation is a great idea but like all training it should span over time since power can't be gained that easily.

Zadi

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Woops, I miss-copied the last part, the actual "enlightenment" part. SEE! I knew there was something wrong XD
https://magiworld.forumotion.com/t4474-zadi-s-rebith-training-job-solo#23037

However, this doesn't fix the second "problem". I can see how the passing of several days makes sense, but its not like I'm strengthening my body or exercising in order to get the final results. I feel as though the Int spec is a little quicker as long as you come to some sort of revelation about the world's workings seeing as magicians technically manipulate how the world works.

However, if that's still a problem, I'll see what I can do about meditating for a at least one more day (three days in the desert meditating is a bit of a killer~).

Vardreth

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Yea, unfortunately it's a grading rule listed in the specialization section. Without removing that rule, we would be unable to fairly approve this when we've told so many others that they cannot train their spec in just 1 day.

Since it's for story purposes, I'd approve a 2-day training period.

Zadi

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Alright;

added "It took about two days, but" within the second to last paragraph. Is this good?

Vardreth

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Works for me~ Lol. Training approved.

Zadi

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Ariella Negri

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training approved~

Zadi

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From Intelligence (A-tier) ----> Warrior (A-tier)

From Strength (B-tier) ----> Ranger (B-tier)

Duquin

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Done

Zadi

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