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1Starter Pack (Adam, Done) Empty Starter Pack (Adam, Done) on 28/02/14, 05:43 pm

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Name: Tower Burst
Tier: B
Cost: 30 Magoi
Element: Strength
Class: Offensive
Range: Within a 30m radius of the caster
Duration: Instant
Cool-Down: 5 posts
Description: In a show of amazing might, Adam slams his staff onto the ground and in doing so calls forth a mighty burst of force from any space on the ground within a 30m radius of him. He does so by commanding the rukh to erupt from the ground underneath his hapless victim, causing the ground below to explode and launch the target 15m into the air like a ragdoll. The eruption is 15m in diameter. The initial impact breaks bones and causes severe internal damage, and falling impact (unless nullified by flight somehow) deals the same damage.


Name: Confinement
Tier: C
Cost: 20 Magoi (+20 to sustain)
Element: Strength
Class: Strategy/Tactical/Supplementary
Range: 20m
Duration: 2 posts (or until broken)
Cool-Down: 3 posts
Description: Adam clasps his hands together, and in doing so, commands the rukh to compress any target within a 20m range between two 10m high and long walls of force, which prevent movement. He can either let go (the target will be disoriented or stunned by the impact of the walls of force closing upon him for one post) or sustain the spell with one hand whilst using another to follow up with an offensive attack. This spell's effect can be broken by an aura spell or technique of C-rank or higher.


Name: Release
Tier: C
Cost: 20 Magoi
Element: Strength
Class: Offensive
Range: 20m all around Adam
Duration: Instant
Cool-Down: 3 posts
Description: Adam's defiance is revealed in the form of a mighty burst of Magoi; he commands it to converge around his whole body and explode outward 20m in a quickly expanding (C-rank speed) wall of force. Anything hit by the wall who fails to raise a defensive technique is knocked back 5m and experiences C-rank damage (broken bones and mild trauma).


Name: Power Kick
Tier: D
Cost: 10 Magoi
Element: Strength
Class: Offensive
Range: Melee
Duration: Instant
Cool-Down: 2 posts
Description: As a display of dominance over his opponent, Adam commands the rukh to converge around one of his feet- he then kicks the opponent ruthlessly, three times, causing bruises and minor trauma around the affected areas.


Name: Black Magic
Tier: D-tier
Cost: 10 Magoi
Element: Strength
Class: Supplementary
Range: 10m
Duration: Instant
Cool-Down: 2 posts
Description: Adam commands the rukh to form a 5m ball of black magic to hurl at his opponent which travels at 10m/s. The ball causes numbness and paralysis of the same limb.



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2Starter Pack (Adam, Done) Empty Re: Starter Pack (Adam, Done) on 28/02/14, 10:46 pm

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Black Hammer

At max B-ranks are able to " automatically break bones upon impact and can cause major internal damage. Cuts tear straight through muscle and are able to nick the bone. "

At what speeds does the hammer move?

Since its offensive, it should only be able to destroyed by 1 B-rank.

What is this hammer crafted out of?

Confinment:

A C-rank should be able to stop this attack. Since this is not defensive it doesn't take 1 of the above rank.

If this last for 2 turns it should be sustainable.  If not make it one post. Other than that looks good.

Royal Guard:

State Each one of the shields can take 1 C-rank. Together both can still take one B-rank of course. Other then that looks good.

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It shouldn't be able to see B-tier illusions or C unless thats its only capability. Give it one capability capable of countering a gas of a rank higher since that would be considered defensive.  If not, give a sensory type of equal rank. However you have to find a way of explaining how your Magoi does this that is plausible.

Shadow Strike:

 The ball can cause minor bruising, but for the second part of the spell, that is denied. 5 seconds is to vague, use post when talking about time. Also be sure to say how fast this black ball moves,, and how big it is.

3Starter Pack (Adam, Done) Empty Re: Starter Pack (Adam, Done) on 01/03/14, 12:23 am

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Completion bump.

4Starter Pack (Adam, Done) Empty Re: Starter Pack (Adam, Done) on 01/03/14, 12:43 am

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Borg is a magician's only defense. They cannot register actual defensive spells. Therefore Royal Guard is null. You have to make a new spell in its place.


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5Starter Pack (Adam, Done) Empty Re: Starter Pack (Adam, Done) on 01/03/14, 10:15 pm

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Completion bump 2.

6Starter Pack (Adam, Done) Empty Re: Starter Pack (Adam, Done) on 02/03/14, 10:35 am

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Tower Burst: You must do something that triggers this. You can't simply make the ground erupt. Maybe by slamming your staff on the ground. How big is this eruption?

Confinement: How much does it take to break this? How big are these walls? What type of disorientation does this cause

Release: Approved.

Powerkick: Approved

Black Magic: How big is this ball? How fast does it move?

7Starter Pack (Adam, Done) Empty Re: Starter Pack (Adam, Done) on 02/03/14, 05:41 pm

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Completion bump again, lol

8Starter Pack (Adam, Done) Empty Re: Starter Pack (Adam, Done) on 02/03/14, 06:29 pm

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Falling and initial should do the same damage, or falling should do no damage.

For Confinement: How would a wall cause disorientation?

Black Magic: Draining is not allowed. Paralysis of a limb is fine.

9Starter Pack (Adam, Done) Empty Re: Starter Pack (Adam, Done) on 02/03/14, 06:35 pm

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Bump again again.
(It says in the spell description that falling and initial damage are the same, lol)

10Starter Pack (Adam, Done) Empty Re: Starter Pack (Adam, Done) on 02/03/14, 06:59 pm

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Okay, but that can easily be misinterpreted as double B-rank damage, but your intentions were right. So...

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