Xen Li Ren's Abilities

Name: Yìjì de zhǐjiǎ (Geisha's Nails)
Tier: C
Cost: 20 Magoi|10 Sustain
Element: Strength
Class: Offensive
Range: 20m
Cool-Down: 3 Posts or Sustained+1
Description:
Speed: 20m/s
Scale:10cm
Damage: D-Rank
Projectiles: Two
Flavor:
With a swing of her staff, Xen Li can use her magical prowess in order to create puncturing projectiles that fly quickly off of the tip of her staff, puncturing and piercing her opponents.

Name: Qiánglì kòu shā (Strong Smash)
Tier: D
Cost: 10 Magoi|5 Magoi Sustain
Element: Strength
Class: Offensive
Range: Melee Weapon
Cool-Down: 2 Posts or Sustained+1
Description:
Speed: 10m/s
Scale:0.3m
Damage: D-Rank
Flavor:
Generating Rukh of strength to the tip of her staff(usually by holding it towards the middle or bottom), and swinging it in order to deal a powerful physical blow.

Name: Qiángdà de fēiyuè (Powerful Leap)
Tier: D
Cost: 10 Magoi|5 Magoi Sustain
Element: Strength
Class: Support
Range: N/A
Cool-Down: 2 Posts or Sustained+1
Description:
Speed: 10m/s
Scale: 5m
Flavor:
By using this ability, Xen Li coats her feet with strength magic, which she uses in order to propel herself into the air, allowing her to jump higher than normal.

Name: Zhèn bào (Shock Burst)
Tier: D
Cost: 10 Magoi|5 Magoi Sustain
Element: Strength
Class: Offensive
Range: 10m
Cool-Down: 2 Posts or Sustained+1
Description:
Speed: 10m/s
Scale:0.5m
Damage: D-Rank
Flavor:
This magic allows Xen Li to either charge or fire a single shot of intense energy that is used in order to destroy or damage objects or people. This power is decently strong, and capable of dealing blunt-trauma force damage.

Name: Yìjì de chùmō (Geisha's Touch)
Tier: D
Cost: 10 Magoi|5 Magoi Sustain
Element: Strength
Class: Social
Range: 10m
Cool-Down: 2 turns or Sustained+1
Description: Utilizing a light push and touch, this ability allows Xen Li to make objects a decent distance away to be pushed or moved over a small distance, provided that there is no resistance. This requires little movement on the part of Xen Li, and is used to create distractions of different kinds, or to help steal objects from a distance away. It can only provide light pushes and pulls, and cannot hold objects.

Ah, a fellow strength magician's spellbook! First, a few notes before I break down the individual spells.

Costs should always be in the "X Magoi/ Y Magoi" form, even if you don't plan on sustaining.

Also cooldowns for D-tier abilities should read "2 posts or sustained +1", while C-Tier should be "3 posts or sustained +1". This is because the cooldown should be one post longer than it is sustained. Abilities higher than C-Tier won't need the "or sustain" because they won't ever be able to be sustained long enough. It also should be noted that the length of time an ability can be sustained is dependent on the Tier of the character's spec. There is a helpful chart in the ability guidelines(here).

Lastly, we do use the metric system here, so the range for D-tier abilities would be 10 meters, while C-Tier abilities are 20 meters. It does take a bit of time to get used to, but roughly 3 feet are in one meter.

Chōngjí dùn (Impact Shield): Intelligence doesn't get access to defensive abilities, since they have the Borg which acts as an automatic defense(More on this can be found in the Specialization System Page). You can, however, still clash with an ability, but it doesn't get the One-Tier boost that defensive abilities get(Clashing rules can be found in the Ability Guidelines page).

Qiánglì kòu shā (Strong Smash): Missing ability speed, range, scale and damage in the description. I would suggest wording it along the lines of:

Description: The caster creates a and sends it towards a target at 10 m/s within ten meters of the caster, dealing D-Tier damage.

As a further example, here is an ability of mine that is similar to what you are going for:

Description: The caster creates a thin sheet of force up to 5x5 meters(1 cm thick) within five meters of the caster. The Force Wall can travel within a ten meter range at ten meters per second to deal D-Tier blunt damage.

The rest of the abilities should keep everything above in mind. As for the final ability, Social abilities don't need to be approved since they can't be used in combat. They do, in most cases, have to follow the ability guidelines. I would suggest to instead replace that ability with a C-Tier. It' is up to you, though.

Make these edits in your original post and bump when you are done. Nearly there~

Bumpitty Dump.

None of these abilities are following the template, lol. Since it looks like you have everything in there, though, I'll edit them up so they are appropriately displayed.


Your last ability, Geisha's Touch, is kind of self-nerfed. If you wanted to, you could remove the last sentence there.

Anyways, if the abilities below are good, they're approved~

Code:

[b]Name:[/b] Yìjì de zhǐjiǎ (Geisha's Nails)
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Magoi|10 Sustain
[b]Element:[/b] Strength
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 20m
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 Posts or Sustained+1
[b]Description:[/b]
With a swing of her staff, Xen Li can use her magical prowess in order to create two 10 cm diameter projectiles, which fly off the tip of her staff at 15m/s, puncturing and piercing her opponents for D-Tier damage each.

[b]Name:[/b] Qiánglì kòu shā (Strong Smash)
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi|5 Magoi Sustain
[b]Element:[/b] Strength
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 Posts or Sustained+1
[b]Description:[/b]
Generating Rukh of strength to the tip of her staff(usually by holding it towards the middle or bottom), and swings the staff at 10m/s in order to deal D-Tier damage.

[b]Name:[/b] Qiángdà de fēiyuè (Powerful Leap)
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi|5 Magoi Sustain
[b]Element:[/b] Strength
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 Posts or Sustained+1
[b]Description:[/b]
By using this ability, Xen Li coats her feet with strength magic, which she uses in order to propel herself into the air. This allows her to jump up to 5 meters of distance at 10 m/s.

[b]Name:[/b] Zhèn bào (Shock Burst)
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi|5 Magoi Sustain
[b]Element:[/b] Strength
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 10m
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 Posts or Sustained+1
[b]Description:[/b]
This magic allows Xen Li to either charge or fire a single .5m shot of intense energy at 10 m/s that is used to deal D-Tier blunt trauma damage.

[b]Name:[/b] Yìjì de chùmō (Geisha's Touch)
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi|5 Magoi Sustain
[b]Element:[/b] Strength
[b]Class:[/b] Social
[b]Range:[/b] 10m
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 turns or Sustained+1
[b]Description:[/b] Utilizing a light push and touch, this ability allows Xen Li to push or move objects from up to 10 meters away over a distance of up to 5 meters at up to 10 m/s. It can only provide light pushes and pulls, and cannot hold objects.

I'm fine with that, and already added them to the vault. Thanks Garret.