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Hannah's first set of trainable spells

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Hannah Voight

Hannah Voight
C-Tier
C-Tier

Sweeper
Tier: C tier
Class: Magician
Type: Supplementary
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Hannah must swing or twirl her staff/wand in a broad manner
Scaling: Every 10 magoi put into this spell will increase the force of the spell by a single tier, meaning you will need higher tier in strength or defense to ignore it.
Sustain:  0
Cool Down: 2 post
Cost: 20 Magoi
Description: Hannah will order the wind within a 3 meter radius of her to press downward. This will push anybody minus Hannah, face down onto the ground for a single post. Having a C tier strength or a C rank defensive skill will allow you to bypass this


Lift Off
Tier: D Tier
Class: Magician
Type: Supplementary
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Must hold her staff/wand. If a staff she hits the ground or area beneath her with its base. If a wand she points it upward.
Scaling: For every 10 magoi put into the spell Hannah can launch a person an additional 3 meters into the air
Sustain:  0
Cool Down: 1 Post
Cost: 10 Magoi
Description: Hannah will cause the air beneath a target that is within 3 meters to be launched 5 meters into the air. The target will be given a slight warning in the form of a buildup of dust around their ankles the moment before lift off.


Knock Around Blast
Tier: C Tier
Class: Magician
Type: Offensive/ Supplemetary  
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Must aim with her staff/wand and utter the spell's name
Scaling: Every 10 magoi put in the spell will increase the tier of damage by one.
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 2 Post
Cost: 20 magoi
Description: Hannah will target a 1 meter area within 5 meters of her, the wind will blast this 1 meter area relentlessly pushing them around in a counterclockwise manner while dealing D tier damage. This skill is mainly used to disorient a person setting up Hannah or her allies with a follow up attack.


Blown Away
Tier: D Tier
Class: Magician
Type: Supplementary
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Must say the word "Blow!" When casting a spell as well as making a flick motion with her wand or wave with her staff. She must also simultaneous cast an offensive spell with this which can be taxing on a magician's body.
Scaling: With every 10 magoi put into this spell it will knock a person an additional 2 meters away.
Sustain: 1
Cool Down: 1 Post
Cost: 10 magoi / 5 to sustain
Description:  Hannah will command the wind to cause a single one of her offensive spells to knock an enemy back 2 additional meters.


Shredding Stance
Tier: C Tier
Class: Magician
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Requirements/Drawbacks: Hannah must say the word "Shred" she will slam the butt of her staff into the ground beneath her or flick her wand.
Scaling: For ever 10 magoi put into the spell it will gain a tier in damage
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 2 Post
Cost: 20 magoi
Description: Hannah will cause the wind around her to spin at an intense rate slicing anything that is within a meter of her dealing C tier damage



Last edited by Hannah Voight on 13/12/16, 08:44 pm; edited 4 times in total

Duquin

Duquin
A-Tier
A-Tier

Just a small thing for all your abilities, please add the sustain costs. For example:

Cost: 10 magoi | 5 sustained

ALSO~ Your C-tier abilities should have 2 post cool downs, not 1 post.

One more thing! All spells must have their names spoken, and not half of the name like some of your requirements suggest. So needing to speak the spell name is kind of a given and doesn't need to be on your requirements.




Sweeper:

Because this is onmi-directional, I'd like to nerf the range to 3m. If you were aiming it in a cone or a straight line, then 5m would be more acceptable, but that much space in all directions is a bit strong for a C-tier move.


Lift Off:

This should also be dropped to 3m, although that's just due to the ability tier.


Knock Around Blast:

Could you clarify if they are being pushed around in like a 1m circle where they stood? Or around a 5m radius with you at its center?

Also, you can't deal damage AND push someone without making this an offensive/supplementary ability. Which means the power of the ability must be split between the two types. I.E. smaller pushing and D-tier damage.


Blown Away:

Set the base amount of knockback to 2m. You can still scale it up higher from there though.


Shredding Stance:

This needs to state the damage dealt.


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Thank you all, for everything.

Hannah Voight

Hannah Voight
C-Tier
C-Tier

Okay! Edits made


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Diana Corvus

Diana Corvus
A-Tier
A-Tier

Blown Away and Shredding Stance need physical action as their requirements! As Duquin stated-- you need to speak the spell regardless so these aren't good requirements.

The rest of these skills are approved for training! Please bump this thread with a link to the training when it's completed! The codes are here for future convenience.



Sweeper
Code:
[center][b]Sweeper[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C tier
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Hannah must swing or twirl her staff/wand in a broad manner
[b]Scaling:[/b] Every 10 magoi put into this spell will increase the force of the spell by a single tier, meaning you will need higher tier in strength or defense to ignore it.
[b]Sustain:[/b]  0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 2 post
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Magoi
[b]Description:[/b] Hannah will order the wind within a 3 meter radius of her to press downward. This will push anybody minus Hannah, face down onto the ground for a single post. Having a C tier strength or a C rank defensive skill will allow you to bypass this

Lift Off
Code:
[center][b]Lift Off [/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Must hold her staff/wand. If a staff she hits the ground or area beneath her with its base. If a wand she points it upward.
[b]Scaling:[/b] For every 10 magoi put into the spell Hannah can launch a person an additional 3 meters into the air
[b]Sustain:[/b]  0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 Post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi
[b]Description:[/b] Hannah will cause the air beneath a target that is within 3 meters to be launched 5 meters into the air. The target will be given a slight warning in the form of a buildup of dust around their ankles the moment before lift off.

Knock Around Blast
Code:
[center][b]Knock Around Blast[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive/ Supplemetary  
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Must aim with her staff/wand and utter the spell's name
[b]Scaling:[/b] Every 10 magoi put in the spell will increase the tier of damage by one.
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 2 Post
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 magoi
[b]Description:[/b] Hannah will target a 1 meter area within 5 meters of her, the wind will blast this 1 meter area relentlessly pushing them around in a counterclockwise manner while dealing D tier damage. This skill is mainly used to disorient a person setting up Hannah or her allies with a follow up attack.


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tracker

Hannah Voight

Hannah Voight
C-Tier
C-Tier

Okay I added some drawbacks


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Diana Corvus

Diana Corvus
A-Tier
A-Tier

The rest of these are approved for training with small edits. :)

Please bump when you are done with the training.

Blown Away
Code:
[center][b]Blown Away[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Must make a flick motion with her wand or wave with her staff.
[b]Scaling:[/b] With every 10 magoi put into this spell it will knock a person an additional 2 meters away.
[b]Sustain:[/b] 1
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 Post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 magoi / 5 to sustain
[b]Description:[/b]  Hannah will command the wind to cause a single one of her offensive spells to knock an enemy back 2 additional meters.

Shredding Stance
Code:
[center][b]Shredding Stance[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Short
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Hannah must slam the butt of her staff into the ground beneath her or flick her wand.
[b]Scaling:[/b] For ever 10 magoi put into the spell it will gain a tier in damage
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 2 Post
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 magoi
[b]Description:[/b] Hannah will cause the wind around her to spin at an intense rate slicing anything that is within a meter of her dealing C tier damage


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Noir Ecryola

Noir Ecryola
Ω-Tier
Ω-Tier

Training approved for Lift off [D], Blown Away [D], and Shredding Stance[C] via this ability voucher

Add to vault:

Code:

[center][b]Lift Off [/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Must hold her staff/wand. If a staff she hits the ground or area beneath her with its base. If a wand she points it upward.
[b]Scaling:[/b] For every 10 magoi put into the spell Hannah can launch a person an additional 3 meters into the air
[b]Sustain:[/b]  0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 Post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi
[b]Description:[/b] Hannah will cause the air beneath a target that is within 3 meters to be launched 5 meters into the air. The target will be given a slight warning in the form of a buildup of dust around their ankles the moment before lift off.

[center][b]Blown Away[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Must make a flick motion with her wand or wave with her staff.
[b]Scaling:[/b] With every 10 magoi put into this spell it will knock a person an additional 2 meters away.
[b]Sustain:[/b] 1
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 Post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 magoi / 5 to sustain
[b]Description:[/b]  Hannah will command the wind to cause a single one of her offensive spells to knock an enemy back 2 additional meters.

[center][b]Shredding Stance[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Short
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Hannah must slam the butt of her staff into the ground beneath her or flick her wand.
[b]Scaling:[/b] For ever 10 magoi put into the spell it will gain a tier in damage
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 2 Post
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 magoi
[b]Description:[/b] Hannah will cause the wind around her to spin at an intense rate slicing anything that is within a meter of her dealing C tier damage


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Hannah's first set of trainable spells G5OZoqx

Hannah Voight

Hannah Voight
C-Tier
C-Tier


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Duquin

Duquin
A-Tier
A-Tier

There is no clear demarcation for where one training word count ends and the other begins. The rules state that this must be done. You may use the word count given for one of the abilities, but not both.

An example of what you needed to do is to post the training word count for one. Then in your next post, or using some kind of break in the middle of the post, start counting a new word count separate from the previous one.


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Thank you all, for everything.

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