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1Orie A Tier to [Ω-Tier]  Empty Orie A Tier to [Ω-Tier] on 05/03/17, 04:42 pm

Lagi

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Name: Oriana Zetal
Tier: [Ω-Tier]
Type: Parasite
Magic Type: Lightning
Species: Living Magic Weapon - Amoebic Lightning God Legend Beast
Appearance: A black symbiotic living inside a human body. It possesses a female base body shape which can be morphed and molded according to her host's wishes. The full manifestation of orie is something akin to a goddess. There is a floating gold orb with three metal like substances floating on the top of her head. It reminds one of a crown of some sorts. Orie's main face contains about a pair of flowing eyes, along with no mouth like the usual. However, she does maintain a ghastly appearance of having a face at her stomach, as well as a tail that  extends into a monotonous face as well.

Constantly surrounding Orie is sparks of lightning in a way, as well as having goddess amoebic creature bearing two pairs of wings of the top of her head. Overall, Orie's weapon traits, as well as her fully developed persona, is the finished product of the being both a weapon and a legend beast. She is both terrifying and beautiful.

Function:

Zetal Domain - Feeding magoi into the tool causes Orie's extended limbs to become shrouded in an A-tier field of magoi. This field acts as an A-tier offense and defense effectively shielding Orie and her user. While active, Orie can be passively manipulated freely at the user's will without need for abilities within a 5m radius. This ability causes Orie's amoebic body to shine with a golden light. If the field is broken, the ability is canceled and placed on a 1 post cool down. 10 magoi to activate | 5 magoi to sustain.

Drawback: If Orie dies, the host can get knocked out from shock. Along with the host sharing pain senses with Orie, severed limbs would experience the same kind of intensity, but only temporarily.

Beast Traits: (See the Trait Systems for more info.)
Trait Name: Host Body Manipulation
Trait Tier: Ω-Tier
Trait Requirement: Body Manipulation
Trait Description: Orie can choose to have parts of its body, such as the appendages, exist outside of the host body while its core temporarily assimilates with the host body. When host and symbiotic are combined in such a fashion, the host has perfect control over the limbs as they are 'one'.
Trait Effect: Orie can be used in body manipulation abilities to augment Lagi's reach and strength, capping at A-Tier damage. Orie’s host will now also be protected by an automatic form of defense, one very similar to a Magician’s borg. The host is able to use it to block up to single instance of A-Tier damage for 20 Magoi, putting it on a 4 post cooldown.

Trait Name: Healing Factor
Trait Tier: Ω-Tier
Trait Requirement: N/A
Trait Description: Orie can rapidly regenerate the hosts soft tissues such as skin and muscle and repair fractured bone. Broken bones and lost limbs can also be repaired, and the healing can reach over to status aliments
Trait Effect: Allows Orie to register Healing and Limb regeneration-based abilities. Additionally, Orie is capable of healing their host of A-Tier damage twice per thread, for free.

Trait Name: Living Magic Tool
Trait Tier: Ω-Tier
Trait Requirement: Legend Beast
Trait Description: Subjected to the experiments of the Dark Hand, the amoebic creature has undergone drastic changes. Constant exposure to rukh and magoi changed Orie's body into a conduit for magoi. When this trait was observed by the Dark Hand's mysterious benefactor, they were given instructions on how to best make use of it. A magic symbol was forged and then inserted into Orie transforming her body into magic tool using the rukh in the blood of the Lightning Dragon, El Drago, to produce lightning magic.
Trait Effect: Orie has become an A-tier Lightning magic Tool. Her body now follows the item durability systems. If destroyed, Orie will go dormant until brought to the shop for repair.

Trait Name: Acidic Digestive system
Trait Tier: Ω-Tier
Trait Requirement: N/A
Trait Description: Orie has the ability to generate acid and manipulate the corrosiveness, from having weak burning sensations to burning a big hole in even the strongest materials. This is how she would usually eat if not depending on left over waste from Lagi's digestive system.
Trait Effect: Allows Orie to register Acidic-based abilities. If an enemy's weapon clashes with Orie or any ability she produces, D-Tier acid damage is dealt to the object in question.

Trait Name: Danger Sense
Trait Tier: Ω-Tier
Trait Requirement: Orie Omega
Trait Description: Protecting the host body is the first and foremost function of a parasite, due to the fact that their relationship is dependent on each other. With the recent evolution that Orie experienced, one of the ways she keeps them safe is by developing a heightened intuition of danger or dangerous situation, linked from orie in order to inform the host body of the incoming threat. This is done through a sense of hypersensitivity throughout their surroundings.
Trait Effect: The user can sense nearing danger, acute danger, potential immediate danger, and impending danger and sense unwanted or hectic threats to their well-being and evade it. Heightened senses hypersensitivity ranges from 10 meters from the host body. The host and the symbiote isn't aware of anything further than that until it enters that range. At the start of each thread Orie grants the host an enhanced version of this ability, allowing them to dodge a single instance of A-Tier damage once per thread, uncontested.



Last edited by Lagi on 13/03/17, 01:14 am; edited 3 times in total


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2Orie A Tier to [Ω-Tier]  Empty Re: Orie A Tier to [Ω-Tier] on 06/03/17, 11:58 pm

Lagi

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and she's done. Not married to omega tier body manip and acidic as of yet, would like to see what would be done with it first before i think of it as a waste of points.


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3Orie A Tier to [Ω-Tier]  Empty Re: Orie A Tier to [Ω-Tier] on 10/03/17, 08:46 pm

Rima Fahim

Rima Fahim
A-Tier
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The image for Orie itself is completely fine, however, in the description remove the parts talking about the two swords she is holding, oh and also remove anything about the creatures floating near her. You can keep the picture for her though ^^

I would also like you to know that you actually have 5 trait points left to spend, so it's up to you if you want to spend them right now or not.~ You've already received the staff-made trait for her, as that's what the whole living magic tool thing is, so yeah. :> Sorry it took so long for us to grade this, but you have to remember no one on the current staff is really that knowledgeable about stuff of this caliber.


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4Orie A Tier to [Ω-Tier]  Empty Re: Orie A Tier to [Ω-Tier] on 10/03/17, 11:05 pm

Lagi

Lagi
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Removed mention of weapons?

and if the tool function was free...i'm going to sit on that last 5 points for now if you dont mind


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5Orie A Tier to [Ω-Tier]  Empty Re: Orie A Tier to [Ω-Tier] on 12/03/17, 04:27 am

Rima Fahim

Rima Fahim
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Here is what we were able to come up with, bump the post if you agree to these following changes.

Trait Name: Host Body Manipulation
Trait Tier: Ω-Tier
Trait Requirement: Body Manipulation
Trait Description: Orie can choose to have parts of its body, such as the appendages, exist outside of the host body while its core temporarily assimilates with the host body. When host and symbiotic are combined in such a fashion, the host has perfect control over the limbs as they are 'one'.
Trait Effect: Orie can be used in body manipulation abilities to augment Lagi's reach and strength, capping at A-Tier damage. Orie’s host will now also be protected by an automatic form of defense, one very similar to a Magician’s borg. The host is able to use it to block up to single instance of A-Tier damage for 20 Magoi, putting it on a 4 post cooldown.

Trait Name: Healing Factor
Trait Tier: Ω-Tier
Trait Requirement: N/A
Trait Description: Orie can rapidly regenerate the hosts soft tissues such as skin and muscle and repair fractured bone. Broken bones and lost limbs can also be repaired, and the healing can reach over to status aliments
Trait Effect: Allows Orie to register Healing and Limb regeneration-based abilities. Additionally, Orie is capable of healing their host of A-Tier damage twice per thread, for free.

Trait Name: Acidic Digestive system
Trait Tier: Ω-Tier
Trait Requirement: N/A
Trait Description: Orie has the ability to generate acid and manipulate the corrosiveness, from having weak burning sensations to burning a big hole in even the strongest materials. This is how she would usually eat if not depending on left over waste from Lagi's digestive system.
Trait Effect: Allows Orie to register Acidic-based abilities. If an enemy's weapon clashes with Orie or any ability she produces, D-Tier acid damage is dealt to the object in question.


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6Orie A Tier to [Ω-Tier]  Empty Re: Orie A Tier to [Ω-Tier] on 12/03/17, 10:59 am

Lagi

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Alright fine, ill keep it

the last one is up in the air... waiting for my last trait from my other things


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7Orie A Tier to [Ω-Tier]  Empty Re: Orie A Tier to [Ω-Tier] on 13/03/17, 01:14 am

Lagi

Lagi
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Final stage, all abilities placed and updated


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8Orie A Tier to [Ω-Tier]  Empty Re: Orie A Tier to [Ω-Tier] on 13/03/17, 01:20 am

Rima Fahim

Rima Fahim
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Orie A Tier to [Ω-Tier]  HVhvTYv

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[center][img]http://i.imgur.com/j3YHaUZ.png[/img][/center]
[b]Name:[/b] Oriana Zetal
[b]Tier:[/b] [Ω-Tier]
[b]Type:[/b] Parasite
[b]Magic Type:[/b] Lightning
[b]Species:[/b] Living Magic Weapon - Amoebic Lightning God Legend Beast
[b]Appearance:[/b] A black symbiotic living inside a human body. It possesses a female base body shape which can be morphed and molded according to her host's wishes. The full manifestation of orie is something akin to a goddess. There is a floating gold orb with three metal like substances floating on the top of her head. It reminds one of a crown of some sorts. Orie's main face contains about a pair of flowing eyes, along with no mouth like the usual. However, she does maintain a ghastly appearance of having a face at her stomach, as well as a tail that  extends into a monotonous face as well.

Constantly surrounding Orie is sparks of lightning in a way, as well as having goddess amoebic creature bearing two pairs of wings of the top of her head. Overall, Orie's weapon traits, as well as her fully developed persona, is the finished product of the being both a weapon and a legend beast. She is both terrifying and beautiful.

[b]Function:[/b]

[b]Zetal Domain -[/b] Feeding magoi into the tool causes Orie's extended limbs to become shrouded in an A-tier field of magoi. This field acts as an A-tier offense and defense effectively shielding Orie and her user. While active, Orie can be passively manipulated freely at the user's will without need for abilities within a 5m radius. This ability causes Orie's amoebic body to shine with a golden light. If the field is broken, the ability is canceled and placed on a 1 post cool down. 10 magoi to activate | 5 magoi to sustain.

[b]Drawback: [/b]If Orie dies, the host can get knocked out from shock. Along with the host sharing pain senses with Orie, severed limbs would experience the same kind of intensity, but only temporarily.

[b]Beast Traits:[/b] (See the [url=http://magiworld.forumotion.com/t6506-trait-template-systems][b]Trait Systems[/b][/url] for more info.)
[b]Trait Name:[/b] Host Body Manipulation
[b]Trait Tier:[/b] Ω-Tier
[b]Trait Requirement:[/b] Body Manipulation
[b]Trait Description:[/b] Orie can choose to have parts of its body, such as the appendages, exist outside of the host body while its core temporarily assimilates with the host body. When host and symbiotic are combined in such a fashion, the host has perfect control over the limbs as they are 'one'.
[b]Trait Effect:[/b] Orie can be used in body manipulation abilities to augment Lagi's reach and strength, capping at A-Tier damage. Orie’s host will now also be protected by an automatic form of defense, one very similar to a Magician’s borg. The host is able to use it to block up to single instance of A-Tier damage for 20 Magoi, putting it on a 4 post cooldown.

[b]Trait Name:[/b] Healing Factor
[b]Trait Tier:[/b] Ω-Tier
[b]Trait Requirement:[/b] N/A
[b]Trait Description:[/b] Orie can rapidly regenerate the hosts soft tissues such as skin and muscle and repair fractured bone. Broken bones and lost limbs can also be repaired, and the healing can reach over to status aliments
[b]Trait Effect:[/b] Allows Orie to register Healing and Limb regeneration-based abilities. Additionally, Orie is capable of healing their host of A-Tier damage twice per thread, for free.

[b]Trait Name:[/b] Living Magic Tool
[b]Trait Tier:[/b] Ω-Tier
[b]Trait Requirement:[/b] Legend Beast
[b]Trait Description:[/b] Subjected to the experiments of the Dark Hand, the amoebic creature has undergone drastic changes. Constant exposure to rukh and magoi changed Orie's body into a conduit for magoi. When this trait was observed by the Dark Hand's mysterious benefactor, they were given instructions on how to best make use of it. A magic symbol was forged and then inserted into Orie transforming her body into magic tool using the rukh in the blood of the Lightning Dragon, El Drago, to produce lightning magic.
[b]Trait Effect:[/b] Orie has become an A-tier Lightning magic Tool. Her body now follows the item durability systems. If destroyed, Orie will go dormant until brought to the shop for repair.

[b]Trait Name:[/b] Acidic Digestive system
[b]Trait Tier:[/b] Ω-Tier
[b]Trait Requirement:[/b] N/A
[b]Trait Description:[/b] Orie has the ability to generate acid and manipulate the corrosiveness, from having weak burning sensations to burning a big hole in even the strongest materials. This is how she would usually eat if not depending on left over waste from Lagi's digestive system.
[b]Trait Effect:[/b] Allows Orie to register Acidic-based abilities. If an enemy's weapon clashes with Orie or any ability she produces, D-Tier acid damage is dealt to the object in question.

[b]Trait Name:[/b] Danger Sense
[b]Trait Tier:[/b] Ω-Tier
[b]Trait Requirement:[/b] Orie Omega
[b]Trait Description:[/b] Protecting the host body is the first and foremost function of a parasite, due to the fact that their relationship is dependent on each other. With the recent evolution that Orie experienced, one of the ways she keeps them safe is by developing a heightened intuition of danger or dangerous situation, linked from orie in order to inform the host body of the incoming threat.  This is done through a sense of hypersensitivity throughout their surroundings.
[b]Trait Effect:[/b] The user can sense nearing danger, acute danger, potential immediate danger, and impending danger and sense unwanted or hectic threats to their well-being and evade it. Heightened senses hypersensitivity ranges from 10 meters from the host body. The host and the symbiote isn't aware of anything further than that until it enters that range. At the start of each thread Orie grants the host an enhanced version of this ability, allowing them to dodge a single instance of A-Tier damage once per thread, uncontested.


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