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Yushin's First B-Tier Abilities

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1Yushin's First B-Tier Abilities Empty Yushin's First B-Tier Abilities on 11/02/18, 05:08 am

Yushin

Yushin
β-Tier
β-Tier
Deft Parry
Tier: B
Class: Warrior
Type: Defensive
Range: Close/Short
Requirements/Drawbacks: The user must be wielding a sword with both feet planted to the ground.
Scaling: Hits; doubled per sustain
Sustain: -
Cool Down: 3
Cost: 30 Stamina
Description:

    The user lifts their sword as a reaction to an incoming attack and deftly parries the attack away. Parries 1 B-Tier, 2 C-Tier, and 4 D-Tier attacks.


Control Flow
Tier: B-Tier
Class: Warrior
Type: Defensive/Supplementary
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: User must allow himself to be extremely close with the assailant with his feet firmly grounded.
Scaling: Hits; Double the attacks defended
Sustain: -
Cool Down: 3
Cost: 30 Stamina
Description:

    The user allows an opponent to close distance between he and himself. In doing so, the user takes full advantage of the opponent's momentum and redirects it to make the assailant go prone onto the floor. This can be by sidestepping and then pushing the assailant to the floor, or actively grabbing them with a free hand and locking them to the floor. Able to deter up to a C-Tier attack.


Rain Drop
Tier: B
Class: Warrior
Type: Offensive
Range: Close-Short
Requirements/Drawbacks: The target must be within reach of the user's blade; the user may have to rush to succeed the attack.
Scaling: Damage
Sustain: -
Cool Down: 3
Cost: 30 Stamina
Description:

    The user takes their sword and swipes down in a diagonal manner to resemble a droplet of water falling down from a window. The user imparts B-Tier damage.


Back Slash
Tier: B-Tier
Class: Warrior
Type: Offensive
Range: Close-Short
Requirements/Drawbacks: The user must be facing away from the target; it does not matter if he is grounded or jumping.
Scaling: Damage
Sustain: -
Cool Down: 3
Cost: 30 Stamina
Description:

    The user, while facing away from the target deceives the target by making a motion to appear to be slashing in front of him. As they prepare to slash forward, the user swings the blade around to have it slash backward while they are facing away from the target and imparts B-tier damage/


Sword Shower
Tier: Warrior
Class: Warrior
Type: Offensive
Range: Close-Short
Requirements/Drawbacks: The user must be constantly in motion while he attacks his target with a sword ready in hand.
Scaling: Hits
Sustain: -
Cool Down:3
Cost: 30 Stamina
Description:

    The user calculatingly rushes his target slashes his sword 8 times, each clash imparting D-Tier damage to the target. By using his instincts and also by careful observation, the user attempts to slash wherever he sees an opening, or needs to cover his basis if he is surrounded by delivering two consecutive diagonal slashes,  two vertical slashes, a horizontal slash, two more diagonal slashes, and then a final horizontal slash.



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2Yushin's First B-Tier Abilities Empty Re: Yushin's First B-Tier Abilities on 11/02/18, 03:42 pm

Merrze

Merrze
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A-Tier
Deft Parry: Defensive abilities can only redirect or block abilities equal to their tier.

Control Flow: Needs more for the requirements/restrictions. Something like your character needs to be on solid ground or have solid footing. And for the ability if you're actually redirecting damage in any form you need to include the tier of damage in which you are. If you're just moving out of the way to knock someone over the ability would stay supplementary.

Raindrop: It seems the ability is just a diagonal slash, so it would only be an offensive ability.

Backslash: How exactly do you deceive them to think you're slashing in front of them, do you prepare to slash forward then bring your blades backwards. And if this is the case you should include in drawbacks that if someone interrupts the fake slash then it would stop the ability. If that's not the case could you please clarify what your character is doing to make it seem like they are going to slash forward, like to they prepare and then spin around to slash.

Sword Shower: You put warrior in the tier. Warrior abilities are normally supposed to be precise attacks detailing what you're doing. While the wording itself isn't bad just know your slashes can only be how the ability describes it, so it would be an assortment of different direction slashes or so on and you would have to describe where you are slashing when you do use it. Also with how this seems to work you could add or change in your drawbacks to say it only works while he is moving. Since as I read it it's an ability that requires you to move, so you can't persay rush towards someone, stop slash them a couple time then turn around and use the rest on a guy next to you.


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3Yushin's First B-Tier Abilities Empty Re: Yushin's First B-Tier Abilities on 11/02/18, 04:34 pm

Yushin

Yushin
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4Yushin's First B-Tier Abilities Empty Re: Yushin's First B-Tier Abilities on 13/02/18, 10:23 am

Merrze

Merrze
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A-Tier
Deft parry: It would be 1 B-tier 2 C-tier and 4 D-tier

Control Flow: If you're splitting this ability into def and sup you'll have to lower the damage you can redirect to C-tier


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5Yushin's First B-Tier Abilities Empty Re: Yushin's First B-Tier Abilities on 13/02/18, 05:45 pm

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6Yushin's First B-Tier Abilities Empty Re: Yushin's First B-Tier Abilities on 13/02/18, 06:37 pm

Merrze

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[center][b]Deft Parry[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Type:[/b] Defensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close/Short
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] The user must be wielding a sword with both feet planted to the ground.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Hits; doubled per sustain
[b]Sustain:[/b] -
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 3
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
The user lifts their sword as a reaction to an incoming attack and deftly parries the attack away. Parries 1 B-Tier, 2 C-Tier, and 4 D-Tier attacks.[/list]

[center][b]Control Flow[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] B-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Type:[/b] Defensive/Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] User must allow himself to be extremely close with the assailant with his feet firmly grounded.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Hits; Double the attacks defended
[b]Sustain:[/b] -
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 3
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
The user allows an opponent to close distance between he and himself. In doing so, the user takes full advantage of the opponent's momentum and redirects it to make the assailant go prone onto the floor. This can be by sidestepping and then pushing the assailant to the floor, or actively grabbing them with a free hand and locking them to the floor. Able to deter up to a C-Tier attack. [/list]

[center][b]Rain Drop[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close-Short
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] The target must be within reach of the user's blade; the user may have to rush to succeed the attack.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage
[b]Sustain:[/b] -
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 3
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
The user takes their sword and swipes down in a diagonal manner to resemble a droplet of water falling down from a window. The user imparts B-Tier damage.[/list]

[center][b]Back Slash[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] B-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close-Short
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] The user must be facing away from the target; it does not matter if he is grounded or jumping.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage
[b]Sustain:[/b] -
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 3
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
The user, while facing away from the target deceives the target by making a motion to appear to be slashing in front of him. As they prepare to slash forward, the user swings the blade around to have it slash backward while they are facing away from the target and imparts B-tier damage/[/list]

[center][b]Sword Shower[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] Warrior
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close-Short
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] The user must be constantly in motion while he attacks his target with a sword ready in hand.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Hits
[b]Sustain:[/b] -
[b]Cool Down:[/b]3
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
The user calculatingly rushes his target slashes his sword 8 times, each clash imparting D-Tier damage to the target. By using his instincts and also by careful observation, the user attempts to slash wherever he sees an opening, or needs to cover his basis if he is surrounded by delivering two consecutive diagonal slashes,  two vertical slashes, a horizontal slash, two more diagonal slashes, and then a final horizontal slash. [/list]


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