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1Aseroth Rework. Empty Aseroth Rework. 12/12/16, 07:32 pm

Aseroth

Aseroth
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Discarding Abilities:



Lucas Style: Tātorusutansu
Tier: D-Tier
Class:Warrior
Type:Offensive
Range:Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Taking initiative to take two steps forward before drawing the blade.
Scaling: {The tier of damage dealt will increase by one for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested.}
Sustain: 0
Cooldown: 1 post
Cost: 10 Stamina :: 5 Sustain :: 0 Magoi
Description:

    Drawing the blade in a smooth fluid motion, slashing from the ground up, dealing D-Tier and below damage across the torso of an opponent.



Lucas Style:Sunēkubodi
Tier:C-Tier
Class:Warrior
Type:Supplementary/Offensive
Range: Short
Requirements/Drawbacks: Rocking back and forth going from one foot to another, like in Capoeira.
Scaling: {The tier of damage dealt will increase by one for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested.}
Sustain: 0
Cooldown: 2 post
Cost: 20 Stamina :: 10 Sustain :: 0 Magoi
Description:

    Using the momentum from the build up from rocking back and forth. Feinting an attack first, than moving behind the opponent with one fluid steps, hooking his leg to kicking at the back area. Dealing D-Tier or below damage  



Lucas Style: Tātorusunēku
Tier:C-Tier
Class:Warrior
Type: Offensive
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: Needs to be in a higher place than opponent.
Scaling: {The tier of damage dealt will increase by one for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested.}
Sustain: 0
Cooldown: 2 post
Cost: 20 Stamina :: 10 Sustain :: 0 Magoi
Description:

    Aseroth will need to be in the higher place than the enemy and jump down while bringing sword down, dealing C-tier damage if it hits



Lucas Style:Tātoruguraundosunēku
Tier:D-Tier
Class:Warrior
Type:Supplementary
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Being able to cut through and into the ground.
Scaling: {The distance the ability can travel may increase by 5m for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested.}
Sustain: 0
Cooldown: 1 post
Cost: 10 Stamina :: 5 Sustain :: 0 Magoi
Description:

    The user strikes with the tip of the blade into the ground, sending debris at opponents out of range, blinding their line of sight. The range of the debris travel is 2 meters and last for one post. 



Lucas Style:Tātorusheru no sunēkusheddo
Tier:C-Tier
Class:Warrior
Type:Defensive
Range:Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Requires a open hand, no items or weapons possessed. This may lead to the user hand to bleed for 1 post.
Scaling: {The tier of damage blocked will increase by one for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested}
Sustain: 0
Cooldown: 2 post
Cost: 20 Stamina :: 10 Sustain :: 0 Magoi
Description:

    This is a defensive move in where the user grasps and catches the enemy blade in his/her bare hand. Catching C-Tier Slashs/Stabs/Etc from others with damage scaling to increase it if needed.



Last edited by Aseroth on 14/12/16, 07:04 am; edited 7 times in total

2Aseroth Rework. Empty Re: Aseroth Rework. 12/12/16, 08:24 pm

Duquin

Duquin
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Lucas Style: Tātorusutansu:

Requirements should include some kind of physical start up action or tell.

Description says this deals C-tier damage. But it's only a D-tier ability.

You also mention constantly moving from one foot to another but this is a single slash. That sounds a bit irrelevant to the ability.


Lucas Style:Sunēkubodi:

Requirements just say the name of a different ability.

The type is supplementary, but you take offensive action too so this ability would need to be C-tier in order to by a hybrid type of offensive/supplementary.

There is too much going on in one single ability here. You want to do handstands, cartwheels, and attacks all in one D-tier ability. D-tier abilities are supposed to be simple beginner level stuff. Not complex.


Lucas Style: Tātorusunēku:

This would also need to be C-tier since it is offensive/supplementary. The jump would be the supplementary aspect.

You would also need to state how high you jump or how far.


Lucas Style:Tātoruguraundosunēku:

D-tier force isn't knocking anyone out. At most you could use this to blind someone for 1 post. But you can't knock them out with it.


Lucas Style:Tātorusheru no sunēkusheddo:

Speed of the other person shouldn't matter due to anticipation. Even someone with D-tier speed can manage to block an A-tier speed character's attack via timing.

What's important here is the tier of attack you are bocking, that said, you should reaaaaaally have damage scaling here to increase the tier of damage you can block with this.

3Aseroth Rework. Empty Re: Aseroth Rework. 12/12/16, 08:48 pm

Aseroth

Aseroth
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Edited with your Advice

Lucas Style:Sunēkubodi:
Changed it to an counter attacking kick.

4Aseroth Rework. Empty Re: Aseroth Rework. 13/12/16, 10:56 pm

Ariel

Ariel
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A-Tier


  • Lucas Style:Sunēkubodi


    • I'm a little confused as to how you're going to scale the hit count.





  • Lucas Style: Tātoruguraundosunēku:


    • How far is the max range that the debris can travel to?
    • How long does it take for the debris to clear up?






Lucas Style: Tātorusutansu:
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[center][b]Lucas Style: Tātorusutansu[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D-Tier
[b]Class:[/b]Warrior
[b]Type:[/b]Supplementary/Offensive
[b]Range:[/b]Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Taking initiative to take two steps forward before drawing the blade.
[b]Scaling:[/b] {The tier of damage dealt will increase by one for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested.}
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina :: 5 Sustain :: 0 Magoi
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Drawing the blade in a smooth fluid motion, slashing from the ground up, dealing D-Tier and below damage across the torso of an opponent.[/list]

Lucas Style: Tātorusunēku
Code:
[center][b]Lucas Style: Tātorusunēku[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Stable footing to perform the jump.
[b]Scaling:[/b] {The tier of damage dealt will increase by one for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested.}
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 2 post
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Stamina :: 10 Sustain :: 0 Magoi
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]The user jumps into the air getting into an higher position than his opponent, using the downward momentum to strengthen a two-handed stab toward the shoulder or head. Height of the jump is at least 5 ft above the ground, and distance of 2-8 meters.[/list]

Lucas Style:Tātorusheru no sunēkusheddo: I changed the range to close because, um, I'm pretty sure people's arms aren't +3m long. If there is a reason you had it as medium you're welcome to say something.
Code:
[center][b]Lucas Style:Tātorusheru no sunēkusheddo [/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Type:[/b] Defensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Requires a open hand, not being held in his hands. This may or may not make him lose his fingers as it's dangerous.
[b]Scaling:[/b] {The tier of damage blocked will increase by one for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested}
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 2 post
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Stamina :: 10 Sustain :: 0 Magoi
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
This is a defensive move in where the user grasps and catches the enemy blade in his/her bare hand. Catching C-Tier Slashs/Stabs/Etc from others with damage scaling to increase it if needed.[/list]

5Aseroth Rework. Empty Re: Aseroth Rework. 13/12/16, 11:45 pm

Aseroth

Aseroth
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β-Tier

Edited and added the range for the debris. For clearing up the  debris from the ground, I don't think it would  clear up unless it was kicked aside or sliced apart something of  that degree. For the hit count I plan to change to damage.

6Aseroth Rework. Empty Re: Aseroth Rework. 14/12/16, 06:36 am

Noir Ecryola

Noir Ecryola
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Sorry, I need you to edit it all again.

Lucas Style: Tātorusutansu: Is this going to have offensive and supplementary type? D-tier cant have two type, two types skill can only be created for C-tier's skill and up. Do you mean this will be offensive only?

Lucas Style:Sunēkubodi: Because you are using offensive/supplementary skill, all the effect will be halved. Reduce the steps into 1 step and decrease the damage to D-tier.

Lucas Style: Tātorusunēku : I dont really get this skill, so you will jump to enhance the strength of your stab? I dont get how damage scaling will work on this ability as well

Lucas Style:Tātoruguraundosunēku: Range should be short. Decrease the range to 2m, state it will last for 1 post.

Lucas Style:Tātorusheru no sunēkusheddo: This is pretty confusing but i think i understand what you meant. Are you going to clap your hands together to catch someone's blade? or you want to use one hand to catch and grip someone's blade? Because if it is the later one, then you need to add drawbacks of getting your hand bleeding for 1 post.

7Aseroth Rework. Empty Re: Aseroth Rework. 14/12/16, 07:04 am

Aseroth

Aseroth
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Edited according to Noir advice

8Aseroth Rework. Empty Re: Aseroth Rework. 14/12/16, 08:30 am

Noir Ecryola

Noir Ecryola
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Ω-Tier

Did some minor edits to all the skills, bump if you approve with the edits

Code:
[center][b]Lucas Style: Tātorusutansu[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D-Tier
[b]Class:[/b]Warrior
[b]Type:[/b]Offensive
[b]Range:[/b]Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Taking initiative to take two steps forward before drawing the blade.
[b]Scaling:[/b] {The tier of damage dealt will increase by one for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested.}
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina :: 5 Sustain :: 0 Magoi
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Drawing the blade in a smooth fluid motion, slashing from the ground up, dealing D-Tier and below damage across the torso of an opponent. [/list]


[center][b]Lucas Style:Sunēkubodi[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b]C-Tier
[b]Class:[/b]Warrior
[b]Type:[/b]Supplementary/Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Rocking back and forth going from one foot to another, like in Capoeira.
[b]Scaling:[/b] {The tier of damage dealt will increase by one for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested.}
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 2 post
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Stamina :: 10 Sustain :: 0 Magoi
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Using the momentum from the build up from rocking back and forth. Feinting an attack first, than moving behind the opponent with one fluid steps, hooking his leg to kicking at the back area. Dealing D-Tier or below damage  [/list]


[center][b]Lucas Style: Tātorusunēku[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b]C-Tier
[b]Class:[/b]Warrior
[b]Type: Offensive[/b]
[b]Range: Close[/b]
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Needs to be in a higher place than opponent.
[b]Scaling:[/b] {The tier of damage dealt will increase by one for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested.}
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 2 post
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Stamina :: 10 Sustain :: 0 Magoi
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Aseroth will need to be in the higher place than the enemy and jump down while bringing sword down, dealing C-tier damage if it hits[/list]


[center][b]Lucas Style:Tātoruguraundosunēku[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b]D-Tier
[b]Class:[/b]Warrior
[b]Type:[/b]Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Being able to cut through and into the ground.
[b]Scaling:[/b] {The distance the ability can travel may increase by 5m for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested.}
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina :: 5 Sustain :: 0 Magoi
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
The user strikes with the tip of the blade into the ground, sending debris at opponents out of range, blinding their line of sight. The range of the debris travel is 2 meters and last for one post. [/list]


[center][b]Lucas Style:Tātorusheru no sunēkusheddo [/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b]C-Tier
[b]Class:[/b]Warrior
[b]Type:[/b]Defensive
[b]Range:[/b]Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Requires a open hand, no items or weapons possessed. This may lead to the user hand to bleed for 1 post and will bleed even more, slowly making the limb numb for the next 2 posts unless the bleeding is being stopped.
[b]Scaling:[/b] {The tier of damage blocked will increase by one for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested}
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 2 post
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Stamina :: 10 Sustain :: 0 Magoi
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
This is a defensive move in where the user grasps and catches the enemy blade in his/her bare hand. Catching C-Tier Slashs/Stabs/Etc from others with damage scaling to increase it if needed.[/list]

9Aseroth Rework. Empty Re: Aseroth Rework. 14/12/16, 08:33 am

Aseroth

Aseroth
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β-Tier

Bump :D

10Aseroth Rework. Empty Re: Aseroth Rework. 14/12/16, 08:39 am

Noir Ecryola

Noir Ecryola
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Ω-Tier

Approved for training ^^

Code:
[center][b]Lucas Style: Tātorusutansu[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D-Tier
[b]Class:[/b]Warrior
[b]Type:[/b]Offensive
[b]Range:[/b]Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Taking initiative to take two steps forward before drawing the blade.
[b]Scaling:[/b] {The tier of damage dealt will increase by one for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested.}
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina :: 5 Sustain :: 0 Magoi
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Drawing the blade in a smooth fluid motion, slashing from the ground up, dealing D-Tier and below damage across the torso of an opponent. [/list]


[center][b]Lucas Style:Sunēkubodi[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b]C-Tier
[b]Class:[/b]Warrior
[b]Type:[/b]Supplementary/Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Rocking back and forth going from one foot to another, like in Capoeira.
[b]Scaling:[/b] {The tier of damage dealt will increase by one for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested.}
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 2 post
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Stamina :: 10 Sustain :: 0 Magoi
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Using the momentum from the build up from rocking back and forth. Feinting an attack first, than moving behind the opponent with one fluid steps, hooking his leg to kicking at the back area. Dealing D-Tier or below damage  [/list]


[center][b]Lucas Style: Tātorusunēku[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b]C-Tier
[b]Class:[/b]Warrior
[b]Type: Offensive[/b]
[b]Range: Close[/b]
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Needs to be in a higher place than opponent.
[b]Scaling:[/b] {The tier of damage dealt will increase by one for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested.}
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 2 post
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Stamina :: 10 Sustain :: 0 Magoi
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Aseroth will need to be in the higher place than the enemy and jump down while bringing sword down, dealing C-tier damage if it hits[/list]


[center][b]Lucas Style:Tātoruguraundosunēku[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b]D-Tier
[b]Class:[/b]Warrior
[b]Type:[/b]Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Being able to cut through and into the ground.
[b]Scaling:[/b] {The distance the ability can travel may increase by 5m for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested.}
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina :: 5 Sustain :: 0 Magoi
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
The user strikes with the tip of the blade into the ground, sending debris at opponents out of range, blinding their line of sight. The range of the debris travel is 2 meters and last for one post. [/list]


[center][b]Lucas Style:Tātorusheru no sunēkusheddo [/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b]C-Tier
[b]Class:[/b]Warrior
[b]Type:[/b]Defensive
[b]Range:[/b]Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Requires a open hand, no items or weapons possessed. This may lead to the user hand to bleed for 1 post and will bleed even more, slowly making the limb numb for the next 2 posts unless the bleeding is being stopped.
[b]Scaling:[/b] {The tier of damage blocked will increase by one for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested}
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 2 post
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Stamina :: 10 Sustain :: 0 Magoi
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
This is a defensive move in where the user grasps and catches the enemy blade in his/her bare hand. Catching C-Tier Slashs/Stabs/Etc from others with damage scaling to increase it if needed.[/list]

11Aseroth Rework. Empty Re: Aseroth Rework. 25/01/17, 06:07 pm

Aseroth

Aseroth
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12Aseroth Rework. Empty Re: Aseroth Rework. 25/01/17, 09:56 pm

Rima Fahim

Rima Fahim
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A-Tier

Lucas Style: Tātorusutansu and Lucas Style:Tātoruguraundosunēku training has been APPROVED.

Everything looks fine to me! I never really thought about training anything in a social thread, definitely interesting. Anyways, have fun with your new abilities ^^

Code:


[center][b]Lucas Style: Tātorusutansu[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D-Tier
[b]Class:[/b]Warrior
[b]Type:[/b]Offensive
[b]Range:[/b]Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Taking initiative to take two steps forward before drawing the blade.
[b]Scaling:[/b] {The tier of damage dealt will increase by one for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested.}
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina :: 5 Sustain :: 0 Magoi
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Drawing the blade in a smooth fluid motion, slashing from the ground up, dealing D-Tier and below damage across the torso of an opponent. [/list]

[center][b]Lucas Style:Tātoruguraundosunēku[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b]D-Tier
[b]Class:[/b]Warrior
[b]Type:[/b]Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Being able to cut through and into the ground.
[b]Scaling:[/b] {The distance the ability can travel may increase by 5m for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested.}
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina :: 5 Sustain :: 0 Magoi
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
The user strikes with the tip of the blade into the ground, sending debris at opponents out of range, blinding their line of sight. The range of the debris travel is 2 meters and last for one post. [/list]

13Aseroth Rework. Empty Re: Aseroth Rework. 27/01/17, 12:06 am

Aseroth

Aseroth
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β-Tier

14Aseroth Rework. Empty Re: Aseroth Rework. 27/01/17, 12:14 am

Rima Fahim

Rima Fahim
A-Tier
A-Tier

Lucas Style:Sunēkubodi, Lucas Style: Tātorusunēku and Lucas Style:Tātorusheru no sunēkusheddo training has been APPROVED through x3 C-Tier vouchers! Remember to add the updated abilities to your vault and remove the old ones. ^^

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[center][b]Lucas Style:Sunēkubodi[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b]C-Tier
[b]Class:[/b]Warrior
[b]Type:[/b]Supplementary/Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Short
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Rocking back and forth going from one foot to another, like in Capoeira.
[b]Scaling:[/b] {The tier of damage dealt will increase by one for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested.}
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 2 post
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Stamina :: 10 Sustain :: 0 Magoi
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Using the momentum from the build up from rocking back and forth. Feinting an attack first, than moving behind the opponent with one fluid steps, hooking his leg to kicking at the back area. Dealing D-Tier or below damage  [/list]


[center][b]Lucas Style: Tātorusunēku[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b]C-Tier
[b]Class:[/b]Warrior
[b]Type: Offensive[/b]
[b]Range: Close[/b]
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Needs to be in a higher place than opponent.
[b]Scaling:[/b] {The tier of damage dealt will increase by one for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested.}
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 2 post
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Stamina :: 10 Sustain :: 0 Magoi
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Aseroth will need to be in the higher place than the enemy and jump down while bringing sword down, dealing C-tier damage if it hits[/list]

[center][b]Lucas Style:Tātorusheru no sunēkusheddo [/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b]C-Tier
[b]Class:[/b]Warrior
[b]Type:[/b]Defensive
[b]Range:[/b]Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Requires a open hand, no items or weapons possessed. This may lead to the user hand to bleed for 1 post.
[b]Scaling:[/b] {The tier of damage blocked will increase by one for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested}
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 2 post
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Stamina :: 10 Sustain :: 0 Magoi
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
This is a defensive move in where the user grasps and catches the enemy blade in his/her bare hand. Catching C-Tier Slashs/Stabs/Etc from others with damage scaling to increase it if needed.[/list]

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