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Ariella's Ability Edits

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1Ariella's Ability Edits Empty Ariella's Ability Edits 25/09/14, 07:29 pm

Ariella Negri

Ariella Negri
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Changing from :

D-tier Abilities

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C-tier Abilities

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D-tier Abilities

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C-tier Abilities

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B-tier Abilities

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2Ariella's Ability Edits Empty Re: Ariella's Ability Edits 25/09/14, 11:27 pm

Vardreth

Vardreth
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Just a few minor things. When we sustain stuff, it's normally meant as a new cast of the spell or another use of an ability which can, of course, deal a new instance of damage. However, if there are any abilities that do something other than become recast (such as what I imagine your cages do) it should mention something in the sustain verbiage that says 'May be sustained to maintain its form and reform any structural damage while dealing a new instance of damage.' or 'May be sustained to recast the spell and deal a new instance of damage.' or a combination of the both, such as 'May be sustained to recast or to retain current form while dealing a new instance of damage.' I wouldn't mind if this were changed so that such a thing was not necessary to say. If this isn't changed, however, please continue to read on;

Spells that should be double checked on with that in mind:
Electric Field
Electric Cage
Electric Cage II
Electric Chains
Electrical Field II


Everything checks out though, so you're good to go on the following abilities if you are fine with them:

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[center][u][b][size=13]D-tier Abilities[/size][/b][/u][/center]

[spoiler="D-tier"][b]Name:[/b] Electric Field
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10/5
[b]Element:[/b] Lightning
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 10m
[b]Duration:[/b] Sustained
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts or sustain+1
[b]Description:[/b] Ariella casts a 5 meter wide sphere of electric magic at 10m/s up to 10m away, dealing D-tier damage each turn to anything within the sphere. This spell can be sustained.

[b]Name:[/b] Electric Whip
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10
[b]Element:[/b] Lightning
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 10m
[b]Duration:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts
[b]Description:[/b] Ariella gathers rukh into a whip of electrical charge and strikes at an enemy up to 10m away at 10m/s, dealing D-tier damage.

[b]Name:[/b] Chain Lightning
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10
[b]Element:[/b] Lightning
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 10m
[b]Duration:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts
[b]Description:[/b] Ariella directs the rukh to strike at an enemy up to 10 m away, moving up to 10 m/s and dealing D-tier lightning damage. If another person is within 5m of the original target, Ariella can direct the rukh to arc to them, dealing up to D-tier damage. The charge can arc to a total of 5 targets.

[b]Name:[/b] Numbing Spheres
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10
[b]Element:[/b] Lightning
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] 10m
[b]Duration:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts
[b]Description:[/b] Ariella directs the rukh to form 5 spheres of lightning and launches them at up to 5 enemies at 10 m/s up to 10m away, numbing 1 limb for up to 2 posts and reducing movement speed of the target by 5 m/s.

[b]Name:[/b] Electric Cage I
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 magoi/5 magoi
[b]Element:[/b] Lightning
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] 10 meters
[b]Duration:[/b] Sustained
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts or sustain+1
[b]Description:[/b] Ariella casts a hollow sphere of electricity up to 5 meters across with a 3 cm wall that can form at 10 m/s within 10 meters of herself, capable of trapping opponents inside. If any edge of the sphere is touched, the person will have a limb numbed for up to 2 posts, reducing their movement speed by 5 m/s. This spell can be sustained.[/spoiler]

[center][u][b][size=13]C-tier Abilities[/size][/b][/u][/center]

[spoiler="C-tier"][b]Name:[/b] Shock Ball
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20
[b]Element:[/b] Lightning 
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive/Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] 20m
[b]Duration:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 posts
[b]Description:[/b] Ariella gathers rukh into a 1 meter wide ball of lightning, launching it at 15 m/s at an enemy up to 20 meters away, dealing D-tier damage and numbing a limb for 2 posts, reducing the targets movement speed by 5 m/s.

[b]Name:[/b] Electric Cage II
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20/10
[b]Element:[/b] Lightning
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] 20 meters
[b]Duration:[/b] Sustained
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 posts or Sustain+1
[b]Description:[/b] Ariella casts a hollow sphere of electricity up to 10 meters across with a 3 cm wall that can form at 15 m/s within 20 meters of herself, capable of trapping opponents inside. If any edge of the sphere is touched, the opponents will have 1 limbs paralyzed for up to 3 posts, reducing movement speed by 5 m/s. This spell can be sustained.

[b]Name:[/b] Electric Chains
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20/10
[b]Element:[/b] Lightning
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 20m
[b]Duration:[/b] Sustained
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 posts or Sustain+1
[b]Description:[/b] Ariella directs the rukh into a chain of lightning approximately 2 cm thick that travels at 15 m/s within 20 meters of herself which can deal C-tier damage. This spell can be sustained.

[b]Name:[/b] Electric Field II
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20/10
[b]Element:[/b] Lightning
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 20m
[b]Duration:[/b] Sustained
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 posts or Sustain+1
[b]Description:[/b] Ariella casts a 10 meter wide sphere of electric magic at 15m/s up to 20 meters away, dealing C-tier damage to anything within the sphere This spell can be sustained.[/spoiler]


[center][u][b][size=13]B-tier Abilities[/size][/b][/u][/center]

[spoiler="B-tier"][b]Name:[/b] Electric Wall
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30
[b]Element:[/b] Lightning
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] 30m
[b]Duration:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 posts
[b]Description:[/b] Ariella casts a wall of electricity up to 15 meters wide and tall and one meter thick which can move up to 20 m/s up to 30 meters away from her. If anything touches the wall, it will take paralyze two limbs for three posts, reducing movement speed by 10 m/s.[/spoiler]

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