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1Maria's Starting Spells Empty Maria's Starting Spells 10/02/17, 07:03 pm

Ainsworth

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Alaqila Ajanah [Heavy Wing]
Tier: D
Class: Magician
Type: Offensive
Range: Long
Requirements/Drawbacks: Maria needs to hold her staff in front of herself.
Scaling: Hits
Sustain: -
Cool Down: 1 post
Cost: 10 magoi
Description: Maria uses Strength Magic to form a strength projectile with the appearance of a small dart with tiny wing like appendages on its side. The projectile is 10 cm in length and spans 3 cm from wing to wing. The projectile deals D-tier slashing damage and will travel up to 10 m before fading away.

Majal Sadd [Repelling Field]
Tier: D
Class: Magician
Type: Supplementary
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Maria needs tap the ground or space below her with her staff.
Scaling: Area of effect
Sustain: -
Cool Down: 1 post
Cost: 10 magoi
Description: Maria uses Strength Magic to generate a force wave which spreads from her staff in all directions around her and pushes back anyone or anything caught within the wave to 5 m beyond the spell's maximum reach.

Alsukun Farad [Stillness Force]
Tier: D
Class: Magician
Type: Supplementary
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Maria needs to grasp her staff with both of her hands.
Scaling: Hits
Sustain: -
Cool Down: 1 post
Cost: 10 magoi
Description: Maria uses Strength Magic to create a  smooth sphere of condensed force with a 40 cm diameter that floats in the place it was created in. When the sphere is approached by an enemy it detonates causing disorientation and dizziness to all in a 3 m radius around it.


Shuh Alfijar [Distortion Blast]
Tier: D
Class: Magician
Type: Offensive
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Maria needs to point the tip of her staff towards her target.
Scaling: Damage
Sustain: -
Cool Down: 1 post
Cost: 10 magoi
Description: Maria uses Strength Magic to shoot forward a blast of concentrated power. It is 50 cm wide and 30 cm tall. The blast deals D-tier blunt damage to those caught in it and will travel up to 7 m before dispersing fully.

Katif Almajal [Dense Sphere]
Tier: C
Class: Magician
Type: Offensive
Range: Long
Requirements/Drawbacks: Maria needs to point the tip of her staff in front of herself.
Scaling: Damage
Sustain: -
Cool Down: 2 post
Cost: 20 magoi
Description: Maria uses Gravity Magic to gather surrounding materials (usually dust) around the tip of her staff and condensing them into a dense smooth sphere with a diameter of 20 cm which can then be fired dealing C-tier damage to anyone hit. If scaling is applied the size of the sphere scales alongside the damage, growing up to 3 m in diameter at maximum scaling. It can travel up to 20 m before the magic weakness and the sphere disperses into its materials.



Last edited by Ainsworth on 11/02/17, 06:37 am; edited 3 times in total

2Maria's Starting Spells Empty Re: Maria's Starting Spells 10/02/17, 07:35 pm

Rima Fahim

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  • Alaqila Ajanah [Heavy Wing]

    Change the sustain from 2 to 0 or -
    Put the base size of the projectile in meters or cm
    Add how far the projectile will travel up to in meters

  • Majal Sadd [Repelling Field]

    Change the sustain from 2 to 0 or -

  • Alsukun Farad [Stillness Force]

    Change the sustain from 2 to 0 or -
    Put the base size of the projectile in meters or cm instead of saying "head-sized"
    Add how far the detonation will reach in meters
    State that the disorientation/dizziness lasts only 1 post

  • Shuh Alfijar [Distortion Blast]

    Change the sustain from 2 to 0 or -
    Add how far the projectile will travel up to in meters

  • Katif Almajal [Dense Sphere]

    Put the base size of the projectile in meters or cm instead of saying "fist-sized"

3Maria's Starting Spells Empty Re: Maria's Starting Spells 10/02/17, 08:43 pm

Ainsworth

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Edits made.

4Maria's Starting Spells Empty Re: Maria's Starting Spells 10/02/17, 09:09 pm

Rima Fahim

Rima Fahim
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Woops, just a few more things you need to fixed. Twas mainly my own fault for not including them in my post to fix.


  • Alaqila Ajanah [Heavy Wing]

    Change the range to long instead of medium.

  • Alsukun Farad [Stillness Force]

    You need to state the size of the detonation in meters.

  • Shuh Alfijar [Distortion Blast]

    You need to put how large the projectile is in cm.

  • Katif Almajal [Dense Sphere]

    Is just a simple typo, you put "diameter of 20" but nothing after that. 20cm? If so you should state that part. :P

Other than those changes, everything SHOULD be fine and you'll be good to go after them.

5Maria's Starting Spells Empty Re: Maria's Starting Spells 11/02/17, 06:37 am

Ainsworth

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Changes have been made.

6Maria's Starting Spells Empty Re: Maria's Starting Spells 11/02/17, 10:33 am

Ariel

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Approved~ Make sure you add your abilities to your vault.

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[center][b]Alaqila Ajanah [Heavy Wing] [/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Long
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Maria needs to hold her staff in front of herself.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Hits
[b]Sustain:[/b] -
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 magoi
[b]Description:[/b] Maria uses Strength Magic to form a strength projectile with the appearance of a small dart with tiny wing like appendages on its side. The projectile is 10 cm in length and spans 3 cm from wing to wing. The projectile deals D-tier slashing damage and will travel up to 10 m before fading away.

[center][b]Majal Sadd [Repelling Field] [/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Maria needs tap the ground or space below her with her staff.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Area of effect
[b]Sustain:[/b] -
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 magoi
[b]Description:[/b] Maria uses Strength Magic to generate a force wave which spreads from her staff in all directions around her and pushes back anyone or anything caught within the wave to 5 m beyond the spell's maximum reach.

[center][b]Alsukun Farad [Stillness Force] [/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Maria needs to grasp her staff with both of her hands.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Hits
[b]Sustain:[/b] -
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 magoi
[b]Description:[/b] Maria uses Strength Magic to create a  smooth sphere of condensed force with a 40 cm diameter that floats in the place it was created in. When the sphere is approached by an enemy it detonates causing disorientation and dizziness to all in a 3 m radius around it.


[center][b]Shuh Alfijar [Distortion Blast] [/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Maria needs to point the tip of her staff towards her target.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage
[b]Sustain:[/b] -
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 magoi
[b]Description:[/b] Maria uses Strength Magic to shoot forward a blast of concentrated power. It is 50 cm wide and 30 cm tall. The blast deals D-tier blunt damage to those caught in it and will travel up to 7 m before dispersing fully.

[center][b]Katif Almajal [Dense Sphere] [/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Long
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Maria needs to point the tip of her staff in front of herself.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage
[b]Sustain:[/b] -
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 2 post
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 magoi
[b]Description:[/b] Maria uses Gravity Magic to gather surrounding materials (usually dust) around the tip of her staff and condensing them into a dense smooth sphere with a diameter of 20 cm which can then be fired dealing C-tier damage to anyone hit. If scaling is applied the size of the sphere scales alongside the damage, growing up to 3 m in diameter at maximum scaling. It can travel up to 20 m before the magic weakness and the sphere disperses into its materials.

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