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1Mimi's Profession Empty Mimi's Profession 30/12/14, 12:26 pm

Mimi Ulvar

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Primary Profession
Related Specialization: Strength
Profession Title: Sculpting
Description: The molding/breaking/edging of material into statues, shapes, or figures to be bought or sold.
Profession Perks:

  • Patience of the Artist - Sometimes, it takes time to find a worthy muse. Because of this, Mimi has learned patience, making it difficult to frustrate him.
  • Peaceful Dealings - Mimi's peaceful nature is portrayed in his art and inspires feelings of peace in those that view it.
  • Good Samaritan - Art is done for the people. Because of his desire to contribute to mankind, Mimi has become a good Samaritan and is seen as a friendly and helpful man, inspiring others to good acts and making it easier for him to make connections with strangers.



Last edited by Mimi Ulvar on 30/12/14, 06:58 pm; edited 2 times in total

2Mimi's Profession Empty Re: Mimi's Profession 30/12/14, 02:22 pm

Ariella Negri

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Profession perks are more intended as social advantages and should be directly related to the profession itself. For the first one, maybe make it something more like "Sometimes, it takes time to find a worthy muse. Because of this, Mimi has learned patience, making it difficult to frustrate him." For the second one, maybe make the peaceful feeling relate to the art itself, something like "Mimi's peaceful nature is portrayed in his art and inspires feelings of peace in those that view it." The third one is not really related to the profession at all, but could possibly be reworded as "Art is done for the people. Because of his desire to contribute to mankind, Mimi has become a good Samaritan and is seen as a friendly and helpful man, inspiring others to good acts and making it easier for him to make connections with strangers."

3Mimi's Profession Empty Re: Mimi's Profession 30/12/14, 03:28 pm

Mimi Ulvar

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Bumper dumperz.

I can't think of stuff right now to add on to the perks, so I hope it's fine to use what you said.

Please don't kill me.

4Mimi's Profession Empty Re: Mimi's Profession 30/12/14, 06:39 pm

Ariella Negri

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change the name of the first perk to something like Artist's Patience and it should be good to go!

5Mimi's Profession Empty Re: Mimi's Profession 30/12/14, 06:58 pm

Mimi Ulvar

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Good to go, you say?

BUMPERINO!

6Mimi's Profession Empty Re: Mimi's Profession 30/12/14, 07:02 pm

Ariella Negri

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Primary Profession approved~

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[center][u][b]Primary Profession[/b][/u][/center]
[b]Related Specialization:[/b] Strength
[b]Profession Title:[/b] Sculpting
[b]Description:[/b] The molding/breaking/edging of material into statues, shapes, or figures to be bought or sold.
[b]Profession Perks:[/b]
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[*]Patience of the Artist - Sometimes, it takes time to find a worthy muse. Because of this, Mimi has learned patience, making it difficult to frustrate him.
[*]Peaceful Dealings - Mimi's peaceful nature is portrayed in his art and inspires feelings of peace in those that view it.
[*]Good Samaritan - Art is done for the people. Because of his desire to contribute to mankind, Mimi has become a good Samaritan and is seen as a friendly and helpful man, inspiring others to good acts and making it easier for him to make connections with strangers.
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