Belladonna's starting spells

Name: Ice Spiral
Tier:D-tier
Cost: 10 Magoi
Element: Ice (Water)
Class: Offensive
Range: 10 meters
Duration: Instant
Cool-Down: 2 posts
Description: Bella summons water into her hands and turns them into tiny ice needles which she forms into a vortex like spiral which resembles a cylinder and is 5 meters long and sends it at the enemy, due to the size of the ice spikes it can only hurt the skin and the outer layers of the tissue.The attack moves at 10 m/s speed.It does D-tier damage.

Name: Frost Breath
Tier:D-tier
Cost: 10 Magoi
Element: Ice (Water)
Class: Offensive/Supplementary
Range: 10 m
Duration: 1 post
Cool-Down: 2 posts
Description: Bella focuses energy into the form of a ball on her palms which is dark blue in color and launches it at the enemy.The attack can freeze a limb and cause minor (D-tier) damage. The ball is 1 m tall and wide and is capable of moving at 10 m/s speed.The freezing effect lasts for two posts.

Name: Black Icicle
Tier:D-tier
Cost: 10 magoi
Element: Ice (water)
Class: Offensive/Supplementary
Range: 10 m
Duration: 1 post
Cool-Down: 2 posts
Description: Launches a pyramid shaped vortex of black ice shards at the enemy which  is 5 meters wide may damage the opponent and freeze a limb if they connect.The freezing effect lasts 2 posts and the attack moves at 10 m/s speed.It does D-tier damage.

Name: Icy Statue
Tier:D-tier
Cost: 10 Initial and 5 Maintenance
Element: Ice (Water)
Class: Supplementary
Range: 10 m
Duration: 1-3 posts
Cool-Down: 2-4 posts
Description: The caster summons ice statues which look the same as the original caster(175 cm tall, exact same face and body features), they are capable of movement  but they can't cast spells and are easily shattered by a D-tier attack, up to 5 statues can be summoned. Maintaining them costs 5 Magoi per post.

Name: Destructive Ice
Tier: C-tier
Cost: 20 magoi
Element: Ice (Water)
Class: Offensive
Range: 20 m
Duration: Instant
Cool-Down: 2 posts
Description:The caster summons a giant blue ice ball  which is 2 meters long and 2 meters wide with 10 cm long icicles attached to it.After firing it the sphere will follow the enemy and continously launch icicles at them. The sphere can be destroyed by a C-rank spell, the sum of the icicles generated is 10 and they each do D-tier damage, if all icicles hit it equals C-tier damage.

I like the spells you've got here, they're interesting, but they just need a little bit of tweaking.


There is going to be a lot of information below this point. Some of it isn't directly or apparently relevant to your spells, however it is all information you may want to be aware of when creating other spells as well.


Overall, while it is kind of understood that the spells movement speed is equivalent to the rank it is, it is still necessary to put that speed into the description of the spell. Therefore, all D tier spells should mention in their description that they move at 10 m/s, and all C tier spells should mention in their description that they move at 15 m/s.

As an FYI, for balance purposes, spells can only be formed near the caster so as to avoid 'the magic starts already on my opponent, they don't have a chance to defend', but it doesn't look like you have anything that would bring this concern up. Just wanted to make sure you were aware of it for the future, though.


I note that a few of your spells mention forming from your palm, which is fine, however just remember that you must cast your spell with a staff/wand.


A quick run-down on Durations, just so that you don't run into the same problem I did because I didn't understand them; instant duration means that it exists for just a moment until its original purpose was fulfilled before no longer being under your control. It does not mean that your spell forms instantly. 1 post duration means that it's a spell that could potentially last for the entirety of your post, allowing you to manipulate the spell during your post. And more than one post duration means that you can manipulate it for a few posts, which you would need to expend half the magoi of the spell on subsequent posts in order to do so.


Ice Spiral:
Please make sure to write in how large the spiral is through scale. For D tier, the scale is 5 meters. To my knowledge, after having looked at one of Yakuroro's newer techniques, that can be the size of a 5 meter radius or 5 meter diameter sphere. Since you're making a spiraling vortex, I assume that it is a cylinder. (Don't forget the speed it moves at)


Frost Breath:
The duration for the freezing should be placed in the spell, which for D tier is 2 posts. If it is also dealing damage, make sure to put the D-tier damage notifier into the description, otherwise remove the 'damaging' part. If you do have it damage and freeze, make sure the Class is listed as Offensive/Supplementary. (Don't forget the speed :D)


Black Icicle:
Same with Ice Spiral and Frost Breath. Make sure you describe the vortex as some geometrical shape, and give us an idea on how big it is. Don't forget to post the 2 post duration for the limb freezing.


Icy Statue:
This spell is about to get a huge buff that you might believe is unfair, lol. Due to the 'Amount' rules, you can actually make up to 5 of these Ice Statues with just 10 magoi/stamina. Remember your duration rules, though. If you want it to last more than one post, put something like '1-3 posts' in the duration, and '2-4 posts' in the cooldown. Also, remember that for every post after the one you summon them in, you must pay half the spell's cost to maintain them. Most people normally do something like:
10|5 Magoi/Stamina Initial|Sustained

Now, as for speech, sadly without Sound or Life magic, you would not be able to do that. I can understand movement, because you could potentially make the joints made of water, but at this current level you cannot make living golems, my apologies. (Don't forget the speed and size of these bad boys, though :D)


Destructive Ice:
This one is pretty close to being finished, and will be receiving a slight buff. The buff is that it would actually take C tier damage to destroy it, which you don't have to write in due to it being a C tier ability and there being a separate section that covers ability clashes.

Just remember to add in the size of the sphere, the rate at which it moves, and the number of icicles that it has generated. If it just has the 1 icicle, it would be able to deal C tier damage, however it could potentially have up to 10 icicles that each do D tier damage when striking individuals, and if all strike the same person it could deal C tier damage. As a fore-warning, you cannot create stipulation spells where you say something like 'This spell either creates 1 icicle that deals C tier damage or 10 icicles that each deal D tier damage or, if all hit the same opponent, C tier damage.'

Corrected and thanks for the tips and information :)

Ice Spiral
-Please mention that the damage is "D-tier" for this ability

Black Icicle
-Same as above
-This should also be Offensive/Supplementary since you have the freezing effect as well as the damage.

@Garret ~ Can you please point out the spell I had that says it can be based on radius or diameter? That is probably a mistake/error that simply didn't get caught during approval.

Done :)

Approved!

Code:

[b]Name:[/b] Ice Spiral
[b]Tier:[/b]D-tier
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi
[b]Element:[/b] Ice (Water)
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 10 meters
[b]Duration:[/b] Instant
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts
[b]Description:[/b] Bella summons water into her hands and turns them into tiny ice needles which she forms into a vortex like spiral which resembles a cylinder and is 5 meters long and sends it at the enemy, due to the size of the ice spikes it can only hurt the skin and the outer layers of the tissue.The attack moves at 10 m/s speed.It does D-tier damage.

[b]Name:[/b] Frost Breath
[b]Tier:[/b]D-tier
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi
[b]Element:[/b] Ice (Water)
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive/Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] 10 m
[b]Duration:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts
[b]Description:[/b] Bella focuses energy into the form of a ball on her palms which is dark blue in color and launches it at the enemy.The attack can freeze a limb and cause minor (D-tier) damage. The ball is 1 m tall and wide and is capable of moving at 10 m/s speed.The freezing effect lasts for two posts.

[b]Name:[/b] Black Icicle
[b]Tier:[/b]D-tier
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 magoi
[b]Element:[/b] Ice (water)
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive/Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] 10 m
[b]Duration:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts
[b]Description:[/b] Launches a pyramid shaped vortex of black ice shards at the enemy which  is 5 meters wide may damage the opponent and freeze a limb if they connect.The freezing effect lasts 2 posts and the attack moves at 10 m/s speed.It does D-tier damage.

[b]Name:[/b] Icy Statue
[b]Tier:[/b]D-tier
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Initial and 5 Maintenance
[b]Element:[/b] Ice (Water)
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] 10 m
[b]Duration:[/b] 1-3 posts
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2-4 posts
[b]Description:[/b] The caster summons ice statues which look the same as the original caster(175 cm tall, exact same face and body features), they are capable of movement  but they can't cast spells and are easily shattered by a D-tier attack, up to 5 statues can be summoned. Maintaining them costs 5 Magoi per post.

[b]Name:[/b] Destructive Ice
[b]Tier:[/b] C-tier
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 magoi
[b]Element:[/b] Ice (Water)
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 20 m
[b]Duration:[/b] Instant
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts
[b]Description:[/b]The caster summons a giant blue ice ball  which is 2 meters long and 2 meters wide with 10 cm long icicles attached to it.After firing it the sphere will follow the enemy and continously launch icicles at them. The sphere can be destroyed by a C-rank spell, the sum of the icicles generated is 10 and they each do D-tier damage, if all icicles hit it equals C-tier damage.

Don't forget to make your vault and add all your approved items. Feel free to quote the posts in my vault and copy my coding or you can set up your own!