Kuro D'ykh Starter Spells

C - Teir

Name: Thanatos Gift: Unholy Spirits
Tier:C
Cost: 20 Magoi - 10 magoi sustain cost
Element: Life
Class: Offensive
Range: 20 Meters
Duration: Two Posts
Cool-Down: Three Posts
Description:Upon Raising Mawth into the air, black mist began to swirl around his staff before giving off a purple flash. Once the flash is gone an shadowy figure rises from Kuro's shadow which appearing as a sinister, spectral figure robed in darkness. They have no visual features or appendages, except for their glowing red eyes and ghastly claws. The shadow is ten meters in Scale and deals C rank damage once every post and move at 15 m/s. The shadow acts on it's own will but protects Kuro as a first priority, so if he is attacked the spirit will change targets.

D - Teir

Name: Thanatos Gift: Roots of the Underworld
Tier:D
Cost: 10 Magoi
Element: Life
Class: Supplementary
Range: 10 Meters in Diameter ( AOE ) - 5 Targets in the AOE
Duration: One post
Cool-Down: two posts
Description: Upon Raising Mawth into the air, purple mist swirl around his staff before giving off a purple flash. After the flash the plant life in the AOE will target 5 people and bind them as black roots emerge from the ground at 10 m/s. D teir strentgh is required to break free.

Name: Thanatos Gift: Hell Canine
Tier:D
Cost: 10 Magoi - 5 magoi sustain cost
Element: Life
Class: Supplementary
Range: 10 meters
Duration: Two posts
Cool-Down: Three posts
Description: With Mawth glowing purple, Kuro tapped the bottom of his staff on the ground, sending out a wave of purple light into the ground. By collecting microbes and minerals from the ground (and a little bit of kudos dead skin cells) a second later five creatures emerge from the ground, it appears as skinless, heavily muscled canines with fresh blood dripping from their bodies. As large dogs, they are indeed very powerful, being able to run 10 m/s constantly and deal D - teir damage. The dogs' heads have no apparent eyes or ears.

Name: Thanatos Gift: Rotten Regeneration
Tier:D
Cost: 10
Element: Life
Class: Supplementary
Range: 10 Meters in Diameter (AOE)
Duration: one post
Cool-Down: two posts
Description: After stabbing the ground with his staff an pulse of purple light emits from his body to a ten meter radius. Once the light disappears those (up to five people) with one D - teir damage such as cuts, brusies, and minor trauma are healed including his summoned creatures.

Name: Thanatos Gift: Creeper
Tier:D
Cost: 10 magoi - 5 magoi sustain cost
Element: Life
Class: Supplementary
Range: 10 Meters in Diameter (AOE)
Duration: Two Posts
Cool-Down: Three posts
Description: As his staff glow a soft purple five large, cockroach-like insect with three pairs of legs and two long "antenna" from the back with what resembles a human face underneath its head with small wings on it's back crawling out of his sleeve from his dead skin cells. The creepers act as sentry's as they can relay information to Kuro via beating the area beneath it with its attenas which create soft thumping noise. Since they are all physically link one stays on his body so he can revive the message from the other creepers via the main creeper crawling up to his neck and the "faces" groans out the infomation in his ear. This is useful for alerting him of nearby enemies, infomation gathering, or knowing when someone is going to enter the room where he is studying. It's able to crawl over dry surfaces and fly at 10 m/s.

Okay so it seems like you've got some misconceptions about life magic, but that's alright we'll get things cleared up easily enough.

Thanatos Gift: Unholy Spirits:
-Here you're summoning spirits, but life magic isn't really about summoning. Besides, Aladdin needed solomon's wisdom to pull "spirits" from the great flow so unless you're a magi something along those lines isn't really applicable.
-In order to get a similar effect you could use life magic on your shadow to animate it. This should allow you to keep the same general spell without having to change it too much. Just alter the wording so instead of summoning a spirit you are animating your shadow.
-Poison is only available to poison mages and Dexterity users. To gain poison magic you must either pick it as your primary or gain it later as your third magic type(since your second is pre-chosen).
-Your duration should not exceed your cool down and generally should always be at least one post less.
-Spells lasting more than one turn require a sustained cost which is half of the original cost per turn.
-One last thing, if it has no limbs or anything, how is it able to attack to deal damage?
-This is missing a movement speed.

Thanatos Gift: Shroud of Insanity:
-This doesn't really seem like a life magic spell. It seems like you're just using black ruhk which unless you're a black magi, you couldn't really control them in that way to that extent.
-In order to get a similar affect you could have life magic case a replication of cells in a targets brain in areas which cause basically the same side effects such as headaches and hallucinations. Alternatively, hallucinations and such would be more along the lines of sound or light magic.
-Even if you make this an AOE, you'd be limited on the amount of targets you can hit. For D-tier that would be 5 targets.
-Once again, duration can't exceed the cool down and should be at least one post less. You'd also need a sustained cost for each turn after the activation equal to half the original cost.

Thanatos Gift: Hell Canine:
-Same cooldown/duration/sustained cost things mentioned above.
-Please mention somewhere that you are creating these from microbes in the ground. If you're just making them from the ground then you'd simply be animating rock/soil which would not create flesh and blood creatures. Honestly, microbes in the ground are more plant-life so I'd suggest saying you create them from your own dead skin cells or something else flesh-based.

Thanatos Gift: Rotten Regeneration:
-As per the ability guidelines, the number of targets this can hit should be no more than 5.
-This would only heal a single D-tier wound on the targets. Not all D-tier wounds.

Thanatos Gift: Creeper:
-Same cooldown/duration/sustained cost things mentioned above.
-This needs a movement speed.
-This needs mentioning of what it was created from. You just sort of have it appear from your sleeve but is it formed from your armpit hairs? Your skin? What is the life magic being applied to in order to create this bug?
-How does this creature transmit the information to you? It can't be psychic or anything.
-Also, how much information does it transfer? Does it just sense the presence of other life? Does it tell you exactly where and things are? What shape they are? If words are spoken? We need to know the extent of its information gathering abilities.

Bump~

Approved!

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[b]C - Teir[/b]

[b]Name:[/b] Thanatos Gift: Unholy Spirits
[b]Tier:[/b]C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Magoi - 10 magoi sustain cost
[b]Element:[/b] Life
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 20 Meters
[b]Duration:[/b] Two Posts
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] Three Posts
[b]Description:[/b]Upon Raising Mawth into the air, black mist began to swirl around his staff before giving off a purple flash. Once the flash is gone an shadowy figure rises from Kuro's shadow which appearing as a sinister, spectral figure robed in darkness. They have no visual features or appendages, except for their glowing red eyes and ghastly claws. The shadow is ten meters in Scale and deals C rank damage once every post and move at 15 m/s. The shadow acts on it's own will but protects Kuro as a first priority, so if he is attacked the spirit will change targets.

[b]D - Teir[/b]

[b]Name:[/b] Thanatos Gift: Roots of the Underworld
[b]Tier:[/b]D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi
[b]Element:[/b] Life
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] 10 Meters in Diameter ( AOE ) - 5 Targets in the AOE
[b]Duration:[/b] One post
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] two posts
[b]Description:[/b] Upon Raising Mawth into the air, purple mist swirl around his staff before giving off a purple flash. After the flash the plant life in the AOE will target 5 people and bind them as black roots emerge from the ground at 10 m/s. D teir strentgh is required to break free.

[b]Name:[/b] Thanatos Gift: Hell Canine
[b]Tier:[/b]D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi - 5 magoi sustain cost
[b]Element:[/b] Life
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] 10 meters
[b]Duration:[/b] Two posts
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] Three posts
[b]Description:[/b] With Mawth glowing purple, Kuro tapped the bottom of his staff on the ground, sending out a wave of purple light into the ground. By collecting microbes and minerals from the ground (and a little bit of kudos dead skin cells) a second later five creatures emerge from the ground, it appears as skinless, heavily muscled canines with fresh blood dripping from their bodies. As large dogs, they are indeed very powerful, being able to run 10 m/s constantly and deal D - teir damage. The dogs' heads have no apparent eyes or ears.

[b]Name:[/b] Thanatos Gift: Rotten Regeneration
[b]Tier:[/b]D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10
[b]Element:[/b] Life
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] 10 Meters in Diameter (AOE)
[b]Duration:[/b] one post
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] two posts
[b]Description:[/b] After stabbing the ground with his staff an pulse of purple light emits from his body to a ten meter radius. Once the light disappears those (up to five people) with one D - teir damage such as cuts, brusies, and minor trauma are healed including his summoned creatures.

[b]Name:[/b] Thanatos Gift: Creeper
[b]Tier:[/b]D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 magoi - 5 magoi sustain cost
[b]Element:[/b] Life
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] 10 Meters in Diameter (AOE)
[b]Duration:[/b] Two Posts
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] Three posts
[b]Description:[/b] As his staff glow a soft purple five large, cockroach-like insect with three pairs of legs and two long "antenna" from the back with what resembles a human face underneath its head with small wings on it's back crawling out of his sleeve from his dead skin cells. The creepers act as sentry's as they can relay information to Kuro via beating the area beneath it with its attenas which create soft thumping noise. Since they are all physically link one stays on his body so he can revive the message from the other creepers via the main creeper crawling up to his neck and the "faces" groans out the infomation in his ear. This is useful for alerting him of nearby enemies, infomation gathering, or knowing when someone is going to enter the room where he is studying. It's able to crawl over dry surfaces and fly at 10 m/s.