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1Ability Edits Empty Ability Edits on 19/07/17, 06:31 pm

Merari

Merari
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C-Tier
Hey! I realized that I really want to reword a lot of my spells, so I guess I'm going to revamp them a bit?



Adagio:

Former:

Adagio
Tier: D-Tier
Class: Magician
Type: Supplementary
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: The user must play three notes before waving their staff in a circular motion as they shout “Adagio!”
Scaling: AoE
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 1 post
Cost: 10 Magoi
Description:

    The Magician orders the Sound Rukh to bring drowsiness to anyone within a 5 meter radius around them. Under drowsiness their speed and reaction time are slowed.  If they are dealt D-Tier damage or if a post passes, then Adagio wears off and the effects of drowsiness wears off.


Adagio
Tier: D-Tier
Class: Magician
Type: Supplementary
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: The user must gently jab the ground with the end of his staff as he or she hums.
Scaling: AoE
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 1 post
Cost: 10 Magoi
Description:

    The Magician quietly hums to the Rukh as he touches the floor beneath him (if in the air, they just jab where the floor would be). It's a quiet order for the Sound Rukh to bring drowsiness to anyone within a 5-meter radius around the caster. Under drowsiness their speed and reaction time are slowed.  If they are dealt D-Tier damage or if a post passes, then Adagio wears off and the effects of drowsiness wear off.


Allegro:

Former:

Allegro
Tier: D-Tier
Class: Magician
Type: Offensive
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: The user strums a simple tune consisting of three notes before waving their staff in a horizontal sweep and shouting out “Allegro!”
Scaling: Damage
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 1 post
Cost: 10 Magoi
Description:

    The user uses music to vibrate the Sound Rukh, causing them to clash against each other and vibrate quickly before creating a giant sound wave that acts as a sort of “boom” that pushes enemies 5 meters away and deals D-tier damage.


Allegro
Tier: D-Tier
Class: Magician
Type: Offensive
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: The user sweeps the end of their wand from on side to another as they shout "Allegro!"
Scaling: Damage
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 1 post
Cost: 10 Magoi
Description:

    The user gathers Magoi at the tip of their wand ordering the Rukh to gather as they swing the staff. The shout of Allegro causes the Sound Rukh to clash against each other and vibrate quickly before creating a giant sound wave that acts as a sort of “boom” that deals D-tier damage.


Drone:

Former:

Drone
Tier: D-Tier
Class: Magician
Type: Offensive
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: The user points their staff skywards as the call out “Drone…” before producing a dull melody that occurs throughout the duration of the spell.
Scaling: Damage
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 1 post
Cost: 10 Magoi
Description:

    The user plays a dull melody, causing the Sound Rukh to buzz quietly together in a buzzing sound before growing louder and becoming a loud buzzing that bursts the eardrums of a person within a 8-meter radius, dealing D-tier damage.


Drone
Tier: D-Tier
Class: Magician
Type: Offensive
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: The user points their staff skyward as they hum quietly.
Scaling: Damage
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 1 post
Cost: 10 Magoi
Description:

    The Magician hums quietly as they point their wand skyward, his hums alerting the Sound Rukh to buzz quietly. They clash together as the buzzing the Rukh grows louder and louder before becoming a loud droning sound that pops the eardrums of a person within an 8-meter radius of the user. The caster is left unharmed, but anyone else is dealt D-tier damage.


Gilliard:

Former:

Gilliard
Tier: D-Tier
Class: Magician
Type: Offensive
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: The user plays a short, lively tune before pointing at their target while calling “Gilliard!”
Scaling: Damage
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 1 post
Cost: 10 Magoi
Description:

    The user plays a lively melody that one would hear at dances, energizing the Sound Rukh before pointing their staff at their target. The Sound Rukh rushes 10 meters forward, and due to their excitement and vibration, slams into the target and deals D-tier damage.


Gilliard
Tier: D-Tier
Class: Magician
Type: Offensive
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: The user traces a circle in the air with their staff as they hum loudly before shouting Gilliard.
Scaling: Damage
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 1 post
Cost: 10 Magoi
Description:

    The Magician hums loudly as they trace a circle in the air with their staff, funneling the Sound Rukh through the center of the circle. As they shout Gilliard, the Rukh/Magoi rushes forwards by 10 meters, and due to their excitement and vibration, slam into their target, dealing D-tier damage.


Canon:

Former:

Canon
Tier: C-Tier
Class: Magician
Type: Offensive
Range: Long
Requirements/Drawbacks: The user plays a short melody where the three notes repeat themselves at different speeds before pointing their staff at the target and chanting “Canon!”
Scaling: Damage
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 1 post
Cost: 20 Magoi
Description:

    The user plays a simple melody that repeats itself at different speeds before pointing their staff at the opponent. The spell energizes the Sound Rukh and causes them to vibrate and shoot out 15 meters in a concentrated sound wave at the target, causing C-tier damage.


Canon
Tier: C-Tier
Class: Magician
Type: Offensive
Range: Long
Requirements/Drawbacks: The user simply swings their wand in the direction of the target as they call "Canon!"
Scaling: Damage
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 1 post
Cost: 20 Magoi
Description:

    The Magician swings their wand in their chosen target as they call the name of the spell. Both actions energizes the Sound Rukh and causes them to vibrate and shoot out 15 meters in a concentrated sound wave at the target, causing C-tier damage.



Last edited by Merari on 19/07/17, 08:35 pm; edited 1 time in total


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2Ability Edits Empty Re: Ability Edits on 19/07/17, 08:22 pm

Diana Corvus

Diana Corvus
A-Tier
A-Tier
Since there is minimal editing to each ability, you do not have to retrain them. Approved.

Code:
[center][b]Adagio[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] The user must gently jab the ground with the end of his staff as he or she hums.
[b]Scaling:[/b] AoE
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
The Magician quietly hums to the Rukh as he touches the floor beneath him (if in the air, they just jab where the floor would be). It's a quiet order for the Sound Rukh to bring drowsiness to anyone within a 5-meter radius around the caster. Under drowsiness their speed and reaction time are slowed.  If they are dealt D-Tier damage or if a post passes, then Adagio wears off and the effects of drowsiness wear off.[/list]

[center][b]Gilliard[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] The user traces a circle in the air with their staff as they hum loudly before shouting Gilliard.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
The Magician hums loudly as they trace a circle in the air with their staff, funneling the Sound Rukh through the center of the circle. As they shout Gilliard, the Rukh/Magoi rushes forwards by 10 meters, and due to their excitement and vibration, slam into their target, dealing D-tier damage.[/list]

[center][b]Canon[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Long
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] The user simply swings their wand in the direction of the target as they call "Canon!"
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Magoi
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
The Magician swings their wand in their chosen target as they call the name of the spell. Both actions energizes the Sound Rukh and causes them to vibrate and shoot out 15 meters in a concentrated sound wave at the target, causing C-tier damage.[/list]

I just need you to make a few quick edits to Allegro and Drone.

Allegro may not have a knockback AND damage. Either choose between the two or bump the ability up to C tier.

Drone has a slight problem in the wording. It may not rupture ear drums with just D tier damage. Either bump up the ability to C tier or change it to something weaker such as popping the ear drums.


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3Ability Edits Empty Re: Ability Edits on 19/07/17, 08:45 pm

Merari

Merari
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C-Tier
Bump for edits!


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4Ability Edits Empty Re: Ability Edits on 19/07/17, 09:18 pm

Diana Corvus

Diana Corvus
A-Tier
A-Tier
Approved! Just for an extra note, no, you do not have to train these.

Code:
[center][b]Allegro[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] The user sweeps the end of their wand from on side to another as they shout "Allegro!"
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
The user gathers Magoi at the tip of their wand ordering the Rukh to gather as they swing the staff. The shout of Allegro causes the Sound Rukh to clash against each other and vibrate quickly before creating a giant sound wave that acts as a sort of “boom” that deals D-tier damage.[/list]

[center][b]Drone[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] The user points their staff skyward as they hum quietly.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
The Magician hums quietly as they point their wand skyward, his hums alerting the Sound Rukh to buzz quietly. They clash together as the buzzing the Rukh grows louder and louder before becoming a loud droning sound that pops the eardrums of a person within an 8-meter radius of the user. The caster is left unharmed, but anyone else is dealt D-tier damage.[/list]


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