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Name: Ares | God of War
Tier: B
Type: Brute
Species: Canine
Speed: 10 m/s
Passive Specials:

  • Flame Breath ~ Breaths in Carbon Dioxide and Oxygen which causes a chemical reaction in his body that allows him to produce fire. Much like the venom of a snake this fire is used in defence, but can be used in a offensive way.Ares mostly produces the flame when he feels like he is in danger.
  • Heightened Senses ~ Due to its unique color and marking, hunting in the wild was hard the senses of the breed of canine became heightened. Ares can see up to 200 meters in the light and 50 meters in the dark. He can hear up to 17000 meters.




Active Specials:

  • N/A




Appearance:
Ares is a quadruped, canine with an orange pelt marked by jagged black stripes. It has diamond-shaped ears with beige insides, black eyes, a round, black nose, and two pointed teeth protruding from its upper jaw. Its head, muzzle, and chest are covered in shaggy, beige fur, except for two oval sections around each eye and ear. Long tufts of fur grow behind its elbows and around its ankles. Its underside is black, and it has a billowing, beige tail that is bent in the middle. Each paw has three toes and a round, pink pad. Ares is 2 meters tall (6 ft 5 inches) while standing on all fours and weighs 340 pounds.

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Name: Athena | Goddess of Wisdom
Tier: C
Type: Tactician
Species: Fairy
Speed: 7 m/s
Passive Specials:

  • Flight ~ Athena being a fairy has the ability to fly at speeds of 7 m/s and float.
  • Advanced Intellect ~ Due to being a in ruins around various scrolls and different cultural scripts and having been around for a unknown amount of time Athena has the ability to learn various languages and is able to talk. She has a IQ of over 300.




Active Specials:

  • Healing Sight ~ Using the 3rd eye that she has on her torso Athena is able to heal those she so chooses. This is because she creates a special enzyme that comes from her pours, so she had to physically touch the person she is trying to heal; injuries; she loses 5 magoi every time the ability is used. The cool down for this is 5 posts. However this only heals D tier damage ad takes two posts to heal.



Appearance:
Athena is a small, white, humanoid creature. She has short, stubby legs and comparatively longer arms. There are flaps on the underside of her arms, which give the impression of long sleeves. On her belly is a curved seam, which conceals a third eye, known as her "true" eye. Additionally, it has a normal pair of circular eyes on her face, with small, blue triangular markings underneath. On her head is a large, yellow structure with three points extending outward: one from the top and one on either side. On each point is a blue tag. A rounded extension hangs from either side of the yellow structure, framing Athena's face. Two yellow streamers flow from her back, resembling comet tails. She stands at 2 ft 3 pounds.

I forget how fast they go at each rank~



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Hello, Raizel here, and I'll be checking your app.

Before we start, here's a  Thumbs Up! Why? Because Pokemon. Ok, Time for your review ~

Uh, is it just me or is your dominance Only C rank? You're only allowed to have a C rank pet. But I guess you already have it under training, so I'll just ignore that for now.

Also, about movement speed, I don't really understand So I won't judge it. It says here,
Beasts deal passive damage equivalent to their tier, and move at constant speeds equivalent to HALF of their tier's speed.


Let's start with Growli-I mean Ares.

1. The only problem I have is Heightened sense. To me, it seems..... too much. 17 km away is a long way lol.

2. Change its weight to kg. Yaku loves metric systems :D

On to Athena.

1. Once again, change the measurements to metric system. Thanks~

2. On to some fixing.
Healing Sight ~ Using the 3rd eye that she has on her torso Athena is able to heal those she so chooses. The injuries heal in one post and she loses 5 magoi every time the abilityis used. The cool down for this is 5 posts.

Ok, here's some issues.

Considering the cost is 5 magoi, I'll assume the rank of this skill is a D rank, since "These skills(Actives) will cost energy to use that is ½ the amount of a normal ability of that tier". So since this is D rank, please state that it heals that it only heals D-rank damage over a period of 2 turns.

That's all for now I guess. On to you, Yakuroro-senpai!







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UPDATE : I found out the speed of your pets.

Your B rank can move at the speed of 10m/s and your C rank moves at 7m/s.


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These were for after the training was approved. Forgot to mention that.  17 m is about right a adult wolf can see and hear  a good distance 10m plus can't remember the exact numbers, so I bumped them other wise they wouldn't be heightened :P. Yes it is D to my knowledge of course Yaku may say other wise it has to be D because she is only C rank.


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-Shouldn't move at 15m/s without a passive to increase his speed.

Healing Sight
-This can't work on sight alone as it can't be magic. Please explain what about the creature has healing properties(Saliva for example)
-It also needs to state that the healing is D-tier and that it happens over the course of two posts or whatever the ability guidelines say D-tier healing is.


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Diligence

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That should do er.  Thumbs Up!


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Pre-approved then~


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I shall deduct the 20,000 Huang for my C tiered beast.


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[b]Name:[/b] Ares | [color=#cc0000][i]God of War[/i][/color]
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Type:[/b] Brute
[b]Species:[/b] Canine
[b]Speed:[/b] 10 m/s
[b]Passive Specials:[/b]
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[*][i]Flame Breath[/i] ~ Breaths in Carbon Dioxide and Oxygen which causes a chemical reaction in his body that allows him to produce fire. Much like the venom of a snake this fire is used in defence, but can be used in a offensive way.Ares mostly produces the flame when he feels like he is in danger.
[*][i]Heightened Senses[/i] ~ Due to its unique color and marking, hunting in the wild was hard the senses of the breed of canine became heightened. Ares can see up to 200 meters in the light and 50 meters in the dark. He can hear up to 17000 meters.
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[b]Active Specials:[/b]
[list]
[*][i]N/A
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[b]
Appearance:[/b] Ares is a quadruped, canine with an orange pelt marked by jagged black stripes. It has diamond-shaped ears with beige insides, black eyes, a round, black nose, and two pointed teeth protruding from its upper jaw. Its head, muzzle, and chest are covered in shaggy, beige fur, except for two oval sections around each eye and ear. Long tufts of fur grow behind its elbows and around its ankles. Its underside is black, and it has a billowing, beige tail that is bent in the middle. Each paw has three toes and a round, pink pad. Ares is 2 meters tall (6 ft 5 inches) while standing on all fours and weighs 340 pounds.

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[b]Name:[/b] Athena | [color=#0066ff][i]Goddess of Wisdom[/i][/color]
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Type:[/b] Tactician
[b]Species:[/b] Fairy
[b]Speed:[/b] 7 m/s
[b]Passive Specials:[/b]
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[*][i]Flight[/i] ~ Athena being a fairy has the ability to fly at speeds of 7 m/s and float.
[*][i]Advanced Intellect[/i] ~ Due to being a in ruins around various scrolls and different cultural scripts and having been around for a unknown amount of time Athena has the ability to learn various languages and is able to talk. She has a IQ of over 300.
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[b]Active Specials:[/b]
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[*][i]Healing Sight[/i] ~ Using the 3rd eye that she has on her torso Athena is able to heal those she so chooses. This is because she creates a special enzyme that comes from her pours, so she had to physically touch the person she is trying to heal; injuries; she loses 5 magoi every time the ability is used. The cool down for this is 5 posts. However this only heals D tier damage ad takes two posts to heal.
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Appearance:[/b] Athena is a small, white, humanoid creature. She has short, stubby legs and comparatively longer arms. There are flaps on the underside of her arms, which give the impression of long sleeves. On her belly is a curved seam, which conceals a third eye, known as her "true" eye. Additionally, it has a normal pair of circular eyes on her face, with small, blue triangular markings underneath. On her head is a large, yellow structure with three points extending outward: one from the top and one on either side. On each point is a blue tag. A rounded extension hangs from either side of the yellow structure, framing Athena's face. Two yellow streamers flow from her back, resembling comet tails. She stands at 2 ft 3 pounds.

[size=13][color=#cc0000]I forget how fast they go at each rank~[/color][/size]


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Thank you all, for everything.

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