Chikara Yaoko Xwuxiao. [Abilities]

Name: Poisonous Bite
Tier: D-Tier
Class: Beast-Tamer
Type: Offensive
Range: Short 1m-3m
Requirements/Drawbacks: The snake must be able to hear the Beast-Tamer, Beast tamer must be able to speak.
Scaling: Hits
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 1
Cost: 10 Stamina
Description: The snake tenses the muscles near the head, stretching them quickly to lunge its body forward to bite its target, dealing D-Tier Damage(Poisonous)




Name: Jet Slide
Tier: D-Tier
Class: Beast-Tamer
Type: Supplimentary
Range: Medium 3m-10m
Requirements/Drawbacks: The snake must be able to hear the Beast-Tamer, Beast tamer must be able to speak.
Scaling: Range
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 1
Cost: 10 Stamina
Description: The snake continuously contracts and releases its muscles, shifting its body by moving its head in order to move very quickly. This method allows him to move across all surfaces.




Name: First Lock
Tier: What tier is the ability?
Class: Beast-Tamer
Type: Offensive
Range: Short 1m-3m
Requirements/Drawbacks: The snake must be able to hear the Beast-Tamer, Beast tamer must be able to speak.
Scaling: Duration
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 1
Cost: 10 Stamina
Description: The snake slithers up an animal or person; the legs and lower body being completely restricted and squeezed, dealing D-Tier Damage.(Constriction)




Name: Acidic Venom
Tier: D-Tier
Class: Beast-Tamer
Type: Offensive
Range: Medium 3m-10m
Requirements/Drawbacks: The snake must be able to hear the Beast-Tamer, Beast tamer must be able to speak.
Scaling: Damage
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 1
Cost: 10 Stamina
Description: The snake largens its body, bringing a bit of stomach acid to its mouth in conjunction with its venom, and spitting it out. The venom has a slight corrosive effect, enough so to melt skin so the venom can enter.




Name: Scaled Barrier
Tier: C-Tier
Class: Beast-Tamer
Type: Defensive
Range: Close 0m-1m
Requirements/Drawbacks: The snake must be able to hear the Beast-Tamer, Beast tamer must be able to speak.
Scaling: Defense
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 2
Cost: 20
[/b]Description:[/b] The snake moves to take the shape of a circle, its stomach on the inner side. Keeping the shape it hardens to some degree, protecting whoever is behind the snake from attacks.

I'm going to have to request that you change those names to not include any disrespectful/inappropriate words. As the guidelines state:

The name of an ability can be pretty creative, but please be reasonable. Don't use abusive language or names that are unnecessarily long.

What does the poison aspect do? Is it just dealing damage? If that is all it's doing, you don't need to change anything - I just need that clarification.


Admittingly, I don't really see the point in this. You should already be able to basically do this. If you have an explanation, that would be great to hear.


You forgot your ability's tier lol.
Since this ability deals damage, instead of scaling the Duration - which is kind of pointless - you should probably scale the Damage.


You haven't specified what exactly the venom does.
The corrosive burn would count as damage, making your ability Offensive/Supplementary. However, D-Tier abilities cannot have multiple types in one ability.


Make sure you specify the limit of how much damage your snake can defend against.