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1Cadis Delacroix Di Raizel Empty Cadis Delacroix Di Raizel 05/07/14, 12:28 am

Raizel

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Name: Cadis Delacroix Di Raizel
Tier: D
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Age + Birthdate: 18 years old, January 19
Nationality: Wanderer
Race: Human
Specialization: Strength

Personality:  Rai is an intelligent person who is very calm, and sophisticated.When Rai is out with everyone, he acts as a sociable, likeable, and often easy going person. He would also pretend to show that he has lots of weak points and openings. However, in reality, this is a mask to hide his true nature. He would pretend to lower his defense to make others underestimate him. While he might act as a care-free person, he is however already plotting 3 steps ahead with 3 different actions.

In battle, Rai is very cold and tactical. He is prepared to sacrifice anyone, the innocents or the wicked, to achieve his goal. He believes that he would sacrifice anything for the greater good. Like he says, "One life for the life of many". In battle, Rai would show no mercy to his opponents. He prefers fighting stealthily rather than going all brash and abrupt, head-to-head, battle. He rather plans from the backline rather than going to the frontlines.

Although he uses his mind more than actions, he has the skills to back up his plans. When he fights a head on battle, he can use his mind to tactically plan ahead or try to predict the enemy's move. He would try to play with his opponent's mind by baiting them to perform a certain action by showing them an opening.

Although he appears to have many friends, Rai doesn't trust any of them. In fact, he trusts no one. He merely think of them as pawns; they're there just to help him achieve a higher goal. He believes trust, friendship and emotions would just hold him back. Therefore, he tries his best to remove all his emotions front his heart, and use them only as a mask.

Likes: Something that Raizel really love are sweet stuff, especially Ice-cream. When he was first freed from the lab he was abducted in, the first shinobi to comfort him gave him this ice-cream. The shinobi then said to drown his sadness in the ice-cream's sweetness. Another thing he likes to drink is Tea. Drinking tea is very soothing and calming, helping cool down or release stress when it is required.

Some activities that Raizel love doing are playing Chess and training. These activities help him improve and grow, which helps him in his future battles. Chess teaches him positioning is important, and abusing an allies' forte and enemy's weakness wins game. Sometimes when he's alone, Raizel would just sit and stare at the Cherry Blossom, since it helps him calm down and drown aaway his problems.

Dislikes: Out of everything out there in the world, bullies and hypocrites are people whom are hated by Raizel the most.  Between those two, Raizel hates Hypocrites the most. Those type were the ones that gave him false hope, and shattered it in the end. He hate bullies too, people that abuses the weak and tortures them, acting as if they're strong.

Some animals that are disliked by Raizel are snakes and cats. Cats tend to hate him, too. He's been scratched by every cat he sees, and that caused his hate for them. Plus, he's disgusted by how they regurgitate hairballs.

Phobias: One of his greatest fear is to die. Dying would mean it is the end of his legacy. He would be afraid of an unexpected death. He wants a long life, so that he has more time to fulfill his goals. Dying young and unexpectedly would mean he wouldn't be able to have fulfilled his dream. However, that isn't the only reason he fears death. Another reason is because of the pain, and not knowing what will happen after that. True, the pain might be swift, but he isn't prepared to die. What if heaven and hell was actually real? What if all those ninja cults are real? That would mean that he would have an express ticket to hell.
Another fear he has is losing his loved ones. Losing his parents hurt him so much, and it made him swore he would not allow anymore deaths around him. Losing the people he love would make him grief, or lose himself and seek for vengeance. He doesn't want any of those. All he want is to be is a happy go lucky person forever.

Aspirations: Raizel has only one motivation, and that is, to become a strong person. He wants to be capable of protecting anyone that he cares for, and he doesn't want to lose his loved ones just because he is too weak to protect them. He had lost many of his loved ones and friends, especially his parents, because of his weakness. He had to see them die, since he was too weak to defend and protect them. That day when they died, Raizel swore to become a strong ninja, one that can protect anyone that he wishes, one that will protect the weak.


Face-Claim: Cadis Etrama Di Raizel, From Noblesse
Weight: 60 kg
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Red
Height: 6 feet
Rukh Alignment: White rukh
Special Traits: Nope
Appearance: Raizel stands at an average height of approximately 6 feet tall, and weighs a healthy 68 kilograms. Although Raizel has maintained a lean physique, his muscles are naturally compact which gives him a thinner appearance than most while still allowing him to retain his physical strength and endurance. He keeps his black hair at a moderately short length, usually allowing some to cover his dreary eyes. Raizel's skin is very fair. His face is notably void of fat and his defined jawline is somewhere between average and slender. A small portion of his upper torso is scarred with minor burn and cut wounds, though they had faded over the years and aren't as easily visible. Raizel wears a default stoic expression with furrowed eyebrows that typically display his indifferent personality.


History: "Ah, just a little bit more...", said the doctor while holding a lamp "Ah, here we go! It's a baby boy! Seems pretty healthy to me!".  A man in his twenties then gently took the baby from the doctor and said, "Mia, look! He's got your eyes and ears! I think he got his nose from me! Isn't he adorable?" The doctor then bid farewell and left. The man then passed the baby to the lady. The lady then stared lovingly at the baby while he stares back at her."So, what should we call you? Honey, let's call him "Raizel, Cadis Delacroix Di Raizel, !” , said the lady. The man then took the baby from the lady and said, “It's been decided! From this day onwards, you will be called Raizel!". From that day onwards, Delacroix Di Frankenstein, Raizel's father , and his mother, Mia Cadis, raised him up into a healthy, intelligent and strong shinobi. His father, who was a royal guard in Balbadd, taught him lots of things about the royal fighting styles and things that will help him out in his future.  As a child, he spends his days by climbing trees, running around, reading books, and playing with his friends. Of course, as the son of the royal guards, he trained and drilled through the etiquettes and elegance of a noble. He was raised to be cold, but his heart was always open for his parents. Every evening, he would wait at his house porch for his dad to return from his missions. His dad would bring back a bar of chocolate for him and then they would take a walk around the forest, and they would chat while walking. Raizel loved his dad above everything in the whole world.

When he was of age, Raizel was sent to the royal sword arts academy. Since he was the son of a noble, his entrance into the academy was easy. There, he was trained in the arts of the royal swordplay, where he was taught that dexterity and speed is important. The trainings were tough, but it was good. They practiced using real swords, and every fight and spar in the academy would bear scars, as reminder to them that they are still in need of improvement. This rigorous trainings are what made Raizel the skilled fighter he currently is.

As the years passed, Raizel grew in skill and strength. Soon, he was the top swordsman in his school, and was a prospect candidate to join the royal guards. This made him kinda proud and obnoxious. He became conceited, and stopped practicing, since he thinks he's the best. However, this view and thought of his soon disappeared when he turned 17. He passed the entrance test to the royal guard with flying colors. As a celebration, his dad decided to bring the whole family to a vacation. Little did he know, this wouldn't be a great celebration for Raizel.

On the journey to the Zou empire, they were ambushed by some people. In the reports, they were identified as bandits. However, till this day, Raizel believe that these people aren't just bandits; they were assassins that were after his father. These people were very skilled. In fact, they were too organized to be bandits. These people were too skilled for Raizel. Raizel have been trained to fight against other people who uses the royal sword style too. He never had any experience fighting against people of another style. He lacked experience, and adaptability. His father, however, was able to hold him off. His mother was killed in an instance. As a last resort, his father, who wanted Raizel to be safe, used magic. This spell made him a living bomb, and he took the lives of the bandit with him.

The explosion made Raizel unconscious, and the next thin he knew, he was back in Balbadd, in the hospital. Knowing his weakness, Raizel resigned as a Royal Guard, and exiled himself from Balbadd, only to return once he gets better.

Role-Play Sample: After asking the girl the question, Lelouch waited and looked at her. She then turned, as her green hair fluttered, revealing her beautiful face. The way she spun together with such a pretty face, with a splash of the sun's view in the background made her looks even mesmerizing. Lelouch wasn't impressed by her beauty; through his eternal life, he's seen much more prettier girls out there. But this girl, she had the face of someone he knows, someone he held dear to his heart. She resembled his mother, who is one of the prettiest woman is his life. Trying to shrug the thought off, he looked and analyzed the girl.

Suddenly, as the girl gracefully turned, her expression changed into a shocked one. He was curious, since her eyes clearly showed her emotions; it was apparent that she was shocked. It's true that Lelouch's clothings would attract people's eyes, but no one had ever acted so surprise to see him. She had already known about his presence. Well, there was two things that would surprise her; his face, meaning she has seen him before, but Lelouch never remembered seeing her. Well, he might have forgotten, since living so long, he tend to forget people's faces and names. The second thing that might surprise them is his appearance. I mean, anyone might be surprise seeing him, since his clothings aren't of this era, plus, he has a huge tattoo on his-Wait....tattoo? Lelouch then touched his forehead, and he remembered it. She might be surprise because of his clothings, or something else. "Why are you acting so surprise? First time seeing a guy?" Asked Lelouch, as he placed on a confused face. He wanted answers, and he wants them now.

He then listens as she explains that she is supposedly older than she look. This increased his suspicious about her. It's a habit of Lelouch to doubt people, and it was doing its thing now. As she explained about her reason for being there, Lelouch then smiled, answering, "Oh please, I know girls love hiding their age, but you're taking it too far. Shouldn't you be proud that you look young, shouldn't you take it as a compliment? Well, I come here every morning for the view too. However, your beauty shines brighter than the sun; the view is nothing compared to your beauty."

As The girl asked about his rank, his attention was caught by the words "old home village". She was wearing a Suna headband around her neck, yet she claims to be an ex-Kirigakure member? Surely she isn't a missing nin? Hearing this, Lelouch answered, "What do you mean old home village? I'm pretty sure there isn't such a rule that permits transfer of village. Even if something like this exist, I should at least be informed. Are you a missing nin? You have 5 seconds to answer me, or find out my rank through my next attack."

Of course, Lelouch knew he couldn't attack. He was just saying this for a quick answer. He knew through his perfect arrangement of words, it would cause some ninja to immediately answer. But Lelouch doesn't know if it will work. All he have to do is wait for her next move. Similar to chess, you have to wait for your opponent to make a move. You can make a move when it's their turn. All you can do is to think and prepare for what is coming ahead.



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2Cadis Delacroix Di Raizel Empty Re: Cadis Delacroix Di Raizel 05/07/14, 07:29 am

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3Cadis Delacroix Di Raizel Empty Re: Cadis Delacroix Di Raizel 05/07/14, 12:49 pm

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There are a couple small edits needed before this can be approved:
-Your character should have a different name from their face claim. Tribute character's are fine but plagiarism is frowned upon so copy and pasting things is generally a no go.

-Part of your history is from another forum. What tipped me off was one of the names "Yoshi" which had been missed during editing. While there aren't rules against using your own stuff from other forums, we need you to show some kind of proof that you are the original owner of the text you copied. Once again this is for the same plagiarism rules.

-In various parts of your app you strongly imply that your character's parents are dead. But there is no mention of this event in his history.

-The only two countries open for rping right now are Reim and Heliohapt. While you can still be from Balbadd, please think of a reason for your character to be heading to one of those two countries and add that into your history as well.


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4Cadis Delacroix Di Raizel Empty Re: Cadis Delacroix Di Raizel 06/07/14, 01:33 am

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5Cadis Delacroix Di Raizel Empty Re: Cadis Delacroix Di Raizel 06/07/14, 02:14 am

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