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1Orie [B Tier Evolution] Empty Orie [B Tier Evolution] 03/11/14, 02:52 am

Lagi

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Orie [B Tier Evolution] Slime_monster_thing_by_kirby_rs-d42s991


Name: ORie
Tier: B
Type: Tactician
Species: Amoeba Slime  {Symbiotic Class}
Speed: 10m/s
Passive Specials:

  • Host Body ~ Orie is able to reside inside the host "pet owner". Orie can choose to have parts of its body, such as the appendages, exist outside of the host body while its core temporarily assimilates with the host body. When host and symbiotic are combined in such a fashion, the host has perfect control over the limbs as they are 'one'.
  • DNA Replication -Orie can mimic and replicate the DNA of other organisms, having more access to attacks and supplementary abilities that resemble thus copied creature.


Active Specials:

  • Air Bubble~ 5 Magoi /Stamina- Sustained- 2 Turn Cooldown- Orie could form around Lagi's head and create a filtered air bubble. The air bubble can provide Lagi with oxygen, as well as filter out any kind of water or toxins. The air bubble is the same size of Lagi's head, but it could be as big as one meter in size.


  • Regenerate Tissue~ 15 Magoi /Stamina  and 7 stamina upkeep- 3 Turns- 6 Turn Cooldown- Orie can heal Lagi's main body of B rank damage over three posts. The symbiotic can assist, assimilate, and accelerate the body's natural healing process.


Appearance: Orie is 100 cm tall, and 20 cm wide. She has four appendages that are blue. Orie's eyes are yellow. Orie was originally a failed magical experiment; one that was supposed to create an artificial life-form. Now, it is but an amoeba that assimilates itself with other living beings. As an amoeba, Orie's volume never changes, but she is able to control her shape since she has no defined spine or bone structure.


Training- https://magiworld.forumotion.com/t2586-training-orie-c-to-b-rank#12399  B rank training



Last edited by King Lagi on 15/02/15, 08:37 pm; edited 3 times in total

2Orie [B Tier Evolution] Empty Re: Orie [B Tier Evolution] 03/11/14, 10:27 am

Vardreth

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Solomon's Proxy wrote:
A-Tier: Can own 1 A-Tier beast and 1 B-Tier Beast. Beasts can register A-Tier and below techniques. At this rank your primary beast (that is, the A-Tiered one), reduces word-counts on travel topics by 25%. At this rank, your A-Tier beast can trained into a Legend Beast (see below for details).

https://magiworld.forumotion.com/t2457-specialization-system#11681

You may only have 1 B-Tier beast at A-Tier Dominance specialization. Once Zygus has been made A-Tier, or once you have traded Zygus out for El Drago as an A-Tier, I will look over your training for Orie in order to approve it.

3Orie [B Tier Evolution] Empty Re: Orie [B Tier Evolution] 08/11/14, 03:11 pm

Ariella Negri

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Regenerate Tissue: Orie would either be able to heal a TOTAL of B-tier damage over three turns OR neutralize poisons/diseases in the body, not both.

Also, and I apologize now, but there has been a MASSIVE oversight on Orie's passive ability to create appendages. All other dominance beast passive traits HAVE to have abilities tied into them in order to utilize them. So, in order for Orie to make appendages, you would need to register techs regarding that.

4Orie [B Tier Evolution] Empty Re: Orie [B Tier Evolution] 08/11/14, 07:52 pm

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Edited

I dont understand, when was this discussed? It was already proven that the system ensures that i cant clash with abilities without a technique, now you are saying i cant do anything at all without an ability? why cant it be treated as natural weaponry like it used to? How else would the blob naturally defend itself? Its just doing it through me..

5Orie [B Tier Evolution] Empty Re: Orie [B Tier Evolution] 08/11/14, 08:04 pm

Ariella Negri

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She could use her body as a whole to attack with, but by listing the ability to make appendages as a passive, instead of having her with some type of "natural" appendage, it would fall under the same rulings as poison effects, healing effects, or any other passive effect.

I know it is something we massive have overlooked up to this point, and for that I apologize. However, if she were able to use a passive trait without incorporating it into an ability, then a creature with poisonous saliva would automatically deal poison damage when they bit, Kabu would be able to bit and heal someone without an ability, and Trixie's bio-electricity would be active at all times instead of only used during an ability.

Per the Dominance Beast Systems page:
Passive Traits

Passive traits are what allow a beast to survive in the wild. These skills do not have any direct offensive capabilities nor do they cost any energy when using them. These types of skills and abilities range from super senses, speech skills, heightened intelligence, flight, swimming as well as any increase in defensive, offensive or supplementary attributes. These skills are always in use and do not have cool downs.

and

Important note: Passive traits are things that could have an impact on how abilities function. Active traits are more similar to an actual ability with a reduced cost but extended cool down.

6Orie [B Tier Evolution] Empty Re: Orie [B Tier Evolution] 08/11/14, 10:14 pm

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Ok, fine

7Orie [B Tier Evolution] Empty Re: Orie [B Tier Evolution] 08/11/14, 10:48 pm

Vardreth

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I made a slight edit to your B-Tier active to reflect the healing ability guidelines more clearly. Also, you realize that Orie is about 4 x your height, and probably a decent amount bigger than you? How does she morph into you? I'm pretty weirded out by it, to be honest XD. If you want to change it, let me know, otherwise here we go~

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[b]Name:[/b] ORie
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Type:[/b] Tactician
[b]Species: [/b]Amoeba Slime  {Symbiotic Class}
[b]Speed:[/b] 10m/s
[b]Passive Specials:[/b]
[list]
[*][i]Host Body[/i] ~ Hagun is able to reside inside the host "pet owner". Hagun can also provide extra  gooey version of appendages if needed *Wings, longer legs*
[*][i]Equivalence[/i] - The speed that the created limbs and appendages ... Etc that Orie creates are equivalent to his rank.
[/list]

[b]Active Specials:[/b]
[list]
[*]Dense Tissue~ 5 Magoi /Stamina- 1 Turns- 2 Turn Cooldown- in Response to Lagi experiencing Physical Trauma  to the body, Orie  simulates the molecules from within his body and hardens them to  take off some of the pain. Orie can subtract D rank  damage from incoming attacks that Lagi Receives for the rest of the turn.


[*]Regenerate Tissue~ 15 Magoi /Stamina  and 7 stamina upkeep- 3 Turns- 6 Turn Cooldown- Orie can heal Lagi's body for B rank damage over three posts. The symbiotic can assist, assimilate, and accelerate the body's natural healing process.
[/list]

[b]Appearance:[/b] Orie is 5 1/2 meter tall. She has a Medium sized slime body  that's blue, and she has yellow eyes.  Orie was originally a failed magical experiment that suppose to create an artificial life-form.  Now its a slime that assimilates itself into other living beings.

8Orie [B Tier Evolution] Empty Re: Orie [B Tier Evolution] 09/11/14, 04:29 am

Lagi

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Slight edit, her size and passive was changed

9Orie [B Tier Evolution] Empty Re: Orie [B Tier Evolution] 09/11/14, 07:42 am

Ariella Negri

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I like the new passive, it opens up a lot more possibilities! I also slightly changed the wording on regenerative tissue so it say "heals b-tier damage OVER three posts" so it is clear it only heals a total of 1 B-tier damage. If that is okay with you, then I will approve her and add her to your vault!~

10Orie [B Tier Evolution] Empty Re: Orie [B Tier Evolution] 09/11/14, 07:52 am

Lagi

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thats fine then

11Orie [B Tier Evolution] Empty Re: Orie [B Tier Evolution] 09/11/14, 07:56 am

Ariella Negri

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Approved and added to your vault~

12Orie [B Tier Evolution] Empty Re: Orie [B Tier Evolution] 14/11/14, 01:02 am

Vardreth

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How does this look, Lagi?

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[img]http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/214/0/8/slime_monster_thing_by_kirby_rs-d42s991.png[/img]


[b]Name:[/b] Orie
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Type:[/b] Tactician
[b]Species: [/b]Amoeba Slime  {Symbiotic Class}
[b]Speed:[/b] 10m/s
[b]Passive Specials:[/b]
[list]
[*][i]Host Body[/i] ~ Orie is able to reside inside the host "pet owner". Orie can choose to have parts of its body, such as the appendages, exist outside of the host body while its core temporarily assimilates with the host body. When host and symbiote are combined in such a fashion, the host has perfect control over the limbs as they are 'one'.
[*][i]DNA Replication[/i] - Orie can mimic and replicate the DNA of other organisms, having more access to attacks and supplementary abilities that resemble thus copied creature.
[/list]

[b]Active Specials:[/b]
[list]
[*]Dense Tissue~ 5 Magoi /Stamina- 1 Turns- 2 Turn Cooldown- in Response to Lagi experiencing Physical Trauma  to the body, Orie  simulates the molecules from within his body and hardens them to  take off some of the pain. Orie can subtract D rank  damage from incoming attacks that Lagi Receives for the rest of the turn.
[*]Regenerate Tissue~ 15 Magoi /Stamina  and 7 stamina upkeep- 3 Turns- 6 Turn Cooldown- Orie can heal Lagi's main body of B rank damage over three posts. The symbiotic can assist, assimilate, and accelerate the body's natural healing process.
[/list]

[b]Appearance:[/b] Orie is 100 cm tall, and 20 cm wide. She has four appendages that are blue. Orie's eyes are yellow. Orie was originally a failed magical experiment; one that was supposed to create an artificial life-form. Now, it is but an amoeba that assimilates itself with other living beings. As an amoeba, Orie's volume never changes, but she is able to control her shape since she has no defined spine or bone structure.

13Orie [B Tier Evolution] Empty Re: Orie [B Tier Evolution] 14/11/14, 09:14 am

Lagi

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its looking real sexy, thanks garret. Ill take it. Now onto phase two... which shouldn't be much

14Orie [B Tier Evolution] Empty Re: Orie [B Tier Evolution] 15/02/15, 08:39 pm

Lagi

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Edited

15Orie [B Tier Evolution] Empty Re: Orie [B Tier Evolution] 15/02/15, 08:52 pm

Azix Niraj

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Approved and added to vault~

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[img]http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/214/0/8/slime_monster_thing_by_kirby_rs-d42s991.png[/img]


[b]Name:[/b] ORie
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Type:[/b] Tactician
[b]Species: [/b]Amoeba Slime  {Symbiotic Class}
[b]Speed:[/b] 10m/s
[b]Passive Specials:[/b]
[list]
[*][i]Host Body[/i] ~  Orie is able to reside inside the host "pet owner". Orie can choose to have parts of its body, such as the appendages, exist outside of the host body while its core temporarily assimilates with the host body. When host and symbiotic are combined in such a fashion, the host has perfect control over the limbs as they are 'one'.
[*][i]DNA Replication[/i] -Orie can mimic and replicate the DNA of other organisms, having more access to attacks and supplementary abilities that resemble thus copied creature.
[/list]

[b]Active Specials:[/b]
[list]
[*]Air Bubble~ 5 Magoi /Stamina- Sustained- 2 Turn Cooldown- Orie could form around Lagi's head and create a filtered air bubble. The air bubble can provide Lagi with oxygen, as well as filter out any kind of water or toxins. The  air bubble is the same size of Lagi's head, but it could be as big as one meter in size.


[*]Regenerate Tissue~ 15 Magoi /Stamina  and 7 stamina upkeep- 3 Turns- 6 Turn Cooldown- Orie can heal Lagi's main body of B rank damage over three posts. The symbiotic can assist, assimilate, and accelerate the body's natural healing process.
[/list]

[b]Appearance:[/b] Orie is 100 cm tall, and 20 cm wide. She has four appendages that are blue. Orie's eyes are yellow. Orie was originally a failed magical experiment; one that was supposed to create an artificial life-form. Now, it is but an amoeba that assimilates itself with other living beings. As an amoeba, Orie's volume never changes, but she is able to control her shape since she has no defined spine or bone structure.

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