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Hannah's Starter Spells [Done]

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1Hannah's Starter Spells [Done] Empty Hannah's Starter Spells [Done] 11/12/16, 10:20 pm

Hannah Voight

Hannah Voight
C-Tier
C-Tier

Dust Cloud
Tier: D tier
Class: Magician
Type: Supplementary
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Hannah must swing or twirl her staff/wand.
Scaling: Every 10 magoi put into this spell will cause the cloud to gain an additional 5 meters in radius.
Sustain:  1 post
Cool Down: 1 post
Cost: 10 Magoi + sustained cost
Description: Hannah will cause a cloud of dust and dirt to cover an area around her making it nearly impossible to see, while shapes are able to be made out they are rather generic and hard to distinguish. The cloud will cover an area of 5 meters and will linger for a post.


Double Jump
Tier: D Tier
Class: Magician
Type: Supplementary
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Must hold her staff/wand. If a staff she hits the ground or area beneath her with its base. If a wand she points it upward.
Scaling: For every 10 magoi put into the spell Hannah can go 5 meters higher
Sustain:  0
Cool Down: 1 Post
Cost: 10 Magoi
Description: Hannah will cause the air beneath her to propel her up 5 meters


Curved Wind
Tier: D Tier
Class: Magician
Type: Defensive  
Range: Self
Requirements/Drawbacks: Must be holding her staff/wand in front of her in a defensive line stance
Scaling: Every 10 magoi put in the spell will block an additional D rank
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 1 Post
Cost: 10 magoi
Description: Hannah causes the wind to push aside an attack coming towards her. The attack woll move around her leaving her unscathed. It can fully block a D rank skill and soften the blow of a C rank by half.  


Wind Slicer V1
Tier: D Tier
Class: Magician
Type: Offensive
Range: medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Must aim with her staff/wand
Scaling: With every 10 magoi put into this spell the damage will increase by a tier
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 1 Post
Cost: 10 magoi
Description:  Hannah will bend the wind to her will flinging it towards her enemies dealing a slicing like damage that is D tier. This goes up to 5 meters


Gale Blast
Tier: C Tier
Class: Magician
Type: Offensive
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Hannah must aim with her staff/wand
Scaling: For ever 10 magoi put into the spell it will gain a tier in damage
Sustain: Instant
Cool Down: 2 Post
Cost: 20 magoi
Description: Hannah will summon a powerful gale of wind that is roughly 3 meters in width. She will launch the wind in a direction that will cause a blunt style type of C tier damage. The spell can go up to 7 meters away



Last edited by hannah voight on 12/12/16, 10:45 am; edited 3 times in total

Ariel

Ariel
A-Tier
A-Tier

Notes:

  • The range should say close, short medium, or long.

  • Generally, the exact range detail is placed in the description.

  • All D-Tier abilities have a cool down of one post.
    Since these are new abilities that have never been sustained, just put '-' or '0' in the sustain section.


  • Dust Cloud

    • Don't forget to add how long the cloud of dust lasts. This should be 1 post.


  • Double Jump

    • 'Must hold her staff/wand' isn't a sufficient requirement. There should probably be some sort of motion involved.

    • The detail about the speed doesn't seem too important in this particular ability. You're also using an undefined variable, 'speed of a D-Tier skill'. On Magi World, speed is a bit undeveloped concept x_x.

    • The height of the jump should probably be 5 meters.



  • Feather Fall

    • This kind of ability should probably have a max height it can slow. So if she is falling higher than 5 meters, even if she uses this ability she will still get hurt.

    • Going off this, for scaling perhaps you could increase the height it can work at? My little suggestion that you're welcome to ignore ^^.

Hannah Voight

Hannah Voight
C-Tier
C-Tier

Okay I think I fixed everything!

Noir Ecryola

Noir Ecryola
Ω-Tier
Ω-Tier

I made some minor edits, bump if you agree with the changes ^^

Code:
[center][b]Dust Cloud [/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D tier
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Hannah must swing or twirl her staff/wand.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Every 10 magoi put into this spell will cause the cloud to gain an additional 5 meters in radius.
[b]Sustain:[/b]  1 post
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi  | 5
[b]Description:[/b] Hannah will cause a cloud of dust and dirt to cover an area around her making it nearly impossible to see, while shapes are able to be made out they are rather generic and hard to distinguish. The cloud will cover an area of 5 meters and will linger for a post.


[center][b]Double Jump[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Must hold her staff/wand. If a staff she hits the ground or area beneath her with its base. If a wand she points it upward.
[b]Scaling:[/b] For every 10 magoi put into the spell Hannah can go 5 meters higher
[b]Sustain:[/b]  0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 Post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi | 5
[b]Description:[/b] Hannah will cause the air beneath her to propel her up 5 meters


[center][b]Curved Wind [/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Defensive  
[b]Range:[/b] Self
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Must be holding her staff/wand in front of her in a defensive line stance
[b]Scaling:[/b] The tier of damage parried will increase by one for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested.
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 Post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 magoi | 5
[b]Description:[/b] Hannah causes the wind to push aside an attack coming towards her. The attack will move around her leaving her unscathed. Capable to parry against up to D-tier damage.


[center][b]Wind Slicer V1 [/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Must aim with her staff/wand
[b]Scaling:[/b] With every 10 magoi put into this spell the damage will increase by a tier
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 Post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 magoi | 5
[b]Description:[/b]  Hannah will bend the wind to her will flinging it towards her enemies dealing a slicing like damage that is D tier. The spell will attack anyone within 5 meter radius from the user.

Gale Blast I left this one to ask if you want to keep the pushing away effect because it will reduce the damage dealt into D-tier as this spell is classified as double class type: Offensive/Supplementary. All double class skill will have halved effect and damage.

Hannah Voight

Hannah Voight
C-Tier
C-Tier

I'm okay with your changes and I've edited Gale Blast to just dealing damage!

Sooo hopefully final bump!

Noir Ecryola

Noir Ecryola
Ω-Tier
Ω-Tier

Hannah's Starter Spells [Done] Approval_zpsoloj6ntd


Approved~
Add to vault ^^

Code:
[center][b]Dust Cloud [/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D tier
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Hannah must swing or twirl her staff/wand.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Every 10 magoi put into this spell will cause the cloud to gain an additional 5 meters in radius.
[b]Sustain:[/b]  1 post
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi  | 5
[b]Description:[/b] Hannah will cause a cloud of dust and dirt to cover an area around her making it nearly impossible to see, while shapes are able to be made out they are rather generic and hard to distinguish. The cloud will cover an area of 5 meters and will linger for a post.


[center][b]Double Jump[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Must hold her staff/wand. If a staff she hits the ground or area beneath her with its base. If a wand she points it upward.
[b]Scaling:[/b] For every 10 magoi put into the spell Hannah can go 5 meters higher
[b]Sustain:[/b]  0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 Post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi | 5
[b]Description:[/b] Hannah will cause the air beneath her to propel her up 5 meters


[center][b]Curved Wind [/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Defensive 
[b]Range:[/b] Self
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Must be holding her staff/wand in front of her in a defensive line stance
[b]Scaling:[/b] The tier of damage parried will increase by one for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested.
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 Post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 magoi | 5
[b]Description:[/b] Hannah causes the wind to push aside an attack coming towards her. The attack will move around her leaving her unscathed. Capable to parry against up to D-tier damage.


[center][b]Wind Slicer V1 [/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Must aim with her staff/wand
[b]Scaling:[/b] With every 10 magoi put into this spell the damage will increase by a tier
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 Post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 magoi | 5
[b]Description:[/b]  Hannah will bend the wind to her will flinging it towards her enemies dealing a slicing like damage that is D tier. The spell will attack anyone within 5 meter radius from the user.

[center][b]Gale Blast[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Hannah must aim with her staff/wand
[b]Scaling:[/b] For ever 10 magoi put into the spell it will gain a tier in damage
[b]Sustain:[/b] Instant
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 2 Post
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 magoi
[b]Description:[/b] Hannah will summon a powerful gale of wind that is roughly 3 meters in width. She will launch the wind in a direction that will cause a blunt style type of C tier damage. The spell can go up to 7 meters away

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