Ayero's Abilities (3)

Name: Lance Uppercut
Tier: D
Cost: 10 Stamina
Weapon Type: N/A
Class: Offensive
Range: Close
Duration: 1 post
Cool-Down: 2 posts
Description: The user thrusts their fist at the target’s jaw in an uppercut motion at 10 m/s. The user turns their arm and slams their elbow into the opponent’s cheekbone, dealing D-tier damage.

Note: This is a starting ability as I only had four initially.

Name: Blade Redirection
Tier: C
Cost: 20 Stamina
Weapon Type: Talwar
Class: Offensive
Range: Close
Duration: 1 post
Cool-Down: 3 posts
Description: The user outstretches their sword to the side, parallel as if to strike while approaching the target. Once they are roughly half a meter from their opponent, the user suddenly lowers their sword to their side and performs a half turn around their opponent at 15 m/s, slashing them from behind. This attack relies on redirecting an opponent’s focus to the user’s weapon rather than their body.

Name: Kō Kuikku-Mahi
Tier: C
Cost: 20 stamina
Weapon Type: N/A
Class: Supplementary
Range: Close
Duration: 1 post
Cool-Down: 3 posts
Description: The user jams their elbow or knee into an opponent’s pressure point (juncture between the pointer finger and thumb, inner elbow, back of knee etc.) at 15 m/s, effectively paralyzing up to two limbs for up to three posts.

Name: Devil’s Graze
Tier: B
Cost: 30 Stamina
Weapon Type: Talwar
Class: Offensive
Range: Close
Duration: 1 post
Cool-Down: 5 posts
Description: The user approaches their opponent head on with their sword drawn before feinting to the side. The user then digs their blade into the opponent’s shoulder while twisting around the opponent, dragging the blade as they go at 20 m/s. This technique cuts completely through the muscle, creating a spiral-like cut around the opponent’s body.

Lance Uppercut
-Add movement speed and damage please

Blade Redirection

Once they are roughly half a meter from their opponent, the user suddenly drops their sword and presses it low to their body while performing a half turn around their opponent and slashing them from behind.

-Could you please reword this? I understand where you turn around the opponent. But the dropping of your sword and specifically the "pressing" it low to your body is where I get confused.
-I suggest omitting the charge since you run that speed anyways as a fanalis. Instead, make your speed be focused on the execution of the attack itself rather than the movements leading up to it.

Kuikku-Mahi II
-You don't HAVE to...but please come up with another name that isn't just #2 of my other attack. Like add a word or adjective. For example: Cho Kuikku Mahi

Devil’s Graze
-Same suggestions about charging as above.
-I feel I should give you fair warning that this will be incredibly hard to execute with all the speed of your ability focused on the charge rather than the attack itself. Since it's only allowed to be a burst of speed that charge will only do you so much good. Once you actually reach the opponent and begin circling them you'd be much slower and easier to counter.

Edited. Added speed & damage to upper cut, changed the name of Kuikku-Mahi.

Used your suggestions for Blade Redirection to try and make the mechanics clearer. Did the same for Devil's Graze, focusing the speed on the attack itself rather than the charge.

Thanks for being co-operative~ Approved for training

Trained:
Ko Kuikku-Mahi
Blade Redirection
Devil's Graze

Approved

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[b]Name:[/b] Blade Redirection
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Talwar
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Duration:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 posts
[b]Description:[/b] The user outstretches their sword to the side, parallel as if to strike while approaching the target. Once they are roughly half a meter from their opponent, the user suddenly lowers their sword to their side and performs a half turn around their opponent at 15 m/s, slashing them from behind. This attack relies on redirecting an opponent’s focus to the user’s weapon rather than their body.

[b]Name:[/b] Kō Kuikku-Mahi
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] N/A
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Duration:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 posts
[b]Description:[/b] The user jams their elbow or knee into an opponent’s pressure point (juncture between the pointer finger and thumb, inner elbow, back of knee etc.) at 15 m/s, effectively paralyzing up to two limbs for up to three posts.

[b]Name:[/b] Devil’s Graze
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Talwar
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Duration:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 posts
[b]Description:[/b] The user approaches their opponent head on with their sword drawn before feinting to the side. The user then digs their blade into the opponent’s shoulder while twisting around the opponent, dragging the blade as they go at 20 m/s. This technique cuts completely through the muscle, creating a spiral-like cut around the opponent’s body.