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1Hakon Anu Style 1  Empty Hakon Anu Style 1 on 22/03/17, 08:16 am

Thorsten Ove

Thorsten Ove
C-Tier
C-Tier
Hakon Anu Style | Roundhouse
Tier: B-Tier
Class: Assassin
Type: Offensive
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: Required to perform this on stable footing, or ground.
Scaling: Damage
Sustain: 0
Cooldown: 3 Post
Cost: 30 Stamina : 15 Sustain
Description:

    Thorsten fakes an roundhouse kick in a close range of his opponent. If the fakes works, the users hooks his knee joint around the opponent's neck using the momentum to flip and pin them down on the ground with one leg. Dealing C-Tier damage in the processes.


Hakon Anu Style| Basic #2
Tier: D-Tier
Class: Assassin
Type: Supplementary
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: Being able to get an grab on the opponent. It won't work against someone with Balance Trait.
Scaling: Hits
Sustain: 0
Cooldown: 1 Post
Cost: 10 Stamina : 5 Sustain
Description:

    If Thorsten, is able to grab both the arms of his opponent. He locks their movement to lead them into an inward trip to their back by sweeping the back of their knee


Hakon Anu Style | Basic #3
Tier: D-Tier
Class: Assassin
Type: Offensive
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: Taking a running start toward the person, or enemy.
Scaling: Damage
Sustain: 0
Cooldown: 1 Post
Cost: 10 Stamina : 5 Sustain
Description:

    Thorsten rise off the ground, to bring the front of his knee bashing it into either the torso, or head of the opponent. Dealing D-Tier damage in the end.


Hakon Anu Style | 1st Stance
Tier: B-Tier
Class: Assassin
Type: Supplementary
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: Requires a stable footing. Being able to execute in confided spaced.
Scaling: Weasel: The tier of the damage increases if the enemy/opponent flinches, or evades by stepping back up for every 10 Stamina/Magoi Invested.
Sustain: 0
Cooldown: 3 Post
Cost: 30 Stamina : 15 Sustain
Description:

    Thorsten, executes three kicks in a row from either left or right, following straight away from the opposite direction, then from behind. It aims two kicks for D-tier damage at the head, while the third kick finishes from behind with C-tier damage like an after image.


Hakon Anu Style | Basic #1
Tier: D-tier
Class: Assassin
Type: Supplementary
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: Having stable footing. No broken ligaments.
Scaling: None
Sustain: 0
Cooldown: 1 Post
Cost: 10 Stamina ; 5 Sustain
Description:
    Thorsten, strafes or swiftly steps to possible openings he sees fit, avoiding up to D-Tier damage, still receiving minor wounds if presented.  



Last edited by Thorsten Ove on 01/05/17, 03:15 pm; edited 4 times in total


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2Hakon Anu Style 1  Empty Re: Hakon Anu Style 1 on 22/03/17, 04:46 pm

Diana Corvus

Diana Corvus
A-Tier
A-Tier
Hakon Anu Style | Reverse Roundhouse

I know you may have intended this as flavor text but this move can not damage AND cause disorientation as a D tier ability.

How is your character's legs reaching someone within 5 meters..? No one has legs that are 5 meters long...

Close ranged abilities such as this one, which it should be close, don't need ranges in the description for the most part.

Hakon Anu Style| Prying Gripple

Again with the 3m in the description. It's not needed.

I don't understand how this would scale with hits if you're tripping them? The movement in this ability also doesn't make much sense the way it's written. It sounds really awkward but I won't judge too harshly.

It also doesn't seem like it does anything in particular aside from attempt to trip the opponent. Keep in mind to put in there that it won't work on anyone with a balance trait.

Hakon Anu Style | Chronicle Lapse

I won't repeat myself for the further abilities... but... again with the 5 meters. It's not needed and makes no sense. Especially since Close ranged abilities only go up to 3m away.

Don't chain this with another ability. I gave you this advice already. While it's okay to chain them in battle or design them to flow together nicely-- it's a really bad idea to make it a requirement to use the ability.

'If used after ‘Prying Gripple’ the user bashes his knee side ways into the opponent's face.' -- Should be removed.

Hakon Anu Style | 3rd Stance

Er... the scaling is a little weird and makes little sense logically but it's fine.

Take out either the damage or the disorientation, dude. You should know already that any sort of status effect is for Offensive / Supplementary abilities. I shouldn't have to tell you this.

If you split the types you need to take away damage. As a C tier ability, you'd be doing two D tier kicks maximum. You can't go over C tier damage. If you added disorientation, you'd only be able to do a single instance of D tier damage.

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Please pick one of the last two abilities. These are your starters and you have one extra ability here. It's 1 C tier and 4 D tier. You have 1 C tier and 5 D tier.


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3Hakon Anu Style 1  Empty Re: Hakon Anu Style 1 on 22/03/17, 07:28 pm

Thorsten Ove

Thorsten Ove
C-Tier
C-Tier
Edited


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4Hakon Anu Style 1  Empty Re: Hakon Anu Style 1 on 21/04/17, 08:15 pm

Thorsten Ove

Thorsten Ove
C-Tier
C-Tier
Could someone check the edited version please ?


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5Hakon Anu Style 1  Empty Re: Hakon Anu Style 1 on 21/04/17, 09:58 pm

Ariel

Ariel
A-Tier
A-Tier
Sorry about that x_x

Hakon Anu Style | 1st Stance

  • Firstly, you can't even do 3 kicks unless you scale it. Secondly, 2 D + 1 C = B-Tier damage. This is a C-Tier ability.


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6Hakon Anu Style 1  Empty Re: Hakon Anu Style 1 on 30/04/17, 12:16 am

Thorsten Ove

Thorsten Ove
C-Tier
C-Tier
Bump


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7Hakon Anu Style 1  Empty Re: Hakon Anu Style 1 on 30/04/17, 04:42 pm

Rima Fahim

Rima Fahim
A-Tier
A-Tier

  • Hakon Anu Style | Roundhouse, this is only a D-Tier ability, so it really shouldn’t be able to do damage AND pin someone down. Pick either the damage, the pin for one post, or a normal flip move.

  • Hakon Anu Style| Basic #2 Should be fine.

  • Hakon Anu Style | Basic #3 Should be fine.

  • Hakon Anu Style | 1st Stance This should be fine for the most part, except you really need to make the requirements/drawbacks a bit more considering “The use of his legs/feet” is already common sense. Get what I’m saying?

  • Hakon Anu Style | Basic #1 You don’t really need the whole “frontal, diagonal, or vertical” part in there. Also, how is a faint going to dodge an attack? O.o you should just make this into a normal dodge or something.


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8Hakon Anu Style 1  Empty Re: Hakon Anu Style 1 on 01/05/17, 03:15 pm

Thorsten Ove

Thorsten Ove
C-Tier
C-Tier
Edited


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9Hakon Anu Style 1  Empty Re: Hakon Anu Style 1 on 01/05/17, 03:28 pm

Ariel

Ariel
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Approved
This doesn't count as your Starter Abilities, so you will need to train them. You can still have your Starter Abilities if you make the 4 D-Tier and C-Tier abilities thing for another time.
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[center][b]Hakon Anu Style | Roundhouse [/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] B-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Assassin
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Required to perform this on stable footing, or ground.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 3 Post
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Stamina : 15 Sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Thorsten fakes an roundhouse kick in a close range of his opponent. If the fakes works, the users hooks his knee joint around the opponent's neck using the momentum to flip and pin them down on the ground with one leg. Dealing C-Tier damage in the processes. [/list]

[center][b]Hakon Anu Style| Basic #2 [/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Assassin
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Being able to get an grab on the opponent. It won't work against someone with Balance Trait.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Hits
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 1 Post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina : 5 Sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
If Thorsten, is able to grab both the arms of his opponent. He locks their movement to lead them into an inward trip to their back by sweeping the back of their knee [/list]

[center][b]Hakon Anu Style | Basic #3[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Assassin
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Taking a running start toward the person, or enemy.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 1 Post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina : 5 Sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Thorsten rise off the ground, to bring the front of his knee bashing it into either the torso, or head of the opponent. Dealing D-Tier damage in the end. [/list]

[center][b]Hakon Anu Style | 1st Stance [/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] B-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Assassin
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Requires a stable footing. Being able to execute in confided spaced.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Weasel: The tier of the damage increases if the enemy/opponent flinches, or evades by stepping back up for every 10 Stamina/Magoi Invested.
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 3 Post
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Stamina : 15 Sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Thorsten, executes three kicks in a row from either left or right, following straight away from the opposite direction, then from behind. It aims two kicks for D-tier damage at the head, while the third kick finishes from behind with C-tier damage like an after image. [/list]

[center][b]Hakon Anu Style | Basic #1 [/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D-tier
[b]Class:[/b] Assassin
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Having stable footing. No broken ligaments.
[b]Scaling:[/b] None
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 1 Post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina ; 5 Sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
 Thorsten, strafes or swiftly steps to possible openings he sees fit, avoiding up to D-Tier damage, still receiving minor wounds if presented.  [/list]


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