Orie's Lightning Set

Name: Armor Of The Lightning Dragon
Tier: [A-Tier]
Class: Beast Tamer (Orie)
Element: Lightning
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Range: Long
Requirements/Drawbacks: Orie appears behind lagi before Generating the electric Guard
Scaling: Lightning Multitude- for 10 more Magoi, Lagi can put on another layer of armor. Each scaling doubles the number of armors in use'
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 4 posts
Cost: 20 Magoi
Description:

Orie generates an armor around Lagi in the form of lightning at A- Tier Speeds. At This moment, Lagi can deal  A- tier damage to anything he comes in contact with.

Name: Full Paralyzing
Tier: [Ω-Tier]
Class: Beast Tamer (Orie)
Element: Lightning
Type: Supplementary
Range: Long
Requirements/Drawbacks: Orie appears behind lagi and holds out her hand to fire the blast.
Scaling: Cripple- for 10 more Magoi, this ability paralyzing effect is increased by 1 post.
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 4 Posts
Cost: 20 Magoi
Description:

Orie can fire out one small 1 meter cube of Lightning magic that's formed and travels as far as 40 meters. The cubes explode, firing off  a immense electrical charge from 25 meters from where it lands, makes contact with, or at will. this charge causes full body paralyze  for 4 posts . If sustained, Orie can fire it again. Being hit by this move one again resets the paralysis post count.



Name: Lightning Tractor
Tier: Omega Tier
Class: Beast Tamer (Orie)
Element: Lightning
Type: Offensive
Range: Long
Requirements/Drawbacks: Orie appears behind lagi before firing the blast
Scaling: Elongate- The range of the tractor is increased by 5 meters per 10 magoi
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 4 posts
Cost: 20 Magoi
Description:

Orie fires out an amazing blast of lighting magic in the shape of a cone  that's 15 meters in  height, and width, and travels as far as  40 meters, dealing A-tier lightning damage. When sustained, Orie can fire it again or move the cone around like a tractor beam.

Name:Negative Charge
Tier: Omega Tier
Class: Beast Tamer (Orie)
Element: Lightning
Type: Supplementary
Range: Long
Requirements/Drawbacks: Orie appears behind lagi beforehand. Because of the high concentration of lightning magic, orie can't use other lightning spells while utilizing ths.
Scaling: Double Negative - for 10 more magoi the duration of this ability increases by 1 post.
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 4 posts
Cost: 20 Magoi
Description:
Orie sends off a negative pulse that begins 5 cm away from Lagi, Orie and any equipment Lagi is carrying. This pulse pushes outward in a 25 meter diameter, with Lagi as the center. All metal, and those with metal on them, are pushed away from this pulse outward and are unable to enter the pulse while they still have metal on their body. This ability can be somewhat resisted if the tools are rooted into the ground, halving the ability lasting time.  This ability lasts for 4 posts.

I'm sorry for not telling you this earlier, but Orie doesn't have a trait that allows her to register a bunch of lightning-based abilities like this. However, she IS an Omega-Tier lightning-based magic tool, so she would be able to register up to 5 Omega-Tier lightning abilities. You should look at Vardreth/Garret's abilities when you get the chance for an example, because he recently got an Omega-Tier magic weapon, so he registered a bunch of Omega-Tier abilities to it.

edited

Looks like I made a huge mistake while grading this the first time, which I already DMed you about. So, please just follow these instructions after you read my message on discord, then we should be 100% fine and ready to go. I know you’ll most likely be very agitated doing all of this again, but please don’t take it out on me or anyone else on the team. It was a mistake, and for that I’m very very sorry again.

Armor of the Lightning Dragon - Please give this ability some flavor text, about how it’s actually letting you fly. So, pretty much just explain that it is magnetism doing this, ect. Also, since this is using magnetism and not strength to fly, there should be some repercussions for this flight. For example, you need to state how this form of flight is good for going in straight lines, but turning with it can prove to be very slow. Oh, and this kind of flight would be sort of limited, so let’s say you could only fly up to 40 meters per post with it.

Full Paralyzing - Since this is no longer an Omega-Tier ability, please reduce the blast radius of this ability while also bringing the post count down to 4. The sustain part is a bit wonky as well, because it’s a tad bit unfair to just claim there was a lingering charge chilling in that area, as that would allow you to stunlock someone completely out of a fight. If anything, please state Orie would have to fire another one of those cubes to do activate the lingering charge, or w/e. Oh, and last thing. Remove the whole “reduces the speed of the opponent to 0” part, as m/s was removed ages ago.

Lightning Tractor - This might have been fine as an Omega-Tier ability, but since it’s A-Tier now it has to be much smaller in size, with less distance it can travel.

Shock Throne Gatling - You don’t own El Dragon anymore, so you should most likely remove that part. There is no such thing as “Omega Tier speeds”, let alone for a projectile. Reduce the amount of cubes that can be fired, along with the amount of distance they can travel.

Negative Charge - The ability itself should be fine, but you need to add some text explaining how one would be able to resist it. Like if someone were to stab their sword into the ground, they would be able to resist it somewhat. Also, since Orie is acting as a form of catalyst during this, you should state that she wouldn’t be able to cast any additional spells while in this “mode”. Oh, and also bring the post count down to 4.

Edited.

Approved with a couple of edits that I mentioned to you already.~

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[center][b]Armor Of The Lightning Dragon[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] [A-Tier]
[b]Class:[/b] Beast Tamer (Orie)
[b]Element: [/b]Lightning
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive/Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Long
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Orie appears behind lagi before Generating the electric Guard
[b]Scaling:[/b] Lightning Multitude- for 10 more Magoi, Lagi can put on another layer of armor. Each scaling doubles the number of armors in use'
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 4 posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Magoi
[b]Description: [/b]
[list]
Orie generates an armor made of magnetic energy around Lagi, granting him the power of flight  through magnetism. If Lagi goes in a straight line during this, he will be able to achieve A-TIer flight speeds. However, if he attempts to turn around or move to the side, the speed will only be able to reach C-Tier flight speed. During this, anything Lagi comes into contact with will be jolted with a strong shock of lightning for B-Tier damage.[/list]

[center][b]Full Paralyzing[/b][/center]
[b]Tier: [/b][Ω-Tier]
[b]Class:[/b] Beast Tamer (Orie)
[b]Element:[/b] Lightning
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Long
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Orie appears behind lagi and holds out her hand to fire the blast.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Cripple- for 10 more Magoi, this ability paralyzing effect is increased by 1 post.
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down: [/b]4 Posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Magoi
[b]Description: [/b]

Orie can fire out one small 1 meter cube of Lightning magic that's formed and travels as far as 40 meters. The cubes explode, firing off  a immense electrical charge from 25 meters from where it lands, makes contact with, or at will. this charge causes full body paralyze  for 4 posts . If sustained, Orie can fire it again. Being hit by this move one again resets the paralysis post count.

[center][b]Lightning Tractor[/b][/center]
[b]Tier: [/b]Omega Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Beast Tamer (Orie)
[b]Element:[/b] Lightning
[b]Type: [/b]Offensive
[b]Range: [/b]Long
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Orie appears behind lagi before firing the blast
[b]Scaling:[/b] Elongate- The range of the tractor is increased by 5 meters per 10 magoi
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 4 posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Magoi
[b]Description: [/b]

Orie fires out an amazing blast of lighting magic in the shape of a cone  that's 15 meters in  height, and width, and travels as far as  40 meters, dealing A-tier lightning damage. When sustained, Orie can fire it again or move the cone around like a tractor beam.

[center][b]Negative Charge[/b][/center]
[b]Tier: [/b]Omega Tier
[b]Class: [/b]Beast Tamer (Orie)
[b]Element: [/b]Lightning
[b]Type: [/b]Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Long
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Orie appears behind lagi beforehand. Because of the high concentration of lightning magic, orie can't use other lightning spells while utilizing ths.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Double Negative - for 10 more magoi the duration of this ability increases by 1 post.
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 4 posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Magoi
[b]Description:[/b]
Orie sends off a negative pulse that begins 5 cm away from Lagi, Orie and any equipment Lagi is carrying. This pulse pushes outward in a 25 meter diameter, with Lagi as the center. All metal, and those with metal on them, are pushed away from this pulse outward and are unable to enter the pulse while they still have metal on their body. This ability can be somewhat resisted if the tools are rooted into the ground, halving the ability lasting time.  This ability lasts for 4 posts.