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1New skill set:Undead Ghost Empty New skill set:Undead Ghost 26/08/22, 12:40 pm

Ghost

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Right Hand Of Hades:Ghost
Tier: A
Class: Magician
Type: Supplementary
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: Animation Magic +Life Magic. The user will cast this spell via his wand. By drawing a  zig-zag line which will cause a Green light to create an orb to appear. Once the target is hit by this Orb the spell will take effect./The target must be considered an undead or no longer lives for this spell to work.
Scaling: Range
Sustain: N/A
Cool Down: 4
Cost: 40/20
Description:
Using his Animation Magic + Life magic in combination the user will aim at a target lifeless body or undead. By doing such a thing the user will be able to absorb the memories of the said individuals. This is done by grabbing the rukh from the departing person via the orb. With Animation and Life magic manipulate the individual's rukh allowing Ghost to understand their collective knowledge. It does not matter how long the said being body has been decreased. The user must use the spell within 5 posts of the corpse being created.









Left Hand Of Hades:Ghost
Tier: A
Class: Magician
Type: offensive
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Animation Magic + The target must be a corpse or skeleton. Waving his wand will allow an orb of green light to appear.
Scaling: Duration
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 4
Cost: 40/20
Description:
    Using his Wand/Stave the user will cast his animation to revive a corpse or Skelton up to A tier by hitting the target with the ORB. The said undead will follow Ghost every order. It will not retain all memories of its past life but skills and muscle memories will come into effect. The corpse will infact become a mindless zombie if said time pasts. However, the user can set a pre-set personality upon the said corpse. The user must use the spell within 5 posts of the corpse being created for the personality to be bestowed upon it. Being a revival spell of high tier allows the risen to move 50 meters away from Ghost at any time.



Last edited by Ghost on 31/08/22, 11:07 pm; edited 6 times in total

2New skill set:Undead Ghost Empty Re: New skill set:Undead Ghost 26/08/22, 11:40 pm

Zion

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Right Hand:
-Requirements needs to actually be filled out. Just saying a magic type doesn't tell us what you need to do in order to complete the spell or what sort of restrictions there are on your ability to cast it. Things such as making physical contact with the target of your spell using the right hand to cover the how. Things like the corpse needing to be relatively fresh for the memories to be fully intact as an example of a restriction.
-You need a scaling type. Range or amount would be fitting imo.

Left Hand:
-Same with right hand on requirements/drawbacks section. Needs to be filled out with actual requirements you need to meet beyond simply having the right magic type.
-What does revival if defeated mean for scaling? As this is not a standard scaling type it needs to actually be explained what sort of benefit each scaling gives.
-For the description, how far away can the target corpse be? How far from you can it go and still maintain the spell? What does the spell look like when you fire it out?

3New skill set:Undead Ghost Empty Re: New skill set:Undead Ghost 27/08/22, 01:59 am

Ghost

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Alright phase 2 ready

4New skill set:Undead Ghost Empty Re: New skill set:Undead Ghost 31/08/22, 09:22 pm

Zion

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After discussion with staff we determined that you won't be able to recall the memories of a corpse older than 5 posts without the use of clairvoyance or reincarnation magics. Using the spell after that will either make a near mindless zombie or will require you to have a pre-set personality you impose onto the corpse. Either way, in such a state they would not retain memories or past skills beyond muscle memory/instinct. This will let you use you animation spells in a fight without much difference, but limits you from doing plot shenanigan's like digging up country ruler's graves and getting state secrets or even a djinn user puppet.

5New skill set:Undead Ghost Empty Re: New skill set:Undead Ghost 31/08/22, 10:43 pm

Ghost

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Ok all set

6New skill set:Undead Ghost Empty Re: New skill set:Undead Ghost 31/08/22, 11:18 pm

Zion

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1/2 Approved with minor edits:

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[center][b]Right Hand Of Hades:Ghost[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] A
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Animation Magic +Life Magic. The user will cast this spell via his wand. By drawing a  zig-zag line which will cause a Green light to create an orb to appear. Once the target is hit by this Orb the spell will take effect./The target must be considered an undead or no longer lives for this spell to work.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Range
[b]Sustain:[/b] N/A
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 4
[b]Cost:[/b] 40/20
[b]Description:[/b]
Using his Animation Magic + Life magic in combination the user will aim at a target lifeless body or undead. By doing such a thing the user will be able to absorb the memories of the said individuals. This is done by grabbing the rukh from the departing person via the orb. With Animation and Life magic manipulate the individual's rukh allowing Ghost to understand their collective knowledge. The user must use the spell within 5 posts of the target becoming deceased.









[center][b]Left Hand Of Hades:Ghost[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] A
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Animation Magic + The target must be a corpse or skeleton. Waving his wand will allow an orb of green light to appear.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Duration
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 4
[b]Cost:[/b] 40/20
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]Using his Wand/Stave the user will cast his animation to revive a corpse or Skelton up to A tier by hitting the target with the ORB. The said undead will retain their memories and skills had in life as long as this spell affects them within 5 posts of becoming a corpse. After 5 posts, this spell will animate them into a relatively mindless zombie that will follow Ghost's verbal commands OR it can be given a personality predetermined by Ghost. Undead created after the 5 post limit also do no retain memories or skills, keeping only the muscle memory of the past life. Being a revival spell of high tier allows the risen to move 50 meters away from Ghost at any time. Animated targets last 4 posts before returning to lifeless corpses. [/list]

7New skill set:Undead Ghost Empty Re: New skill set:Undead Ghost 01/09/22, 11:17 pm

Merrze

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2/2 Approved edits, these look acceptable to with the balances applied.

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