River Styx Style

Name: Redirecting blows (River Styx Style)
Tier:  B
Cost: 30/15 sustained Stamina
Weapon Type: Body
Class: Defensive
Range: Close
Duration: 3 posts
Cool-Down: 5 posts
Description: The user enters a serene state of mind, taking note of the direction and speed the opponent's attack is moving. Moving at 20m/s , the user redirects the trajectory of up to 15 attacks that add up to A tier damage with any combination of their feet, knees, elbows or fists.

Name: Sealing the Magoi Meridians (River Styx Style)
Tier: B
Cost: 30 Stamina
Weapon Type: Body
Class: Supplementary
Range: Close (Within striking distance)
Duration: Instant
Cool-Down: 5
Description: The user strikes out at the opponent for 4 strikes at 20m/s. This technique can paralyze. Each strike paralyzes a limb of the body; the arms, the legs, or the body itself. This paralyzing lasts for 3 posts.

Name: Raging Current (River Styx Style)
Tier: B
Cost: 30 Stamina
Weapon Type: Body
Class: Offensive
Range: Close
Duration: Instant
Cool-Down: 5
Description: The user moves forward at a burst of speed at up to 20m/s up to 30 meters away, with their attack coming up shortly after they reach their target. The user does two C tier strikes with any combination of their feet, knees, elbows or fists to the opponent.

Name: Tranquil Strike (River Styx Style)
Tier: C
Cost: 20 Stamina
Weapon Type: Body
Class: Offensive
Range: Close
Duration: Instant
Cool-Down: 3 posts
Description: The user's body is calm, projecting no intent to attack. The attack moves at 15 m/s, through either their feet, knees, elbows or fists. If the strike lands, it deals C-tier damage to the opponent.

Name: Fish Swims Upstream (River Styx Style)
Tier: C
Cost: 20 Stamina
Weapon Type: Body
Class: Defensive/Supplementary
Range: Close
Duration: Instant
Cool-Down: 3 posts
Description: The user parries a strike that was made against them at a rate of 15m/s with either their feet or fists. An attack blocked in this manner allows the user to 'swim past the opponent's flow' on the outside of the attack while utilizing fluid footwork, placing the user behind or past the opponent at a speed of 15m/s and up to 20 meters away.


Name: Water Corrosion (River Styx Style)
Tier: C
Cost: 20/10 sustain Stamina
Weapon Type: Body
Class: Offensive
Range: Close
Duration: 2 posts
Cool-Down: 3 posts
Description: The user sends out a flurry of up to 10 D-tier blows at a speed of 15m/s meant to cause bruises. This is delivered in the form of a barrage of strikes through any combination of their feet, knees, elbows or fists. Should all ten blows strike the same person/target it would cause C-tier damage.


Name: Water Falls in Reverse (River Styx Style)
Tier: C
Cost: 20 Stamina
Weapon Type: Body
Class: Supplementary
Range: 10 m or 20m
Duration: Instant
Cool-Down: 3 posts
Description: The user pushes off the ground with great strength, allowing him to jump up to 10 meters in an omnidirectional trajectory at 15m/s. Should the user manage to find a foot hold on something, such as a wall, they would be able to repeat this movement one more time.


Name: Pond Reflects (River Styx Style)
Tier: D
Cost: 10 Stamina
Weapon Type: Body
Class: Defensive
Range: Close
Duration: Instant
Cool-Down: 2 posts
Description: A simple block performed with either the user's feet, knees, elbows or fists. The defense moves at a rate of 10m/s.

Name: Tranquil Parry (River Styx Style)
Tier: D
Cost: 10 Stamina
Weapon Type: Body
Class: Defensive
Range: Close
Duration: Instant
Cool-Down: 2 posts
Description: A simple block performed with either the user's feet, knees, elbows or fists. The defense moves at a rate of 10m/s.

Name: Pressurized Strike (River Styx Style)
Tier: D
Cost: 10 Stamina
Weapon Type: Body
Class: Offensive
Range: Close
Duration: Instant
Cool-Down: 2 posts
Description: The user attacks in a straight forward manner, shooting their attack in a thrust motion at 10 m/s utilizing their feet, knees, elbows or fists. This strike deals D tier damage if it hits the opponent.

Weapon Types
-You can't have abilities that can be used with numerous weapon types. Pick one.

Range
-"Close" is all you need to put for it to be assumed that the range of the weapon itself is what's relevant. No need to redundantly state that over and over again.

Redirecting blows
-You can only use this to defend against attacks. No redirecting them into other people.

Striking the Magoi Meridians
-You can paralyze or help remove paralysis. One or the other but not both.
-The amount of paralysis you'd be able to relieve would only be up to B-tier's worth.

Raging Current
-It's not clear at all how you are actually attacking the opponent with this move.
-How far is this burst of movement carrying you?

Tranquil Strike
-Still not clear how you are attacking the opponent. I think this pattern is stemming from your choice to make these attacks interchangeable between weapons which makes their wording more vague by nature.

Fish Swims Upstream
-This would be a Defensive/Supplementary ability

Water Corrosion
-I spit on your flavor text. Peoples fists don't move like a river flowing past a rock. Be less vague with what you are ACTUALLY doing which seems to be a barrage of punching.

Water Falls in Reverse
-If you are adding a second step as part of this ability then then total distance covered with a single step needs to be cut in half.

Pond Reflects
-Should be Defensive/Supplementary which is probably going to be nerfed now with the way you are abusing it.
-How far/fast is the side step? The defensive is 10m/s but the side step isn't part of the "defense" action and is supplementary.

Tranquil Parry
-No using your abilities to inflict surprise upon someone. Do that in rp but it shouldn't be part of the ability description unless you are using magic and planting a suggestion in someones mind.

Alright, I got a bit carried away. Can't be helped.   


So I made some edits, got rid of a lot of the flavor text to make it more mechanics wise. I've been rping the whole thing for over 12k words, so I kind of got stuck in that groove, but it's fixed now. Everything there is mechanically how I want it to be.  


Quick question on one technique before I edit it, though. Water Falls in Reverse is a C tier technique, which has a range of 20 meters. I had split it into two 10 meter jumps, but am I looking at the wrong numbers? Just a bit confused by that one.

Look out, new hero coming through. Got that gangsta street cred.
  

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I had the wrong numbers for the waterfall move, not you   

Damn your singular training of only one ability!

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[b]Name:[/b] Tranquil Strike (River Styx Style)
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Body
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Duration:[/b] Instant
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 posts
[b]Description:[/b] The user's body is calm, projecting no intent to attack. The attack moves at 15 m/s, through either their feet, knees, elbows or fists. If the strike lands, it deals C-tier damage to the opponent.

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[b]Name:[/b] Redirecting blows (River Styx Style)
[b]Tier:[/b]  B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30/15 sustained Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Body
[b]Class:[/b] Defensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Duration:[/b] 3 posts
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 posts
[b]Description:[/b] The user enters a serene state of mind, taking note of the direction and speed the opponent's attack is moving. Moving at 20m/s , the user redirects the trajectory of up to 15 attacks that add up to A tier damage with any combination of their feet, knees, elbows or fists.

[b]Name:[/b] Fish Swims Upstream (River Styx Style)
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Body
[b]Class:[/b] Defensive/Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Duration:[/b] Instant
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 posts
[b]Description:[/b] The user parries a strike that was made against them at a rate of 15m/s with either their feet or fists. An attack blocked in this manner allows the user to 'swim past the opponent's flow' on the outside of the attack while utilizing fluid footwork, placing the user behind or past the opponent at a speed of 15m/s and up to 20 meters away.


[b]Name:[/b] Water Corrosion (River Styx Style)
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20/10 sustain Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Body
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Duration:[/b] 2 posts
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 posts
[b]Description:[/b] The user sends out a flurry of up to 10 D-tier blows at a speed of 15m/s meant to cause bruises. This is delivered in the form of a barrage of strikes through any combination of their feet, knees, elbows or fists. Should all ten blows strike the same person/target it would cause C-tier damage.

[b]Name:[/b] Pond Reflects (River Styx Style)
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Body
[b]Class:[/b] Defensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Duration:[/b] Instant
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts
[b]Description:[/b] A simple block performed with either the user's feet, knees, elbows or fists. The defense moves at a rate of 10m/s.

[b]Name:[/b] Tranquil Parry (River Styx Style)
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Body
[b]Class:[/b] Defensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Duration:[/b] Instant
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts
[b]Description:[/b] A simple block performed with either the user's feet, knees, elbows or fists. The defense moves at a rate of 10m/s.

[b]Name:[/b] Pressurized Strike (River Styx Style)
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Body
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Duration:[/b] Instant
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts
[b]Description:[/b] The user attacks in a straight forward manner, shooting their attack in a thrust motion at 10 m/s utilizing their feet, knees, elbows or fists. This strike deals D tier damage if it hits the opponent.

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[b]Name:[/b] Raging Current (River Styx Style)
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Body
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Duration:[/b] Instant
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5
[b]Description:[/b] The user moves forward at a burst of speed at up to 20m/s up to 30 meters away, with their attack coming up shortly after they reach their target. The user does two C tier strikes with any combination of their feet, knees, elbows or fists to the opponent.

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[b]Name:[/b] Sealing the Magoi Meridians (River Styx Style)
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Body
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close (Within striking distance)
[b]Duration:[/b] Instant
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5
[b]Description:[/b] The user strikes out at the opponent for 4 strikes at 20m/s. This technique can paralyze. Each strike paralyzes a limb of the body; the arms, the legs, or the body itself. This paralyzing lasts for 3 posts.

[b]Name:[/b] Water Falls in Reverse (River Styx Style)
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Body
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] 10 m or 20m
[b]Duration:[/b] Instant
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 posts
[b]Description:[/b] The user pushes off the ground with great strength, allowing him to jump up to 10 meters in an omnidirectional trajectory at 15m/s. Should the user manage to find a foot hold on something, such as a wall, they would be able to repeat this movement one more time.