Orie's Abilities Part 1

Name: Goo Trap
Tier: B-Tier
Cost: 30 stamina/ 15 Stamina
Beast Type: Tactician
Range: 20 Meters
Duration: Sustained
Cool-Down: Sustain +1
Description: Orie generates and shoots out a  digestive gooey substance that serves as an extension of her body in a particular direction.  This attack can be be executed from any exit point of lagi's body, including the pores, at 25 m/s with the range of being shot as far as 20 meters. The puddle itself is 7 meters wide. Whoever caught will  be trapped with a goo like substance with a b rank resistance, which would mean strength attempts from within  the goo trap would be met with a b rank resistance, making it hard for strength users to break out from the inside unless they have A rank strength. The goo trap will start to digest the affected individual(s) upon contact for a continuous c rank damage of second degree burns until broken from the outside, or the force ending of the technique by lagi. When being broken from the outside, the goo trip can take up to c rank damage before being broken .

Name: Kagune Wing
Tier: B-Tier
Cost: 30 stamina
Beast Type: Tactician
Range: 20 Meters
Duration: 1 post
Cool-Down: 6 posts
Description: Orie generates into a pair of black and red wings that are 3 1/2 meters in length  and two meters in width that will reside on Lagi's back. The creation speed of these wings is 25 m/s. After that, they would flap continuously at the speed of 25 m/s to create an amazing razor wind that moves at the speed of 25 m/s  and reaches as far as 20 meters. The damage capabilities is that the  air pressure is strong enough fracture bones on direct impact. However, the wind produced is of B rank strength, which can derail and knock back  incoming attacks, Gas, smoke,  B rank and lower by 20 meters away from its original intended location.

Kagune: As an ability, she could only deal a maximum of c-tier damage with the ability, for duration, please put "sustained"

Protean Survivability: Please include that orie must obtain the genetic material before "granting" them to Lagi, so she would need to touch a fish to give you gills, that kind of thing

for Kagune, the appendages all together could only equal 15m, not each of them... if the digestive fluids are only on the appendages and not her whole body, this is fine, otherwise, you would not be immune

edited, sorry for the trouble.................

Kagune Wing - since this is offensive/supplementary, it would suffer the combination "debuff" of lowering both the damage and the effect by one tier.

Goo Trap - same for this, as it immobilizes and deals damage, both effects would need to be lowered a tier

edited

Porcupine Pike!: This would need to follow the "Amount" guidelines and damage would need to be specified based on the number that hit. Max number would be 15. Maximum scale would be 7 meters, not 20.

Goo Trap: Change duration to "Sustained" and cool down to "5 posts or sustain+1" specify the scale of the goo puddle would be a max of 7 meters in diameter.

Kagune Wing: The wings could not exceed 7 meters in scale, combined.

Scale for all B-tier abilities would be 7 meters, not 20, please fix accordingly.

ok how bout now

approved for training, i believe~

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[b]Name:[/b] Goo Trap
[b]Tier:[/b] B-Tier
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 stamina/ 15 Stamina
[b]Beast Type: [/b]Tactician
[b]Range:[/b] 20 Meters
[b]Duration:[/b] Sustained
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 posts or Sustain +1
[b]Description: [/b] Orie generates and shoots out a  digestive gooey substance that serves as an extension of her body in a particular direction.  This attack can be be executed from any exit point of lagi's body, including the pores, at 25 m/s with the range of 7 meters. Whoever caught will  be trapped with a goo like substance with a b rank resistance, which would mean strength attempts from within  the goo trap would be met with a b rank resistance, making it hard for strength users to break out from the inside unless they have A rank strength. The goo trap will start to digest the affected individual(s) upon contact for a continuous c rank damage of second degree burns until broken from the outside, or the force ending of the technique by lagi. When being broken from the outside, the goo trip can take up to c rank damage before being broken .

[b]Name:[/b] Kagune Wing
[b]Tier:[/b] B-Tier
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 stamina
[b]Beast Type: [/b]Tactician
[b]Range:[/b] 20 Meters
[b]Duration:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 6 posts
[b]Description: [/b] Orie generates into a pair of black and red wings that are 3 1/2 meters in length  and two meters in width that will reside on Lagi's back. The creation speed of these wings is 25 m/s. After that, they would flap continuously at the speed of 25 m/s to create an amazing razor wind that moves at the speed of 25 m/s  and reaches as far as 20 meters. The damage capabilities is that the  air pressure is strong enough fracture bones on direct impact. However, the wind produced is of B rank strength, which can derail and knock back  incoming attacks, Gas, smoke,  B rank and lower by 20 meters away from its original intended location. 


[b]Name:[/b] Porcupine Pike!
[b]Tier:[/b] B-Tier
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 stamina
[b]Beast Type: [/b]Tactician
[b]Range:[/b] 20 Meters
[b]Duration:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 6 posts
[b]Description: [/b]From where Lagi is currently located as an aoe, orie emits porcupine like quills that shoot outward from every pore of lagi's body at 25 m/s, and retract just as fast. The quills are 7 meters long and they  are three meters thick. There are four quills in total, each quill does D rank damage.


https://magiworld.forumotion.com/t2344-orie-s-wonderful-adventures-and-slave-owners-b-rank-training#11120


i dont want porcupine anymore, so the first two please

The first post is short by two words. Also, please remember that RANGE is different from SCALE... the goo puddle may only be 7 meters wide, but it can be up to 20 meters away, unless it can only be near Orie. So when you are specifying the size of the puddle, say it was 7 meters wide, not 7 meters in range.

Kagune wing is approved~

https://magiworld.forumotion.com/t2344-orie-s-wonderful-adventures-and-slave-owners-b-rank-training#11096


fixed

Training approved