Shevika New Traits

Traits for Shevika Upgrades for C tier Rank Creature Training at - https://magiworld.forumotion.com/t9008-training-rise-of-a-wolf-or-a-rabbit

Shevika - https://magiworld.forumotion.com/t6720-shevika

Name: Shevika
Tier: C
Type: Normal
Species: Rabbit-Wolf Hybrid
Appearance: Shevika has now grown to 1.3m in height and reached 1.8m in body length. Her multiple tails and unique ears have yet to show any signs of change from their original features. She currently ways around 75 pounds.
Beast Traits: (See the Trait Systems for more info.)

Trait Name: Acute Senses
Trait Tier: D
Trait Requirement: Shevika
Trait Description: Though still maturing, Shevika's adapted rabbit-like ears allow her to hear and detect sounds at a greater range and greater detail.
Trait Effect: Allows Shevika to detect small levels of sounds and their direction where they have come from when searching for sounds.

Trait Name: Natural Camouflage
Trait Tier: D
Trait Requirement: Animal
Trait Description: From both experience and from natural adaption, Shevika is naturally able to Conceal and Camouflage herself in Imuchakk. Making her hard to spot.
Trait Effect: Provides concealment to Shevika in Immuchak biomes.

Trait Name: Lupine Speed
Trait Tier: D
Trait Requirement: Shevika
Trait Description: Shevika is able to significantly increase her speed for a duration of time
Trait Effect: Can move at the speed of twice the speed of a running wolf for hours in a day over bursts of minutes.

Trait Name: Natural Evasion
Trait Tier: C
Trait Requirement: Shevika
Trait Description: Due to her unique/unknown linage, Shevika shows rather significant talent in her evasiveness.
Trait Effect: Shevika has access to a C tier type Dodge - This requires no Energy use.

New traits for review.

Please make sure you’re using the entire format code. Furthermore, make sure you have all the traits listed, even if you’re not changing them. This just makes things easier for staff to grade now and to reference to later.

Editted - Just a query do C tier beasts have base C tier damage ? will need to adjust shevika sizes if new traits are ok as well.

- Why in the world would you need it? Since Shevika is about the size of a larger dog they'd already be rather fast. I don't see much of a purpose for this trait when you can already achieve this effect without a trait.

- If you really do have a purpose for this trait - great (although you should probably elaborate on what the purpose is). But - just a suggestion here - I'd use a trait point to upgrade Natural Weapons to deal B-Tier basic attacks. Since - and answering your question here - the tier of the beast dictates their strength, it would render your current version of Natural Weapons useless since your C-Tier Shevika would be able to deal C-Tier damage without the trait anyway.

Updated

As per discussion trait ideas to replace natural evasion. two included thus far.

Trait Name: Fast and Nimble
Trait Tier: C
Trait Requirement: Shevika
Trait Description: Using the terrain and environment and her nimble nature - Shevika uses the ground and its topography to protect herself from wide covering effects. Be it from blizzard and more
Trait Effect: Effects from Area of Effect attacks are reduced by a tier


Trait Name: Nimble Form
Trait Tier: C
Trait Requirement: Shevika
Trait Description: Due to her nimble and fast nature, Shevika relaxes her form when being afflicted by blows and the like.
Trait Effect: Reduces damage taken by C tier (down to minimum of D tier).

bump for formal trait review of above traits in post above this

I know it may seem obvious what an Immuchak Biome is but please elaborate little in the type of environments or biomes as there's more than just snow.

Nimble form seems to be the best replacement of the two.

Traits for Shevika Upgrades for C tier Rank Creature Training at - https://magiworld.forumotion.com/t9008-training-rise-of-a-wolf-or-a-rabbit

Shevika - https://magiworld.forumotion.com/t6720-shevika

Name: Shevika
Tier: C
Type: Normal
Species: Rabbit-Wolf Hybrid
Appearance: Shevika has now grown to 1.3m in height and reached 1.8m in body length. Her multiple tails and unique ears have yet to show any signs of change from their original features. She currently ways around 75 pounds.
Beast Traits: (See the Trait Systems for more info.)

Trait Name: Acute Senses
Trait Tier: D
Trait Requirement: Shevika
Trait Description: Though still maturing, Shevika's adapted rabbit-like ears allow her to hear and detect sounds at a greater range and greater detail.
Trait Effect: Allows Shevika to detect small levels of sounds and their direction where they have come from when searching for sounds.

Trait Name: Natural Camouflage
Trait Tier: D
Trait Requirement: Animal
Trait Description: From both experience and from natural adaption, Shevika is naturally able to Conceal and Camouflage herself in Imuchakk. Making her hard to spot.
Trait Effect: Provides concealment to Shevika in Imuchakk biomes. (Current Camouflage Regions within Imuchakk, Tundra and Boreal Forest - Unaffected Regions are Mountains, Caverns/Caves/Crevasse and River/Sea)) Applying to Area's with snow within Shevika's vicinity, individual's may have the possibility of spotting other colours in Shevika's fur within reason as the creature is capable of camouflaging itself or dipping its ear's and tails.

Trait Name: Frozen Lupine Speed
Trait Tier: D
Trait Requirement: Shevika
Trait Description: Shevika is able to significantly increase her speed for a duration of time
Trait Effect: Can move at the speed of equivalent speed of a horse in optimal terrain while in Imuchakk Biomes (Tundra, Forest) and Efficiently move in Mountain Terrain (Normal Wolf Speed).

Trait Name: Nimble Form
Trait Tier: C
Trait Requirement: Shevika
Trait Description: Due to her nimble and fast nature, Shevika relaxes her form when being afflicted by blows and the like.
Trait Effect: Reduces damage taken by C tier (down to minimum of D tier).

Let us begin your grading:

Consider I am a new moderator and still learning, so with that being said here we go.

Natural Camouflage: Please specify that this only works in snowy biomes while Shevika is behind, in front, near, or in the snow and or a white background. However, consider another player can always make the case they can see a glimpse the colors of Shevika, if her appearance is accurate to her picture.

Lupine Speed: I rather if this is changed to Shevika being able to sprint as fast a horse and maintain these speeds for several minutes.

I will discuss Nimble Form with staff and potentially Acute Senses.

Updated

I am sorry as I may have read this trait wrong. If the Lupine Speed trait is of D-Tier, it should be put in it that Shevika may run as sprint as fast as a dog for a few minutes.

The rest of the traits look good to me.

I approve of this beast and its training.

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[b]Name:[/b] Shevika
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Type:[/b] Normal
[b]Species:[/b] Rabbit-Wolf Hybrid
[b]Appearance:[/b] Shevika has now grown to 1.3m in height and reached 1.8m in body length. Her multiple tails and unique ears have yet to show any signs of change from their original features. She currently ways around 75 pounds.
[b]Beast Traits:[/b] (See the [url=http://magiworld.forumotion.com/t6506-trait-template-systems][b]Trait Systems[/b][/url] for more info.)

[b]Trait Name:[/b] Acute Senses
[b]Trait Tier:[/b] D
[b]Trait Requirement:[/b] Shevika
[b]Trait Description:[/b] Though still maturing, Shevika's adapted rabbit-like ears allow her to hear and detect sounds at a greater range and greater detail.
[b]Trait Effect:[/b] Allows Shevika to detect small levels of sounds and their direction where they have come from when searching for sounds.

[b]Trait Name:[/b] Natural Camouflage
[b]Trait Tier:[/b] D
[b]Trait Requirement:[/b] Animal
[b]Trait Description:[/b] From both experience and from natural adaption, Shevika is naturally able to Conceal and Camouflage herself in Imuchakk. Making her hard to spot.
[b]Trait Effect:[/b] Provides concealment to Shevika in Imuchakk biomes. (Current Camouflage Regions within Imuchakk, Tundra and Boreal Forest - Unaffected Regions are Mountains, Caverns/Caves/Crevasse and River/Sea)) Applying to Area's with snow within Shevika's vicinity, individual's may have the possibility of spotting other colours in Shevika's fur within reason as the creature is capable of camouflaging itself or dipping its ear's and tails.

[b]Trait Name:[/b] Frozen Lupine Speed
[b]Trait Tier:[/b] D
[b]Trait Requirement:[/b] Shevika
[b]Trait Description:[/b] Shevika is able to significantly increase her speed for a duration of time
[b]Trait Effect:[/b] Can move at the speed of equivalent speed of a horse in optimal terrain while in Imuchakk Biomes (Tundra, Forest) and Efficiently move in Mountain Terrain (Normal Wolf Speed).

[b]Trait Name:[/b] Nimble Form
[b]Trait Tier:[/b] C
[b]Trait Requirement:[/b] Shevika
[b]Trait Description:[/b] Due to her nimble and fast nature, Shevika relaxes her form when being afflicted by blows and the like.
[b]Trait Effect:[/b] Reduces damage taken by C tier (down to minimum of D tier).